Changed line(s) 2 from:
n
* TrueCompanions: there are a number of moments in the film (and more on the cutting-room floor) that spend time just on {{character development}}. These were the only good parts of the movie.
to:
* TrueCompanions: there are a number of moments in the film that spend time just on {{character development}}.
[001]
Camacan
MOD
Changed line(s) 1 from:
n
We need relevant details: who are friends as close and as protective as family members? How is that built up and how does it play out in this work? See HowToWRiteAnExample.
to:
We need relevant details: who are friends as close and as protective as family members? How is that built up and how does it play out in this work? See HowToWriteAnExample.