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Blake\'s is still unintetionally unsimpathetyc because I doubt the writers wanted Blake to be hated, which resulted from (based on what I read/heard) her excessively mean behaviour and the fact that she turned out to have a \
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Blake\\\'s is still unintetionally unsimpathetyc because I doubt the writers wanted Blake to be hated, which resulted from (based on what I read/heard) her excessively mean behaviour and the fact that she turned out to have a \\\"royal background\\\", making her seems more like a wangsty brat. It needs just a less \\\"aggressive\\\" rewrite
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Ruby\'s entry seems fine, though maybe the last paragraph should mention how most fans feel she needs more screentime. The last two volume in particular barely gave her a role ( not even as lens since she didn\'t appear in most scenes)
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Ruby\\\'s entry seems fine, though should give the mention how the last two volume in particular barely gave her a role ( not even as lens since she didn\\\'t appear in most scenes)
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Blake\'s is still unintetionally unsimpathetyc because I doubt the writers wanted Blake to be hated, which resulted from (based on what I read/heard) her excessively mean behaviour and the fact that she turned out to have a \
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Blake\\\'s is still unintetionally unsimpathetyc because I doubt the writers wanted Blake to be hated, which resulted from (based on what I read/heard) her excessively mean behaviour and the fact that she turned out to have a \\\"royal background\\\", making her seems more like a wangsty brat. It needs just a less \\\"aggressive\\\" rewrite
