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The structure of the page gets confusing. The intro is all about the French Foreign Legion, but the examples alternate between fictional counterparts of the Legion and fictional \
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The structure of the page gets confusing. The intro is all about the French Foreign Legion, but the examples alternate between fictional counterparts of the Legion and fictional \\\"legions of lost souls\\\" like the Night\\\'s Watch from the Song of Ice and Fire series.
It wouldn\\\'t have been that bad, except that if you read the introduction and then went into video games, for example, you might get the impression that the Grey Wardens from Dragon Age were an expy of the Foreign Legion and not an example of a Legion of Lost Souls.
I would recommend splitting off the Foreign Legion stuff into its own Useful Notes page, linked under \\\"Real Life,\\\" and then actually describe the Legion of Lost Souls itself in the intro.
It wouldn\\\'t have been that bad, except that if you read the introduction and then went into video games, for example, you might get the impression that the Grey Wardens from Dragon Age were an expy of the Foreign Legion and not an example of a Legion of Lost Souls.
I would recommend splitting off the Foreign Legion stuff into its own Useful Notes page, linked under \\\"Real Life,\\\" and then actually describe the Legion of Lost Souls itself in the intro.
