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SatoshiBakura
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I personally don’t mind RootingForTheEmpire.
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I personally don’t mind a RootingForTheEmpire entry, but the entry itself tries to paint Hayward as completely in the right when he’s not.
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1: But, he doesn’t lack screen time? He has enough to get his character across well. 10 minutes in a fourty minute episode is a lot of screen time.
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1: But, he doesn’t lack screen time? He has enough to get his character across well. 10 minutes in a forty minute episode is a lot of screen time.
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1: But, he doesn’t lack screen time? He has enough to get his character across well. 10 minutes in a fourth minute episode is a lot of screen time.
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1: But, he doesn’t lack screen time? He has enough to get his character across well. 10 minutes in a fourty minute episode is a lot of screen time.
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2: Narm has to be unintentionally funny. Your example is not unintentionally funny, it’s just a moment that you don’t like.
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2: Narm has to be unintentionally funny in a cheesy way. Your example is not unintentionally funny or cheesy, it’s just a moment that you don’t like.
