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** It's one thing to feel remorse, but [[ItsAllMyFault constantly beating yourself for it]] [[{{Wangst}} won't draw sympathy but instead]], make matters worse for yourself and others around you.

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** It's one thing to feel remorse, but [[ItsAllMyFault constantly beating yourself for it]] [[{{Wangst}} won't draw sympathy sympathy, but instead]], instead]] make matters worse for yourself and others around you.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: More like, "No Such Luck Fics Are Unoriginal". While this fic wasn't the very first DeconstructionFic towards ''No Such Luck'', many other fics tend to [[FollowTheLeader copy the formula]]. With the family going to far with their actions, feeling remorse for it, and [[spoiler: Lincoln forgiving them in the end]]. One of the major reasons why ''No Such Luck'' {{Deconstruction Fic}}s are looked down upon is how often [[ItsTheSameSoItSucks predictable most of those fics are]]/

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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: More like, "No Such Luck Fics Are Unoriginal". While this fic wasn't the very first DeconstructionFic towards ''No Such Luck'', many other fics tend to [[FollowTheLeader copy the formula]]. With the family going to too far with their actions, feeling remorse for it, and [[spoiler: Lincoln forgiving them in the end]]. One of the major reasons why ''No Such Luck'' {{Deconstruction Fic}}s are looked down upon is how often [[ItsTheSameSoItSucks predictable most of those fics are]]/ are]].
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** Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln, and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worse than what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.

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** Despite the Louds (With (ith the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln, and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They story, they have STILL done bad things to him worse than what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
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* NeverLiveItDown: Ironically, even though the later chapters involve the Louds doing their hardest to earn Lincoln's forgiveness and [[spoiler: Albert telling his grandson about why he should forgive them, and the family finally reconciling in the end]], some readers see them [[ThisIsUnforgivable beyond forgiveness]], and wishes [[PayEvilUntoEvil bad things would happen upon them]].

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* NeverLiveItDown: Ironically, even though the later chapters involve the Louds doing their hardest to earn Lincoln's forgiveness and [[spoiler: Albert telling his grandson about why he should forgive them, and the family finally reconciling in the end]], some readers see them [[ThisIsUnforgivable beyond forgiveness]], and wishes wish [[PayEvilUntoEvil bad things would happen upon to them]].
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* BrokenBase: Similar in canon, the fan-fiction is split among the readers:

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* AlasPoorScrappy: Whether you're ready to consider forgiving Lynn or not, it's kinda painful to see her have a full on panic attack at the idea of going to sleep because her nightmares, all of which are about her little brother hating her, have gotten so bad [[spoiler: that despite her finally earning Lincoln's forgiveness, she still haven't fully forgiven herself by the end of the fic]].

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* AlasPoorScrappy: Whether you're ready to consider forgiving Lynn or not, it's kinda painful to see her have a full on panic attack at the idea of going to sleep because her nightmares, all of which are about her little brother hating her, have gotten so bad [[spoiler: that despite her finally earning Lincoln's forgiveness, she still haven't hasn't fully forgiven herself by the end of the fic]].
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AssPull: [[spoiler: Mr. Santiago's sudden death in chapter 26. While his death gives a reason for the surviving [[InSpiteOfANail Santiagos a reason to move]], killing the patriarch of the family felt spur of a moment and rushed]].

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* AssPull: [[spoiler: Mr. Santiago's sudden death in chapter 26. While his death gives a reason for the surviving [[InSpiteOfANail Santiagos a reason to move]], killing the patriarch of the family felt spur of a moment and rushed]].

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* AngstAversion: Even though the fic is about the Loud family earning Lincoln's forgiveness and improve themselves so they will not make the same mistake again. It did begin with having Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to repeatedly deal with his family's behavior towards him as well as getting the rest of the family to realize that turning someone into their DesignatedMonkey is going to have consequences. AssPull: [[spoiler: Mr. Santiago's sudden death in chapter 26. While his death gives a reason for the surviving [[InSpiteOfANail Santiagos a reason to move]], killing the patriarch of the family felt spur of a moment and rushed]].

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* AngstAversion: Even though the fic is about the Loud family earning Lincoln's forgiveness and improve themselves so they will not make the same mistake again. It did begin with having Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to repeatedly deal with his family's behavior towards him as well as getting the rest of the family to realize that turning someone into their DesignatedMonkey is going to have consequences.
AssPull: [[spoiler: Mr. Santiago's sudden death in chapter 26. While his death gives a reason for the surviving [[InSpiteOfANail Santiagos a reason to move]], killing the patriarch of the family felt spur of a moment and rushed]].



