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AnonymousMcCartneyfan
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I think we need to expand on \
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I think we need to expand on \\\"Knight of the Forest\\\" a little. We have RougeAnglesOfSatin, but that comes in SoBadItsGood fics as well. We have CharacterDerailment, but no details of what sort, other than swearing. And we have \\\"surprise sex\\\" in a fic that is on a site for X-rated fic, where sex of \\\'\\\'some\\\'\\\' sort is expected. There had better be other reasons.
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How can you take artistic lisence regarding a fictional thing?
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BUT the page talks about trolls exclusivly, are you expecting the biology on Alternia to be completly the same as ours?
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BUT the page talks about trolls exclusivly, are you expecting the biology on Alternia to be completly the same as ours?
(and thanks for the grammar ifx)
