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*MostWritersAreAdults: Suffers from this. Constantly. The author doesn't seem to have much of a grasp of what's appropriate for a couple of preteens/young teenagers.
*{{Narm}}: Dialogue is [[{{Wangst}} painfully]] [[NonSequitur awkward]] at times.
*{{Narm}}: Dialogue is [[{{Wangst}} painfully]] [[NonSequitur awkward]] at times.