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** Ronnie Anne and Lincoln receive a minor RelationshipUpgrade later on in the story, namely in that Ronnie Anne feels bad for all the times she bullied Lincoln and starts showing more legitimate respect towards him, but a lot of readers thought that it was ''another'' cheap excuse for there not to be any consequences for the overall bullying Lincoln received from her. Others, however, are more willing to forgive Ronnie Anne and found the entire scene adorable.

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** Ronnie Anne and Lincoln receive a minor RelationshipUpgrade later on in the story, namely in that Ronnie Anne feels bad for all the times she bullied Lincoln and starts showing more legitimate respect towards him, but a lot of readers thought that it was ''another'' [[AssPull cheap excuse excuse]] for there not to be any consequences for the overall bullying Lincoln received from her. Others, however, are more willing to forgive Ronnie Anne and found the entire scene adorable.



** Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worse than what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.

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** Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and Lincoln, and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worse than what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.



* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: More like, "No Such Luck Fics Are Unoriginal". While this fic wasn't the very first DeconstructionFic towards ''No Such Luck'', many other fics tend to [[FollowTheLeader copy the formula]]. With the family going to far with their actions, feeling remorse for it, and [[spoiler: Lincoln forgiving them in the end]]. One of the major reasons why ''No Such Luck'' {{Deconstruction Fic}}s are looked down upon is how often [[ItsTheSameSoItSucks predictable most fics are]]/

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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: More like, "No Such Luck Fics Are Unoriginal". While this fic wasn't the very first DeconstructionFic towards ''No Such Luck'', many other fics tend to [[FollowTheLeader copy the formula]]. With the family going to far with their actions, feeling remorse for it, and [[spoiler: Lincoln forgiving them in the end]]. One of the major reasons why ''No Such Luck'' {{Deconstruction Fic}}s are looked down upon is how often [[ItsTheSameSoItSucks predictable most of those fics are]]/
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* AssPull: [[spoiler: Mr. Santiago's sudden death in chapter 26. While his death gives a reason for the surviving [[InSpiteOfANail Santiagos a reason to move]], killing the patriarch of the family felt spur of a moment and rushed]].

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* AngstAversion: Even though the fic is about the Loud family earning Lincoln's forgiveness and improve themselves so they will not make the same mistake again. It did begin with having Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to repeatedly deal with his family's behavior towards him as well as getting the rest of the family to realize that turning someone into their DesignatedMonkey is going to have consequences. AssPull: [[spoiler: Mr. Santiago's sudden death in chapter 26. While his death gives a reason for the surviving [[InSpiteOfANail Santiagos a reason to move]], killing the patriarch of the family felt spur of a moment and rushed]].
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Even though the fic is about the Loud family earning Lincoln's forgiveness and improve themselves so they will not make the same mistake again. It did begin with having Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to repeatedly deal with his family's behavior towards him as well as getting the rest of the family to realize that turning someone into their DesignatedMonkey is going to have consequences.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: More like, "No Such Luck Fics Are Unoriginal". While this fic wasn't the very first DeconstructionFic towards ''No Such Luck'', many other fics tend to [[FollowTheLeader copy the formula]]. With the family going to far with their actions, feeling remorse for it, and [[spoiler: Lincoln forgiving them in the end]]. One of the major reasons why ''No Such Luck'' {{Deconstruction Fic}}s are looked down upon is how often [[ItsTheSameSoItSucks predictable most fics are]]/


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* [[spoiler: Mr. Santiago's death felt rushed in the final chapter,]] while this was probably to avoid EndingFatigue, another chapter or two would have brought some closure about the Santiagos moving out.
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* MisaimedFandom: Or rather, Misaimed Fandom of a Fandom. The author made it clear to defy the tropes and cliches of the other NSL fics such as having the parents arrested and the girls sent to juvenile hall and foster care. Ironically, despite {{Forgiveness}} being the theme and the story ended with [[spoiler: the family earning Lincoln's forgivness]], some viewers are too vindictive to see the story's theme.
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* {{Narm}}: Like ''Syngenesophobia'', much of the drama in the story can get ridiculously over-the-top at times, and the characters often monologue to each other with dialog that doesn't quite sound like things you'd expect their canon counterparts to say (especially the occasional profanity). A good example is Lincoln's PrecisionFStrike in chapter 3, while he has every right to be furious, him cursing seems very forced.

