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n -As I noted, he\'s not truly heinous by the standards of the story, or even by Ironborn standards. He\'s presented in a somewhat positive light- he has a certain code of honor.
-I don\'t know how to address the terribleness. He\'s kind of played for laughs (for readers) in ADWD, and in-universe, he\'s not really hated by anyone. I mean like as a contrast, Euron is looked at by Ironborn as a monster- Vic is an ok guy by Ironborn standards
-Vic is not devoid of altruistic qualities. He loathes slavery, and will free slaves when he can (granted, to make them thralls, but still...) He doesn\'t show any regret for his crimes, but that\'s because he\'s ObliviouslyEvil.
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*As I noted, he\\\'s not truly heinous by the standards of the story, or even by Ironborn standards. He\\\'s presented in a somewhat positive light- he has a certain code of honor.
*I don\\\'t know how to address the terribleness. He\\\'s kind of played for laughs (for readers) in ADWD, and in-universe, he\\\'s not really hated by anyone. I mean like as a contrast, Euron is looked at by Ironborn as a monster- Vic is an ok guy by Ironborn standards
*Vic is not devoid of altruistic qualities. He loathes slavery, and will free slaves when he can (granted, to make them thralls, but still...) He doesn\\\'t show any regret for his crimes, but that\\\'s because he\\\'s ObliviouslyEvil.
*I don\\\'t know how to address the terribleness. He\\\'s kind of played for laughs (for readers) in ADWD, and in-universe, he\\\'s not really hated by anyone. I mean like as a contrast, Euron is looked at by Ironborn as a monster- Vic is an ok guy by Ironborn standards
*Vic is not devoid of altruistic qualities. He loathes slavery, and will free slaves when he can (granted, to make them thralls, but still...) He doesn\\\'t show any regret for his crimes, but that\\\'s because he\\\'s ObliviouslyEvil.
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•The character is truly heinous by the standards of the story, which makes no attempt to present them in a positive light.
•The character\'s terribleness is played seriously at all times, evoking fear, revulsion and/or hatred from the other characters in the story.
•They are completely devoid of altruistic qualities. They show no regret for their crimes.
•The character\'s terribleness is played seriously at all times, evoking fear, revulsion and/or hatred from the other characters in the story.
•They are completely devoid of altruistic qualities. They show no regret for their crimes.
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*The character is truly heinous by the standards of the story, which makes no attempt to present them in a positive light.
*The character\\\'s terribleness is played seriously at all times, evoking fear, revulsion and/or hatred from the other characters in the story.
*They are completely devoid of altruistic qualities. They show no regret for their crimes.
*The character\\\'s terribleness is played seriously at all times, evoking fear, revulsion and/or hatred from the other characters in the story.
*They are completely devoid of altruistic qualities. They show no regret for their crimes.
