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* CreatorsPest: Great Pikmin Fan/[=NeedsMoreDeepWater=] seriously hates ParodyStu Carl Stevens, considering him a very dated joke on Charlie Sheen that had long since lost relevancy, when Water had since decided he wanted his writing to be more timeless. Water also felt that him trying to make Carl intentionally obnoxious had GoneHorriblyRight, creating a character that actively sucks out the enjoyment of the story thanks to his spotlight hogging and terrible pervy personality. It's telling that despite being one of the main characters of the original ''Ulumate'', ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'' demotes him from main character and instead just has him get killed off after only saying two sentences, which was Pip's exact fate in the original in a form of meta karma.
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* CreatorsPest: Great Pikmin Fan/[=NeedsMoreDeepWater=] seriously hates ParodyStu Carl Stevens, considering him a very dated joke on Charlie Sheen that had long since lost relevancy, when Water had since decided he wanted his writing to be more timeless. Water also felt that him trying to make Carl intentionally obnoxious had GoneHorriblyRight, creating a character that actively sucks out the enjoyment of the story thanks to his spotlight hogging and terrible pervy personality. It's telling that despite being one of the main characters of the original ''Ulumate'', ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'' demotes him from main character and instead just has him get killed off after only saying two sentences, which was Pip's exact fate in the original in a form of meta karma. It is also unsurprising that the following chapter brings him back as a familiar just to portray him as a pathetic, weak coward [[spoiler:and having him die ''again'' from Jan's holy nuke attack]].
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* CreatorsPest: Great Pikmin Fan/[=NeedsMoreDeepWater=] seriously hates ParodyStu Carl Stevens, considering him a very dated joke on Charlie Sheen that had long since lost relevancy, when Water had since decided he wanted his writing to be more timeless. Water also felt that him trying to make Carl intentionally obnoxious had GoneHorriblyRight, creating a character that actively sucks out the enjoyment of the story thanks to his spotlight hogging and terrible pervy personality. It's telling that despite being one of the main characters of the original ''Ulumate'', ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'' is set to remove him from main character status and rework the story so that he is just not as present as he was before.
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* CreatorsPest: Great Pikmin Fan/[=NeedsMoreDeepWater=] seriously hates ParodyStu Carl Stevens, considering him a very dated joke on Charlie Sheen that had long since lost relevancy, when Water had since decided he wanted his writing to be more timeless. Water also felt that him trying to make Carl intentionally obnoxious had GoneHorriblyRight, creating a character that actively sucks out the enjoyment of the story thanks to his spotlight hogging and terrible pervy personality. It's telling that despite being one of the main characters of the original ''Ulumate'', ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'' is set to remove demotes him from main character status and rework the story so that he is instead just not as present as he has him get killed off after only saying two sentences, which was before.Pip's exact fate in the original in a form of meta karma.
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I already planned what I want to do with Carl but since it's not published (or written) yet I can't just plop it on the Trivia page per the unreleased works policy. Wait for Chapter 3.
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* CreatorsPest: Great Pikmin Fan/[=NeedsMoreDeepWater=] seriously hates ParodyStu Carl Stevens, considering him a very dated joke on Charlie Sheen that had long since lost relevancy, when Water had since decided he wanted his writing to be more timeless. Water also felt that him trying to make Carl intentionally obnoxious had GoneHorriblyRight, creating a character that actively sucks out the enjoyment of the story thanks to his spotlight hogging and terrible pervy personality. It's telling that despite being one of the main characters of the original ''Ulumate'', ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'' is set to remove him from main character status and rework the story so that he is just not as present as he was before.
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* ActorAllusion: As close as this can get. Despite sounding like Chuck Norris, Carl is otherwise a blatant takeoff of Creator/CharlieSheen. The sixth chapter is called [[Film/HotShotsPartDeux "Invashon Part Deux,"]] a possible nod to a movie Sheen starred in.
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Word Of God here: This was unintentional, I just heard of some general \"Deux\" thing and thought that would be fitting, but I\'m making it retroactively intentional if that makes any sense.
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* ActorAllusion: As close as this can get. Despite sounding like Chuck Norris, Carl is otherwise a blatant takeoff of Creator/CharlieSheen. The sixth chapter is called [[Film/HotShotsPartDeux "Invashon Part Deux,"]] a possible nod to a movie Sheen starred in.
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* DevelopmentGag: (Giant Mutaint) Homer's rampage of New York is based on a SBIG fic idea where Homer Simpson gets taken over by nuclear waste and becomes an evil giant. WordOfGod says he's not sure whether or not to go with the idea, especially since this pseudo crossover occured.
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* DevelopmentGag: (Giant Mutaint) Mutant) Homer's rampage of New York is based on a SBIG fic idea where Homer Simpson gets taken over by nuclear waste and becomes an evil giant. WordOfGod says he's not sure whether or not to go with the idea, especially since this pseudo crossover occured.
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Bleck. Back during the Great Typo Cleanup, for one of the posts I was thinking \"Okay, this is going to be an important one. I should get to updating some trope pages about it ASAP and even give a link to it.\" I can\'t quite remember which was it was. 154, where I talk about future SBIGlets? All I know is that it was past 100.
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* DevelopmentGag: (Giant Mutaint) Homer's rampage of New York is based on a SBIG fic idea where Homer Simpson gets taken over by nuclear waste and becomes an evil giant. WordOfGod says he's not sure whether or not to go with the idea, especially since this pseudo crossover occured.
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Aaaaand I realize that I forgot to title the day 59 post as such.