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* {{Narm}}: Like ''Syngenesophobia'', much of the drama in the story can get ridiculously over-the-top at times, and the characters often monologue to each other with dialog that doesn't quite sound like things you'd expect their canon counterparts to say (especially the occasional profanity). A good example is Lincoln's PrecisionFStrike in chapter 3, 3; while he has had every right to be furious, him cursing seems came off as very forced.
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* {{Narm}}: Like ''Syngenesophobia'', much of the drama in the story can get ridiculously over-the-top at times, and the characters often monologue to each other with dialog that doesn't quite sound like things you'd expect their canon counterparts to say (especially the occasional profanity).

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* {{Narm}}: Like ''Syngenesophobia'', much of the drama in the story can get ridiculously over-the-top at times, and the characters often monologue to each other with dialog that doesn't quite sound like things you'd expect their canon counterparts to say (especially the occasional profanity). A good example is Lincoln's PrecisionFStrike in chapter 3, while he has every right to be furious, him cursing seems very forced.
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** The sequel had a TimeSkip two years in the future, [[spoiler: where Lori lives with Bobby and the Santiagos have moved on. Though it would have been great to see Lori and Bobby's relationship improving between those two years along with the Santiagos learning to move on]].

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* HilariousInHindsight: Chandler being the ArchEnemy to Lincoln and being a BarbaricBully who's not above hurting Lana. Given how it's been two years since Chandler was used in the show and how he was left off, it's not hard to imagine him being an antagonist. When the episode "Jeers For Fears" debuted however, it showed Chandler and Lincoln on friendlier terms.

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Chandler being the ArchEnemy to Lincoln and being a BarbaricBully who's not above hurting Lana. Given how it's been two years since Chandler was used in the show and how he was left off, it's not hard to imagine him being an antagonist. When the episode "Jeers For Fears" debuted however, it showed Chandler and Lincoln on friendlier terms.



* JerkassWoobie:
** The Loud family sans Lincoln and Lily, the latter on the grounds that she's only a baby. Despite how they treated Lincoln like crap lately, they were none too proud of themselves after experiencing a JerkassRealization. Not to mention that Lincoln refuses to go anywhere near ''any'' of them if he can help it and has outright stated [[spoiler: he intends to get the police involved, possibly permanently ''destroying'' the family, if they don't leave him alone]] and Mr. Grouse has expressed similar opinions. For the specific examples:
*** Rita and Lynn Sr. They're supposed to be responsible parents who should be able to tell right from wrong, but like the rest of their daughters, [[MomentOfWeakness they gave into Lynn's preposterous claims about Lincoln being bad luck]] and treated him as such. Not to mention kick him out of the house because they let their paranoia get the best of them. It took an [[TheDogBitesBack extremely livid Lincoln]] to make them open their eyes and realize their actions [[ThisIsUnforgivable were unforgivable]]. Now they have to live with the fact that they did the opposite of what they promised their kids they wouldn't do to any of them and how their only son would threaten to call the police over them, ruining the family forever.
*** Lynn gets a particular sharp dose of this trope when she finally admits in Chapter 9 that the whole mess is her fault because she decided to call Lincoln a jinx instead of accepting the loss in stride and breaks down on Pop-pop's shoulder. Then chapter 13 features her being outright terrified of her little brother (something a few readers have smugly called LaserGuidedKarma considering how rough she is with him even at the best of times in canon), who treats her with a calm indifference to her clear heartbreak, and TheReveal that she's stopped taking care of herself out of guilt, to the clear worry of her parents and several of her sisters. Then Chapter 15 compounds this with a NightmareSequence where Lincoln [[ThisIsUnforgivable informs her that he's never forgiving her for what she did]] before walking out of the family's lives forever; when Lynn wakes up, she's too freaked out to even attempt to mask how upset she is, to Lucy's clear worry, and is clearly [[ItsAllMyFault in the midst of blaming herself for absolutely everything]]. ''[[FromBadToWorse Then]]'' Chapter 17 sees her having a near breakdown at the idea of going to sleep because she can't stand having her little brother hate her, which is pretty much the only subject of her dreams lately. Chapter 18 sees her sisters calling her out and mostly snapping her out of it but in Chapter 19, Lori admits to Lincoln that she's still worried about Lynn's mental health. And then in Chapter 22, she comes to terms with the fact that "No Such Luck" and its aftermath just brought the problems in her relationship with Lincoln to the surface; really, they've been there for years and she's even realized that the way she's always treated Lincoln and Ronnie's LovingBully behavior [[NotSoDifferent aren't all that different]].
** Ronnie in backstory. While she admits, rightly, that she was a bully, especially towards Lincoln, it's hard not to feel sorry for her when she reveals her own bullying experiences at the hands of a pair of AlphaBitch SpoiledBrat daughters of school board members who [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections used their parents' positions to dance all over Ronnie's rights, to the point of causing her emotional and physical harm]].



