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The entry states the scene is a parody of the Cliffhanger, but doesn't explain why it's a parody or how it comes across as a parody. It also potholes two tropes without explaining how those two tropes apply to the scene. It also potholes BolivianArmyEnding in a ZCE way, forcing the reader to know what that trope is off the top of their head, or visit that trope page to learn what it is.
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The entry states the scene is a parody of the {{Cliffhanger}} trope, but doesn\'t explain why it\'s a parody or how it comes across as a parody. It also potholes two tropes without explaining how those two tropes apply to the scene. It also potholes BolivianArmyEnding in a ZCE way, forcing the reader to know what that trope is off the top of their head, or visit that trope page to learn what it is.
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The entry states the scene is a parody, but doesn't explain why it's a parody. It also potholes two tropes without explaining how those two tropes apply to the scene. It also potholes BolivianArmyEnding in a ZCE way, forcing the reader to know what that trope is off the top of their head, or visit that trope page to learn what it is.
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The entry states the scene is a parody of the Cliffhanger, but doesn\'t explain why it\'s a parody or how it comes across as a parody. It also potholes two tropes without explaining how those two tropes apply to the scene. It also potholes BolivianArmyEnding in a ZCE way, forcing the reader to know what that trope is off the top of their head, or visit that trope page to learn what it is.
