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This character does seem like a magnificent bastard but remember to have the bastard not underestimate his hero. He should see the hero as a possible unexpected force in his plans and even use the hero if possible (which based on the hero you described should be relatively easy for the bastard). And as for establishing the character moment it would be better if he didn\'t act surprised or angry at his mooks failure. Instead you could have him with a slight smirk asking \
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This character does seem like a magnificent bastard but remember to have the bastard not underestimate his hero. He should see the hero as a possible unexpected force in his plans and even use the hero if possible (which based on the hero you described should be relatively easy for the bastard). And as for establishing the character moment it would be better if he didn\\\'t act surprised or angry at his mooks failure. Instead you could have him with a slight smirk asking \\\"Really?\\\" Showing that something unexpected happened but true to his name he will adapt and take advantage of his soon to be new piece.