* TheWoobie: Lincoln, big time. All he wanted was some free-time away from the family, and what does he get in return? Being kicked out of his own home, having his furniture sold, and being forced to wear a squirrel costume in order to win back their trust. And even then, they still don't respect him as a family member. Then things get worse just as he's managed to reconcile with most of his sisters with Chandler pulling a FrameUp with [[MistakenForCheating doctored pictures that make it look like he's seeing Cristina behind Ronnie's back]] and ''pretty much the whole school believes it''.
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** Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst than what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.

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** Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst worse than what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
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** While the author made it clear he wants to avoid getting the police involved, imagine if Chandler found out and used that information as an advantage? Specifically, Mrs. Johnson told Lincoln that she will always be on his side, wouldn't it be great idea to see her defend Lincoln in court?

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** While the author made it clear he wants to avoid getting the police involved, imagine if Chandler found out and used that information as an advantage? Specifically, Mrs. Johnson told Lincoln that she will always be on his side, wouldn't it be great idea to see her defend Lincoln in court?
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** While the author made it clear he wants to avoid getting the police involved, imagine if Chandler found out and used that information as an advantage?

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** While the author made it clear he wants to avoid getting the police involved, imagine if Chandler found out and used that information as an advantage?advantage? Specifically, Mrs. Johnson told Lincoln that she will always be on his side, wouldn't it be great idea to see her defend Lincoln in court?
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** Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.

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** Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst than what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
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** Mr. Santiago's death becomes this, surprisingly, after a press release for the ''Casagrandes'' spin-off revealed he is indeed alive, he's just working abroad in Peru as a doctor.

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* RonTheDeathEater: Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.

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Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.

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* RonTheDeathEater:
Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.

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RonTheDeathEater: Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
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Despite the Louds (With the exception of Lily who is only a baby) getting a wake up call for the way they treated Lincoln,and earning his forgiveness at the end of the story. They STILL done bad things to him worst what they have done in canon. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
*** Interestingly, this is touched upon InUniverse, as Lincoln admits in his internal monologues that he barely remembers the good moments they had and focuses a lot more on the bad memories.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Even though the fic is about the Loud family earning Lincoln's forgiveness and improve themselves so they will not make the same mistake again. It did begin with having Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to repeatedly deal with his family's behavior towards him as well as getting the rest of the family to realize that turning someone into their DesignatedMonkey is going to have consequences.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: A {{downplayed}} example. Even though the fanfic is based on a Lincoln TorturePorn and practically requires the audience to watch him being constantly treated unfairly and sometimes beaten up (which, to be fair, you'd need to be able to do to watch the show sometimes anyway), the whole point of the fic is to have Lincoln finally stand up for himself after having to repeatedly deal with his family's behavior towards him as well as getting the rest of the family to realize that turning someone into their DesignatedMonkey is going to have consequences. Finally [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] as the Loud family earn Lincoln's forgiveness and improve themselves so they will not make the same mistake again.



** '''The. Louds.''' Minus Lincoln, of course, but seriously, it's dang near ''impossible'' to see these Louds as the same Louds we've been seeing on the series. Special mention goes to Lynn, who seems to have gotten this treatment the worst out of all of them. In chapter 4, an argument with Lincoln turns into a vicious fight between one another, and it ends with Lincoln running away after Lynn admits that she wanted another sister instead of a brother. Even going as far as to flat-out tell Lincoln that she wishes he was ''never born'' in a moment of anger.
*** {{Downplayed|Trope}} from chapters 4 and 5 onwards. [[spoiler: After Lincoln gives them a much needed TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and runs away after his fight with Lynn, they start to realize how bad they have behaved. Rita even wonders if she's a bad mother because [[RealityEnsues parenting boys, regardless of personality, is different from parenting girls and the methods she used on her daughters fell flat with her son]].]] Ultimately {{subverted}} [[spoiler:when they try to make amends for what they did]].
*** Interestingly, this is touched upon InUniverse, as Lincoln admits in his internal monologues that he barely remembers the good moments they had and focuses a lot more on the bad memories.
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** Luna chewing out the rest of the family for the way they've been treating Lincoln (after having [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a horrified reaction]] to realizing that Lincoln doesn't have a bed anymore) before going to find her little brother was great for steam release too.

