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Makarov\\\'s entry reads that he \\\"shot Pvt. Joseph Allen in the head so that the massacre can be pinned on the CIA\\\"; I feel the need to point out that Allen was a Pfc (Private First Class), a rank different than Pvt, and that at the time, Allen was no longer a Pfc as he had already joined the 141. More importantly, readers whom haven\\\'t played [=MW2=] will be confused as to the presence of an American private (or bringing up the CIA, for that matter), so I would like to suggest rewriting the excerpt. Additionally, Makarov did so to pin the massacre on America, not just the CIA, and it\\\'s arguable whether Allen was shot in the head or the chest; if Allen were shot in the head, the game would\\\'ve likely blacked out, as it does whenever a playable character is shot in the head and killed.
