Fireblood
Since: Jan, 2001
Apr 29th 2015 at 7:32:52 PM
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Wasn't it a plot point that hers didn't show up in reflective surfaces at first, only when she's with The Man? They don't show up to herself until she's in the bar with the rest. I think this should be included.
Reality is that which, when you stop believing in it, doesn't go away.-Philip K. Dick
QuantumReality
Since: Mar, 2010
May 1st 2015 at 3:44:24 PM
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OK, I reworded the trope to make it clear that even if the character isn't aware of the wings, we the audience see them under certain conditions.
Fireblood
Since: Jan, 2001
May 1st 2015 at 6:17:17 PM
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Looks good.
Reality is that which, when you stop believing in it, doesn't go away.-Philip K. Dick
I'm going to tighten up "The Mirror Shows Your True Self", and use this:
"The five main characters of the series who apparently died, then awoke again, can be seen to have wings when they are viewed through a camera or are looking in a reflective surface. Vera's wings, however, also appear when she's confronting The Man face to face." (last sentence spoiler tagged)
If there's any problem with it, no sweat, happy to talk it out in here.
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