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** [[spoiler:Leston]] is sucked dry by Jade. The others are glad it's out of sight.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: As revealed when it's all over, the reason the squid khan arc took so long was that the author and their beta kept scrapping their old ideas, like [[spoiler: there being a Chinese pirate ship or Paco getting the Essence]].
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: As revealed when it's all over, the reason the squid khan arc took so long was that the author and their beta kept scrapping their old ideas, like [[spoiler: there being a Chinese pirate ship or Paco getting the Essence]].
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** [[spoiler:Leston]] is sucked dry by Jade. The others are glad it's out of sight.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: As revealed when it's all over, the reason the squid khan arc took so long was that the author and their beta kept scrapping their old ideas, like [[spoiler: there being a Chinese pirate ship or Paco getting the Essence]].sight.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: As revealed when it's all over, the reason the squid khan arc took so long was that the author and their beta kept scrapping their old ideas, like [[spoiler: there being a Chinese pirate ship or Paco getting the Essence]].
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* CompleteMonster:
** Tara, not just because she's even more of a FullyEmbracedFiend than even Jade, but because of why she is -- she figures she's always been a monster even when she was human, and relishes in the chance to be one fully now. She even gleefully ruminates at one point on all the awful things she's going to do to Widow and Jumper [[spoiler: after her further transformation and planned coup of Jade.]]
** [[spoiler: Simon Leston]] was already a MisanthropeSupreme before coming into his Essence. Afterwards, he becomes an AxCrazy OmnicidalManiac [[spoiler: who kills his own mother.]]
** Tara, not just because she's even more of a FullyEmbracedFiend than even Jade, but because of why she is -- she figures she's always been a monster even when she was human, and relishes in the chance to be one fully now. She even gleefully ruminates at one point on all the awful things she's going to do to Widow and Jumper [[spoiler: after her further transformation and planned coup of Jade.]]
** [[spoiler: Simon Leston]] was already a MisanthropeSupreme before coming into his Essence. Afterwards, he becomes an AxCrazy OmnicidalManiac [[spoiler: who kills his own mother.]]
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** Nivor as an Oni general is a prolific drooler.
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** Nivor as an Oni general is a prolific drooler.drooler.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: As revealed when it's all over, the reason the squid khan arc took so long was that the author and their beta kept scrapping their old ideas, like [[spoiler: there being a Chinese pirate ship or Paco getting the Essence]].
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: As revealed when it's all over, the reason the squid khan arc took so long was that the author and their beta kept scrapping their old ideas, like [[spoiler: there being a Chinese pirate ship or Paco getting the Essence]].
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* CompleteMonster: Tara, not just because she's even more of a FullyEmbracedFiend than even Jade, but because of why she is -- she figures she's always been a monster even when she was human, and relishes in the chance to be one fully now. She even gleefully ruminates at one point on all the awful things she's going to do to Widow and Jumper [[spoiler: after her further transformation and planned coup of Jade.]]
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* CompleteMonster: CompleteMonster:
** Tara, not just because she's even more of a FullyEmbracedFiend than even Jade, but because of why she is -- she figures she's always been a monster even when she was human, and relishes in the chance to be one fully now. She even gleefully ruminates at one point on all the awful things she's going to do to Widow and Jumper [[spoiler: after her further transformation and planned coup of Jade.]]
** [[spoiler: Simon Leston]] was already a MisanthropeSupreme before coming into his Essence. Afterwards, he becomes an AxCrazy OmnicidalManiac [[spoiler: who kills his own mother.]]
** Tara, not just because she's even more of a FullyEmbracedFiend than even Jade, but because of why she is -- she figures she's always been a monster even when she was human, and relishes in the chance to be one fully now. She even gleefully ruminates at one point on all the awful things she's going to do to Widow and Jumper [[spoiler: after her further transformation and planned coup of Jade.]]
** [[spoiler: Simon Leston]] was already a MisanthropeSupreme before coming into his Essence. Afterwards, he becomes an AxCrazy OmnicidalManiac [[spoiler: who kills his own mother.]]
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* {{Squick}}: What Jade goes through to start her transformation into an Onigumo, and the description of when her exo-skeleton starts to grow in certainly count.
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* {{Squick}}: {{Squick}}:
** What Jade goes through to start her transformation into an Onigumo, and the description of when her exo-skeleton starts to grow in certainly count.
** What Jade goes through to start her transformation into an Onigumo, and the description of when her exo-skeleton starts to grow in certainly count.
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* CompleteMonster: Tara, not just because she's even more of a FullyEmbracedFiend than even Jade, but because of why she is -- she figures she's always been a monster even when she was human, and relishes in the chance to be one fully now. She even gleefully ruminates at one point on all the awful things she's going to do to Widow and Jumper [[spoiler: after her further transformation and planned coup of Jade.]]
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* CryForTheDevil: When the Jorogumo Queen finally succumbs to age and dies, Jade weeps for her.
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* CryForTheDevil: When the Jorogumo Queen finally succumbs to age and dies, Jade weeps for her.her.
* {{Squick}}: What Jade goes through to start her transformation into an Onigumo, and the description of when her exo-skeleton starts to grow in certainly count.
** Nivor as an Oni general is a prolific drooler.
* {{Squick}}: What Jade goes through to start her transformation into an Onigumo, and the description of when her exo-skeleton starts to grow in certainly count.
** Nivor as an Oni general is a prolific drooler.
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* CryForTheDevil: When the Jorogumo Queen finally succumbs to age and dies, Jade weeps for her.
