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I\'m listing the original entry and the replacement entry. The question is: does she have a FatalFlaw, and is it either of the two listed below? Even if it is either of the two listed below, both entries have write-up problems.
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I\\\'m listing the original entry and the replacement entry. The question is: does she have a FatalFlaw, and is it either of the two options listed below? Even if it is either of the two listed below, both entries have write-up problems.
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* FatalFlaw: Pride. Not \
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* FatalFlaw: Pride. Not \\\"fatal\\\" yet, but her pride does lead her to dangerous situations sometimes. She slowly suppresses this over time, though.
* FatalFlaw: Poor judgement. Labeling Ruby as a child dealing with people out of her league, suggesting to incarcerate Blake after her past with the White Fang is revealed and giving for sure that Jaune is wooing her out of greed, are all conclusions Weiss comes up with in mere seconds and with poor evidence, mostly first impressions. It goes as far to the point she got a crush on Neptune after talking with him for less than ten seconds.
* FatalFlaw: Poor judgement. Labeling Ruby as a child dealing with people out of her league, suggesting to incarcerate Blake after her past with the White Fang is revealed and giving for sure that Jaune is wooing her out of greed, are all conclusions Weiss comes up with in mere seconds and with poor evidence, mostly first impressions. It goes as far to the point she got a crush on Neptune after talking with him for less than ten seconds.