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** Luna chewing out the rest of the family for the way they've been treating Lincoln (after having [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a horrified reaction]] to realizing that Lincoln doesn't have a bed anymore) before [[BigSisterInstinct going to find her little brother brother]] was great for steam release too.
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** Lincoln's encounter with the junkyard dogs before the fight is made of this as he is just a small boy forced to fend for himself in a dangerous part of town while simply trying to get home safely, struggling with his squirrel suit the entire way. Not only does it nearly get him killed, but he is forced to ''kill one of the dogs'' in self-defense, knocking the poor creature [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice into a pile of sharp debris]]. If his encounter with the alligator wasn't enough to send him over the edge, it was this near-death encounter that finally drove him beyond his breaking point.
** Lynn's first nightmare when she goes looking for Lincoln only to walk into a house where she's told that he was never born, during which she is confronted by an evil version of herself who explains that [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor she gave Lynn exactly what she wanted]], showing Lynn as a toddler hitting her mom with a ball so hard it causes her to miscarry, thus erasing Lincoln out of her life. It takes Lucy to snap her out of it, and from then on Lynn is an emotional wreck who cannot bring herself to fall asleep for fear of facing her double again. And if that weren't bad enough, she's '''[[BittersweetEnding still]]''' wrestling with what her pride and selfishness nearly did even after she finally earns Lincoln's forgiveness.
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* ToughActToFollow: Not to the author's work, but to ''No Such Luck'' {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general. While it might not be the very first fanfic to tackle the issue of the infamous episode, with over a 1000 reviews and over 600 faves, any following fics after this one will have a rough time to catch up to this one.

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* ToughActToFollow: Not to the author's work, but to ''No Such Luck'' {{Deconstruction Fic}}s in general. While it might not be the very first fanfic to tackle the issue of the infamous episode, but with over a 1000 reviews and over 600 faves, any following fics after this one will have a rough time to catch up to this one.

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* MoralEventHorizon:
** A subverted example with the Louds. While their treatment of Lincoln in the first three chapters is inexcusable and horrible, they get a major wake up call in the fourth chapter. It's clear from that point that they are remorseful and seek to better themselves. Even Lynn's wishing Lincoln was never born during their outburst, [[MomentOfWeakness she immediately regrets it after she calms down]] and [[WasTooHardOnHim beats herself up about it]], and how the blame for all this mess can be traced back to her, something that ultimately gives her a [[NightmareSequence nightmare]] so frightening that even when she realizes that it was AllJustADream, she remains terrified that the dream's events (Lincoln [[ThisIsUnforgivable declaring that he's never going to forgive her for what she did]] and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere walking out of the family's lives forever]]) could really happen and when Lucy asks her if she's okay, Lynn's response is to timidly say no instead even attempting bravado, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness something that Lucy is openly concerned with]].
** A more straight example being how vicious Chandler and his friends are [[spoiler: with bullying Lincoln, ultimately going as far as to attack physically Lana, a six year old girl, when she tried to stick up for Lincoln. It makes the following beatdown very much warranted. And unfortunately it doesn't slow him down as he ends up using Conner to set Lincoln up to be MistakenForCheating by Ronnie after [[MyHairCameOutGreen Conner accidentally dyes his hair white]] and gets close to Cristina.]]

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* MoralEventHorizon:
** A subverted example with the Louds. While their treatment of Lincoln in the first three chapters is inexcusable and horrible, they get a major wake up call in the fourth chapter. It's clear from that point that they are remorseful and seek to better themselves. Even Lynn's wishing Lincoln was never born during their outburst, [[MomentOfWeakness she immediately regrets it after she calms down]] and [[WasTooHardOnHim beats herself up about it]], and how the blame for all this mess can be traced back to her, something that ultimately gives her a [[NightmareSequence nightmare]] so frightening that even when she realizes that it was AllJustADream, she remains terrified that the dream's events (Lincoln [[ThisIsUnforgivable declaring that he's never going to forgive her for what she did]] and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere walking out of the family's lives forever]]) could really happen and when Lucy asks her if she's okay, Lynn's response is to timidly say no instead even attempting bravado, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness something that Lucy is openly concerned with]].
** A more straight example being how
MoralEventHorizon: How vicious Chandler and his friends are [[spoiler: with bullying Lincoln, ultimately going as far as to attack physically Lana, a six year old girl, when she tried to stick up for Lincoln. It makes the following beatdown very much warranted. And unfortunately it doesn't slow him down as he ends up using Conner to set Lincoln up to be MistakenForCheating by Ronnie after [[MyHairCameOutGreen Conner accidentally dyes his hair white]] and gets close to Cristina.]]

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