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A lot of the writing for Kuzuryuu\'s section seems... negatively biased, to put it gently. At best, a lot of it is YMMV (for instance, calling Hiyoko the Only Sane Woman because she was the only one who wouldn\'t forgive Fuyuhiko after he returned from the hospital, when that isn\'t how the game presents her actions). I\'d like to rewrite these entries, but there are several, and it might be too much of a change to make without asking. I don\'t want to delete any listed tropes, but I do think the wording needs to be rewritten to sound more objective. Would this be okay?
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A lot of the writing for Kuzuryuu\\\'s section seems... negatively biased, to put it gently. At best, a lot of it is YMMV (for instance, calling Saionji the Only Sane Woman because she was the only one who wouldn\\\'t forgive Kuzuryuu after he returned from the hospital, when that isn\\\'t how the game presents her actions). I\\\'d like to rewrite these entries, but there are several, and it might be too much of a change to make without asking. I don\\\'t want to delete any listed tropes, but I do think the wording needs to be rewritten to sound more objective. Would this be okay?
