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A good split would be when the trainers were introduced for each generation, like what's seen [[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_Trainer here]].
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A good split would be when the trainers were introduced for each generation, like what\'s seen [[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Pokémon_Trainer here]].
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an extremely deep ravine this causes all of them to be extremely horrified and then their man friend had filled on the cliff and accidentally injure himself, and they help them back upit's just screaming as it does is just leaving out here they help them back up .
Lena then comes back to see what it happen curious about what was going on and then she sees her friends did this causes her to believe that the boy that killed her friends off she starts taking off running the other boys try catching up with her trying to convince her it was an accident she was running so fast that she said she didn't know that she was running directly for a bear trap and then the other boys run off to see exactly what happened and they see the bear trap ,and you start panicking n Lena starts screaming bloody murder in a blood-curdling manner beyond belief almost as if the actor stopped acting unintentionally and the boy was so scared of what to do that they have that they had no choice but to leave her there to die and wow Walter it was ran and told him to follow and they were just watching the last thing to say before they started running running following him running behind them was Lena's necklace going as she screamed that she was going to to get them and then the other one then start running after Terry, and the last thing we be in here before is Lena crying and screaming and the screen Fades to Black and then she screams
Lena then comes back to see what it happen curious about what was going on and then she sees her friends did this causes her to believe that the boy that killed her friends off she starts taking off running the other boys try catching up with her trying to convince her it was an accident she was running so fast that she said she didn't know that she was running directly for a bear trap and then the other boys run off to see exactly what happened and they see the bear trap ,and you start panicking n Lena starts screaming bloody murder in a blood-curdling manner beyond belief almost as if the actor stopped acting unintentionally and the boy was so scared of what to do that they have that they had no choice but to leave her there to die and wow Walter it was ran and told him to follow and they were just watching the last thing to say before they started running running following him running behind them was Lena's necklace going as she screamed that she was going to to get them and then the other one then start running after Terry, and the last thing we be in here before is Lena crying and screaming and the screen Fades to Black and then she screams
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an extremely deep ravine this causes all of them to be extremely horrified and then their man friend had filled on the cliff and accidentally injure himself, and they help them back upit\'s just screaming as it does is just leaving out here they help them back up .
Lena then comes back to see what it happen curious about what was going on and then she sees her friends did this causes her to believe that the boys killed her friends off.
She starts taking off running; the other boys try catching up with her trying to convince her it was an accident;
only to no avail.
She was running so fast that she said she didn\'t notice that she was running directly towards a bear trap.
Lena and sets foot first into the bear trap,and screams bloody murder.
Then, the other boys run to see exactly What \'s happened and when they saw the bear trap ,and they started panicking,as Lena was screaming bloody murder in a blood-curdling manner beyond belief, almost as if it was the end for her.
unintentionally....
and the boys were so scared,and could barely think of what to do they have that they had no choice but to leave her there to die. and wow Walter it was ran and told him to follow and they were just watching the last thing to see (the glowing neckless, lena bad) before they started running running following him running.
Lena was being left behind by them,as she screamed that she was going to to get them and then the last kid,starts running after Terry, and the last thing we be in here before is Lena crying and screaming and the screen Fades to Black and then she screams \"we\'ll get you\",you one more time as the screen Cuts back to her screaming face ,and then SmashToBlack again and then it cuts to \'several years later\'
Lena then comes back to see what it happen curious about what was going on and then she sees her friends did this causes her to believe that the boys killed her friends off.
She starts taking off running; the other boys try catching up with her trying to convince her it was an accident;
only to no avail.
She was running so fast that she said she didn\'t notice that she was running directly towards a bear trap.
Lena and sets foot first into the bear trap,and screams bloody murder.
Then, the other boys run to see exactly What \'s happened and when they saw the bear trap ,and they started panicking,as Lena was screaming bloody murder in a blood-curdling manner beyond belief, almost as if it was the end for her.
unintentionally....
and the boys were so scared,and could barely think of what to do they have that they had no choice but to leave her there to die. and wow Walter it was ran and told him to follow and they were just watching the last thing to see (the glowing neckless, lena bad) before they started running running following him running.
Lena was being left behind by them,as she screamed that she was going to to get them and then the last kid,starts running after Terry, and the last thing we be in here before is Lena crying and screaming and the screen Fades to Black and then she screams \"we\'ll get you\",you one more time as the screen Cuts back to her screaming face ,and then SmashToBlack again and then it cuts to \'several years later\'
