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In this case, I don\'t think Elsa could be considered a Mary Sue. Her flaws are the driving point behind the movie, and they\'re shown repeatedly to be crippling and negative. They\'re not \'pretty\' flaws like clumsy or naive, either. But I think Belle could fit, in the same way the original three are: beautiful, flawless, special, etc.
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In this case, I don\\\'t think Elsa could be considered a Mary Sue. Her flaws are the driving point behind the movie, and they\\\'re shown repeatedly to be crippling and negative. They\\\'re not \\\'pretty\\\' flaws like clumsy or naive, either. But I think Belle could fit, in the same way the original three are: beautiful, flawless, special, etc.
EDIT: Reading over your example, I think it was needlessly vitriolic. I also don\\\'t think your entry actually makes a case for MarySue, just \\\'I don\\\'t like this character\\\'. What traits does she have that are actually MarySue-ish? I don\\\'t think, if you liked Elsa, you would have an issue with her being powerful, which is really the only quality you listed that would fit a Mary Sue.
As for Belle\\\'s, again, I think you expressed outright dislike instead of just making an example. And I wouldn\\\'t agree with your assessment for why she\\\'s a Sue.
EDIT: Reading over your example, I think it was needlessly vitriolic. I also don\\\'t think your entry actually makes a case for MarySue, just \\\'I don\\\'t like this character\\\'. What traits does she have that are actually MarySue-ish? I don\\\'t think, if you liked Elsa, you would have an issue with her being powerful, which is really the only quality you listed that would fit a Mary Sue.
As for Belle\\\'s, again, I think you expressed outright dislike instead of just making an example. And I wouldn\\\'t agree with your assessment for why she\\\'s a Sue.
