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So there's Fallout: Equestria. Then there's more Fallout: Equestria stuff. Fanart, fan videos and animations, comics, various adaptations, but most prominent are the numerous spinoffs for the thing. I've touched on a couple of them, mainly Pink Eyes and Murky Number Seven, the latter of which I am very fond of.

But today we are here to talk about Project Horizons, one of the biggest, the most famous, and probably the most contentious of the spinoffs. This thing was actually going strong while the original was still being written, and now it's entered its own final act.

I am currently on chapter 4, and I'm gonna be blogging these first few chapters on memory.

In any case, we're quickly introduced to Blackjack, a security mare in Stable 99. She's kind of a fuck-up. She is very ungraceful in trying to hit on Midnight, another mare in the stable.

Blimey, this fic throws a bunch of names at me. Blackjack, Deus, Midnight, Daisy, Gin Rummy, Duct Tape, the Overmare… I'm probably missing some. But it gives out a lot of names and so one has to sort out who's who, who's important, and who's gay. But the rundown is Blackjack is the protagonist, Gin Rummy is her mom, Midnight is some other mare, Daisy is a cunt, the Overmare is basically Joffrey from Game of Thrones, and Duct Tape is dead as of the start of the story. That helps sort things out.

So we're introduced to Blackjack and her general affairs in the stable and her interactions with the other ponies. And a bit where she gets hoofcuffs slapped on her, to foreshadow her role as a sub when she hooks up with Glory in their BDSM relationship. Fuck I'm going to be in for a long story…

So Stable 99 has the male ponies being basically kept as inventory stock for sex. There are twenty-one earth pony stallions and twenty-one unicorn stallions on breeding duties, with the foals not part of the rotation. Once one of the colts comes of age they're added as the new P-1 or U-1 and the others go up a bump. After 21 they're euthanized. The current P-21 is slated to be "retired," and Blackjack has to find him. In the meantime there's some stuff about how Duct Tape was killed in a freak accident. I forget the exact ordering of things.

There's also a deal with Blackjack interacting with her mother, and a bit about her insecurity about living up to her mother's example, as her mother is head of security. It seems like Fallout: Equestria fics kinda have a thing where they have to touch on the protagonist's mother. The original briefly touched on the distant and uncomfortable relationship between Littlepip and her mother, Murky really really misses his mom and wants to find her once he gets his freedom, and the entire plot of Pink Eyes is Puppysmiles looking for his mom.

This chapter is fairly long, and I'm just going by the revised version, not the original. It does a really good job of introducing us to Blackjack and her life. It really helps us get a feel for her as a character and lets us get to know her before the plot proper starts to kick off. This was something the original could've used, I think. It invited us to take a seat in one room but then kicked us out the door to the next room without letting us sit down. Granted, I think this chapter is certainly a fair bit longer than the original's, so…

There's also some stuff about tensions between the ponies in the stable. The Overmare is paranoid that someone is gonna usurp her. The other mares think she's gone nuts. Blackjack is put in the uncomfortable position of not really understanding what's going on and yet being in the middle of it, as she finds a suspicious reception when she sits down with her card-buddies.

Anyway, she goes and finds P-21 in drag. Daisy and some other mare come over and proceed to try to beat him to death, before Blackjack intervenes and takes him to a holding cell. The Overmare is extremely happy to see him. The Overmare then tosses Blackjack into the cell with him in her office, where she listens to some files. She hears some stuff with Duct Tape talking to P-21, and she mentions that they might be able to leave the stable and get married.

If you've guessed that the Overmare had Duct Tape bumped off over P-21, then whoopee for you.

Anyway, Blackjack finds some strange file in the computer, and both ponies manage to escape from the Overmare's office.

So it turns out that the Overmare was expecting some folks from Stable-Tec, opened the door, aaaaand now there are raiders. They murder a stallion in front of her, and then there's action scenes. Blackjack shoots them, there's gore, aaaaaand she angsts about it. Oh boy, here we go again.

So there's general confusion, there's a bad guy who says "Cunt" every other sentence, Blackjack witnesses the Overmare being raped, and it's also indicated that Daisy was raped, too.

I was considering doing this whole liveblog in Yes-Man style, but I decided against that because that joke would've gotten old fast. If I went through with that, however, I would say this.

You know, I really, reeeeally liked Fallout: Equestria, but I just always had this teenie-tiny niggling thought in my head that maybe, juuuust maybe the story could use a little more rape. Just a little.

So they realize that Deus and the raiders are after the mysterious file, and Blackjack decides she's gonna take it and run away in the hopes that it makes the raiders come after her. So the chapter ends with her and P-21 running from stable and, more specifically, from Deus.

All in all, this is basically kinda shaping up to be more Fallout: Equestria. Since this was the first really big spinoff, it isn't a surprise that this character has a lot in common with Littlepip. She's a mare from a stable. She's a unicorn. She's got a thing with her mom. She's not heterosexual. She shoots things and angsts. And if you thought the original had too much gore and rape as it was, well, you're in for a heaping helping of ha ha fuck you.

But overall, I actually liked this. It does a good job of introducing us to Blackjack and P-21, and I do like them both a lot as characters. I also like how this setup means that Blackjack is going to immediately have a companion from the outside, whereas Littlepip didn't meet up with Calamity until chapter 5. It all makes me feel like Blackjack is someone I'm acquainted with, and I'm interested in what she'll do next and how she'll react to what's coming ahead.

Anyway, let's see how this trainride goes!

Comments

CCPrime Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 25th 2014 at 5:21:08 PM
Oh, boy, what a treat! More of the never-ending-blood-rape-and-angst train, with commentary from the one dude who can make it all worthwhile! I look forward to seeing more of your impressions of this behemoth. Trust me, you might like it now, but you won't after it starts spiraling into a never-ending, meandering, plotless abyss.
IcyShake Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 26th 2014 at 4:12:23 PM
Let's see, since you were listing them out, names thrown out also included Scotch Tape, Marmalade, Rivets, and Textbook. I bet I'm missing some, too.