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** Going to ''Dawn'', [[http://great-pikmin-fan.tumblr.com/post/98369872707/day-58 Fan stated]] that there was going to be a part where Kamina was working at [[VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys Freddy Fazbear's Pizza]], running out of power a few minutes before 6 AM, and having to fight Freddy in hand-to-hand combat. He would get fired for either tampering with Freddy, or [[NotWhatItLooksLike "trying to hump him" based on what it looked like.]] That same post also reveals:
** [[spoiler:Alucard's familiars (Blondula, the elemental four, etc) were to make an appearance in the final chapter one last time before being blown up by Jan in HUC proper, but the way it actually turned out heavily discouraged it]].
** [[spoiler:Kaitana]] would have died at some point.
** Cortana wasn't planned to be added until shortly before ending the third chapter (or, at least GPF called her a "split-second addition"), and she was planned to be out of commission longer in chapter 5.
** Everyone was going to inexplicably like the in-universe CreatorsPet Itachi, except Kamina, who would serve as the OnlySaneMan for the chapter. But he thought that would be crossing into the kind of comedy he doesn't like writing, so he toned down Itachi's ability and actually made it an ability, so by the end there's still three additional people who don't like him.
** [[spoiler:Alucard's familiars (Blondula, the elemental four, etc) were to make an appearance in the final chapter one last time before being blown up by Jan in HUC proper, but the way it actually turned out heavily discouraged it]].
** [[spoiler:Kaitana]] would have died at some point.
** Cortana wasn't planned to be added until shortly before ending the third chapter (or, at least GPF called her a "split-second addition"), and she was planned to be out of commission longer in chapter 5.
** Everyone was going to inexplicably like the in-universe CreatorsPet Itachi, except Kamina, who would serve as the OnlySaneMan for the chapter. But he thought that would be crossing into the kind of comedy he doesn't like writing, so he toned down Itachi's ability and actually made it an ability, so by the end there's still three additional people who don't like him.
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In hindsight this ending would have also killed HHC, CSU, and just about any other planned spinoff outside of maybe Hecksing the Dawn. (Since they\'ll all take themselves too \"seriously\" for this ending to make sense in their eventual \'verse.) Add this with my recent hatred towards overly meta humor, and I now think that cutting the ending on
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** The Millennium were originally not going to be called "Millennium" in this fic, just "The Nazis." Oddly, they're rarely refered to as Nazis.
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** The Millennium were originally not going to be called "Millennium" in this fic, just "The Nazis." Oddly, they're rarely refered to as Nazis.Nazis.
** At some point, the ending was considered to be [[GainaxEnding a Gainax one]]. Directly following the ''actual'' ending, [[spoiler:Pip comes out of nowhere, reveals both that he survived Carl's spaceship [[MemeticBadass BECAUSE HE'S PIP, DAMMIT]] and that he's part of a group that fights Mary Sues and Gary Stues. Carl implies that Pip's death was not an accident, then he morphs into Charlie Sheen himself, Pip also exposes that his eyepatch was covering a Sharingan, and the two fight until Carl [[Series/TwoAndAHalfMen is killed by a train]]. Following this, the story turns into something with more legitamate writing, and Rip and Captain instantly turn back evil again. However, the author decided to just end the story at everyone laughing at Hecksing naked]].
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** At some point, the ending was considered to be [[GainaxEnding a Gainax one]]. Directly following the ''actual'' ending, [[spoiler:Pip comes out of nowhere, reveals both that he survived Carl's spaceship [[MemeticBadass BECAUSE HE'S PIP, DAMMIT]] and that he's part of a group that fights Mary Sues and Gary Stues. Carl implies that Pip's death was not an accident, then he morphs into Charlie Sheen himself, Pip also exposes that his eyepatch was covering a Sharingan, and the two fight until Carl [[Series/TwoAndAHalfMen is killed by a train]]. Following this, the story turns into something with more legitamate writing, and Rip and Captain instantly turn back evil again. However, the author decided to just end the story at everyone laughing at Hecksing naked]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Several details have changed, ranging from small scenes to entire character deaths/sparings. And yet, the base of the plot basically stayed the same from before the fic started to after it ended.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Several details have changed, ranging from small scenes to entire character deaths/sparings. And yet, the base of the plot basically stayed the same from before the fic started to after it ended. To name some specifics:
** The author had planned on [[spoiler:actually sparing Zorin until the end of the fan fic. Then he planned on having Seras drink her blood and summon her as a familiar in the final chapter. A deleted scene of her role in the battle was even revealed in said chapter. Neither of these happened, and when she died, she stayed dead. A brief comment from the Captain hand-waved that the Millennium destroyed her body as she died close to their headquarters and they didn't want her to be absorbed by any of Hecksing's forces.]]
** The Millennium were originally not going to be called "Millennium" in this fic, just "The Nazis." Oddly, they're rarely refered to as Nazis.
** The author had planned on [[spoiler:actually sparing Zorin until the end of the fan fic. Then he planned on having Seras drink her blood and summon her as a familiar in the final chapter. A deleted scene of her role in the battle was even revealed in said chapter. Neither of these happened, and when she died, she stayed dead. A brief comment from the Captain hand-waved that the Millennium destroyed her body as she died close to their headquarters and they didn't want her to be absorbed by any of Hecksing's forces.]]
** The Millennium were originally not going to be called "Millennium" in this fic, just "The Nazis." Oddly, they're rarely refered to as Nazis.
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So this now means that all of the SBIGfics with their own pages also have their own Trivia page. And YMMV page, I believe.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Several details have changed, ranging from small scenes to entire character deaths/sparings. And yet, the base of the plot basically stayed the same from before the fic started to after it ended.
