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Harriet and Emerald are similar characters in a sense: they spend the whole the Atlas Arc in a state of denial about their feelings and their situation. There are cracks along the way (and doubling-down \'\'is\'\' a type of crack) until someone they care about sacrifices their life just to save them, and that completely throws them. Emerald\'s moment came just early enough for her to be useful to the heroes in the final conflict of the volume, but still not early enough for her to address certain things. It\'s clear that\'ll be ongoing. Harriet\'s occurs in the actual finale, meaning that everything will have to be addressed in later volumes.
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Harriet and Emerald are similar characters in a sense: they spend the whole the Atlas Arc in a state of denial about their feelings and their situation. There are cracks along the way (and doubling-down \\\'\\\'is\\\'\\\' a type of crack) until someone they care about sacrifices their life just to save them, and that completely throws them. Emerald\\\'s moment came just early enough for her to be useful to the heroes in the final conflict of the volume, but still not early enough for her to address certain things. It\\\'s clear that\\\'ll be ongoing. Harriet\\\'s occurs in the actual finale, meaning that everything will have to be addressed in later volumes. It\\\'s just as clear that it\\\'ll be ongoing.
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I very much doubt the situation will be AuthorsSavingThrow, given that it\'s a choice to leave it for the finale. And having someone react with grief to a friend\'s death doesn\'t automatically make them \'sympathetic\' or mean that the creators want the audience to switch from criticising a character to siding with them and embracing them wholeheartedly.
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I very much doubt the situation will be AuthorsSavingThrow, given that it\\\'s a choice to leave it for the finale. And having someone react with grief to a friend\\\'s death doesn\\\'t automatically make them \\\'sympathetic\\\' or mean that the creators want the audience to switch from criticising a character to siding with them and embracing them wholeheartedly. It\\\'s the start of something for her, not the end.
