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Thanks for all the updates @/RecklessMoronNetwork and @/Lirodon!
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Thanks for all the updates @/RecklessMoronNetwork and @/Lirodon !
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Regarding what the AuthorsSavingThrow trope looks for, the examples we know about for certain are Ruby\'s character development from passive hero to active leader and addressing her interest in, knowledge of, and use of the silver eyes. They\'ve also delved into a few of the big questions surrounding Ozpin and Salem. I\'m not sure the proof-reading of drafts is relevant to the trope, but if there\'re any other confirmed changes that the authors made in response to the V5 criticism, I\'d say add it in. Possibly how Adam\'s been treated and giving Sienna a role in the Character Short in response to her achieving OneSceneWonder status?
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Regarding what the AuthorsSavingThrow trope looks for, the examples we know about for certain are Ruby\\\'s character development from passive hero to active leader and addressing her interest in, knowledge of, and use of the silver eyes. They\\\'ve also delved into a few of the big questions surrounding Ozpin and Salem. I\\\'m not sure the proof-reading of drafts is relevant to the trope, but if there\\\'re any other confirmed changes to the story that the authors made in response to the V5 criticism, I\\\'d say add it in. Possibly how Adam\\\'s been treated and giving Sienna a role in the Character Short in response to her achieving OneSceneWonder status?
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Regarding what the AuthorsSavingThrow trope looks for, the examples we know about for certain are Ruby\'s character development from passive hero to active leader and addressing her interest in, knowledge of, and use of the silver eyes. They\'ve also delved into a few of the big questions surrounding Ozpin and Salem. I\'m not sure the proof-reading of drafts is relevant to the trope, but if there\'re any other confirmed changes that the authors made in response to the V5 criticism, I\'d say add it in. Possibly how Adam\'s been treated and giving Sienna a role in the Character Short in response to her achieving EnsembleDarkhorse status?
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Regarding what the AuthorsSavingThrow trope looks for, the examples we know about for certain are Ruby\\\'s character development from passive hero to active leader and addressing her interest in, knowledge of, and use of the silver eyes. They\\\'ve also delved into a few of the big questions surrounding Ozpin and Salem. I\\\'m not sure the proof-reading of drafts is relevant to the trope, but if there\\\'re any other confirmed changes that the authors made in response to the V5 criticism, I\\\'d say add it in. Possibly how Adam\\\'s been treated and giving Sienna a role in the Character Short in response to her achieving OneSceneWonder status?