Largely feel the same way you seem to about the chapter.

I hope you enjoy the read.

CC Prime: I can agree with you on "never-ending," "meandering," and "abyss," but "plotless"? Really?

On that note, let me express my hope that, as much as I love it, I won't be this story's "Serephem."
Unknownlight Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 25th 2014 at 9:12:19 PM
"There are twenty-one earth pony stallions and twenty-one unicorn stallions on breeding duties"

Twenty, not twenty-one. Twenty-one means you're dead.

Man oh man, Project Horizons. I could say a lot about Project Horizons. It's like a hearty, tasty, beef stew that screams in agony every time you take a bite. And not just a single bowl of the stuff, no, more like an entire swimming pool.

I'm eager see you read more.
IcyShake Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 26th 2014 at 6:23:10 PM
I forgot to say this before: on the mother issue, a few days ago it occurred to me that I don't remember anything about Littlepip's dad. Was he dead or something? Just seemed weird to me that her mom was a whole thing, but her dad was a nonentity. Of course, we know why Blackjack's doesn't much figure in.
Pannic Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 26th 2014 at 7:22:01 PM
I don't think Littlepip's dad is mentioned. Either he died or her mom was just so promiscuous she didn't know who it was.
Seraphem Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 27th 2014 at 6:58:19 AM
Was pretty much implied that her mom was just such a drunk, she had no clue who it was.

As to the chapter. Short version, right from the start we see exactly what it is that makes me loathe PH so much. Retconning and twisting aspects of the original, simply to make things as dark, messed up, cynical, and brutal as possible.

The entire concept for Stable 99 and how it is is hideous and revolting, and the way it got there is so contrived and misses the entire point of what Stables were. Turing them in Vaults. Which is one of the things I most hate about any fic doing that. The Stables, were the complete antithesis of the Vaults. That fact was one of the greatest parts of FOE to me.

Yes I could see an experiment like the one 99 started with going through, but Somber seems to forget that every experiment had an 'out'. A way to stop the experiment in it's tracks if it threatened the long term survival of the ponies in the Stable, like this one clearly did.
Pannic Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 27th 2014 at 10:46:53 AM
Re: Retcons and "every experiment had an 'out.'"

1. The story was written before the original was complete. Most likely Somber simply wrote this part and had it published well before that was revealed.

2. An "out" existing doesn't guarantee that everything will work out, as we can see from other stables that ended in disaster. Stable 15, for example, or whatever the one with the computer was.
ILSS Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 27th 2014 at 1:01:03 PM
Originally, no explanation for Stable 99 was given until it was pretty blatantly retconned in Chapter 19. Sometime during the mid 30s to 40s Somber went back and rewrote Chapter 1 entirely to include references to the added exposition.

Of course, this made scenes that had previously been dramatic revelations coming nearly out of nowhere into scenes where Blackjack is shocked and horrified to learn things she'd known from the outset, but that's Project Horizons for you.
Seraphem Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 27th 2014 at 1:29:41 PM
One of the, admittedly many, things I loved most about the world itself, was that fact the none of the Stables we know of ever failed due to anything other then bad luck. And never due to the actions of the ponies inside them. It was always either an accident, like with the chimera's, or outside forces. The Pink Cloud seeping into Stable 3, the Enclave tearing open, and tearing apart all the pegasi stables they could find for resources. The freaking Steel Rangers......

Even the one Stable where the experiment directly led to the failure, it was also due to an accident. The water talisman getting damaged, and an unforeseen issue with the AI programming. Hell, if i wasn't for nopony knowing about the AI except for that one stallion, the ponies in the Stable might have been able to do something and save themselves. Since the 'out' was still there, and still would have worked, but he was the only one who knew about it.

Even if there was an 'out' which we see no evidence of for 99, the simple fact that this alone of the stables, failed because of the ponies inside turning on each other like that. All simply going along with something so hideous, brutal, and disgusting for a century, for no reason other then, for the sake of having that environment....
Unknownlight Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 27th 2014 at 4:14:40 PM
"Yes I could see an experiment like the one 99 started with going through, but Somber seems to forget that every experiment had an 'out'. A way to stop the experiment in it's tracks if it threatened the long term survival of the ponies in the Stable, like this one clearly did."

Seraphem, please stop talking about things you know nothing about. Stable 99's original experiment was "This Stable will be all about recycling. Thus, this Stable will need to have a controlled population, as having the population grow too much will cause a shortage of supplies".

The Stable worked perfectly fine for generations. Then, there was a "civil war" between the members of the Stable, which eventually caused the evil overmare to decide that all males will now be used solely for breeding.

That's it. That's why. Stable-Tec had no say in this, they couldn't have possibly predicted this, and there was nothing they could've done to prevent people from being power hungry.
ILSS Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 27th 2014 at 4:34:01 PM
It's made worse by the fact that I'd just stated that an explanation was given.

That said (and as previously said), the explanation was something of a retcon on Somber's part that he's since gone back and written into the beginning of the story. If Seraphem ever actually did try to read Project Horizons, he may have read the original version in which it appeared to have been that way from the outset.
Seraphem Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 27th 2014 at 4:41:53 PM
I'm going with the version of events that Somber told me directly about why it was the way it was.

And it still twists the entire idea of what The Stables were, just so that the story can start out already that dark.
CCPrime Since: Dec, 1969
Jan 30th 2014 at 12:30:28 PM
@Icy Shake: Well, okay, "plotless" was an intentional exaggeration— it's more like "takes a really long time to cut to the chase".
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