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Besides, ContinuitySnarl is for much bigger problems within a work with several different continuities. This doesn\'t apply here; it would be at worst a SeriesContinuityError in the case it actually stood against scrutiny.
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In contrast, the Second Death Star had most of those hindrances removed and benefited from the experience of building the prototype that was the First, explaining why it took much less time despite being bigger.
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In contrast, the Second Death Star had none of those funding hindrances and benefited from the experience of building the prototype that was the First, removing these many roadblocks and explaining why it took much less time despite being bigger.
