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** Okay, you\'re right in the fact that his father and the nobles look down on him for being so pure, but that just makes his pureness just all the more sueish. After being raised in that sort of environment, there is no reason why Romeo should be so kind and selfless when no one else around him is. He doesn\'t see his mother \'\'that\'\' much, so she can\'t be his sole influence. As for being exiled to the mines, it\'s even worse; he\'s given an even \'\'greater\'\' chance to shine by treating his wards with utmost respect, eating/working with them, crying over Petruccio\'s death, carrying on his siblings wishes, etc. Sues, especially purity sues, warp the story and narrative so they come out shining like roses. There is no in-story reason for Romeo to be so utterly shining white, and yet he just \'\'is\'\'. That is what a purity sue is, right?
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Okay, you\\\'re right in the fact that his father and the nobles look down on him for being so pure, but that just makes his pureness just all the more sueish. After being raised in that sort of environment, there is no reason why Romeo should be so kind and selfless when no one else around him is. He doesn\\\'t see his mother \\\'\\\'that\\\'\\\' much, so she can\\\'t be his sole influence. As for being exiled to the mines, it\\\'s even worse; he\\\'s given an even \\\'\\\'greater\\\'\\\' chance to shine by treating his wards with utmost respect, eating/working with them, crying over Petruccio\\\'s death, carrying on his siblings wishes, etc. Sues, especially purity sues, warp the story and narrative so they come out shining like roses. There is no in-story reason for Romeo to be so utterly shining white, and yet he just \\\'\\\'is\\\'\\\'. That is what a purity sue is, right?
