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* CanonDefilement
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* WhatAnIdiot: Alice runs off in Chapter 5 because she was bored. She's in the T.V. World for the ''first time.'' She makes Haruka panic, and basically lures Haruka to her Shadow, almost getting both of them killed.
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* ComeForTheXStayForTheY: Come for Alice the Sue, stay for Haruka.
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* TheyJustDidntCare: Alice gets the most powerful Arcana in the series ''ever'', before she even makes a Social Link! And let's not get started on the other Social Links.
** Subverted with Haruka; Katie clearly is taking extra precautions with Haruka's story, and constantly apologizes for possibly offending actual trans people. It helps that Katie has made her a legit OC.
** Subverted with Haruka; Katie clearly is taking extra precautions with Haruka's story, and constantly apologizes for possibly offending actual trans people. It helps that Katie has made her a legit OC.
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* MarySue: Alice Walker. Just like [[SwimmingInTerror SiT]], it's [[TrollFic intentional.]]
** GodModeSue: ''[[PrecisionFStrike Motherfucking]] Universe Arcana.''
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter 5 because she didn't want to stick together in the T.V. World. We remind you that [[WhatAnIdiot this is the first time Alice and the cast has been in the world.]]
** ParodySue: Again, because it's a TrollFic.
** Subverted and Averted with Haruka.
** GodModeSue: ''[[PrecisionFStrike Motherfucking]] Universe Arcana.''
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter 5 because she didn't want to stick together in the T.V. World. We remind you that [[WhatAnIdiot this is the first time Alice and the cast has been in the world.]]
** ParodySue: Again, because it's a TrollFic.
** Subverted and Averted with Haruka.
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* LesYay: While it's painfully obvious that Alice has a crush on Yukiko, there's shades of Les Yay between Alice and Margaret.
** Alice and Haruka.
** Alice and Haruka.
* CanonDefilement
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* MarySue: Just like [[SwimmingInTerror SiT]], it's [[TrollFic intentional.]]
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter 5
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter 5
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* MarySue: Alice Walker. Just like [[SwimmingInTerror SiT]], it's [[TrollFic intentional.]]
** GodModeSue: ''[[PrecisionFStrike Motherfucking]] Universe Arcana.''
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter55 because she didn't want to stick together in the T.V. World. We remind you that [[WhatAnIdiot this is the first time Alice and the cast has been in the world.]]
** ParodySue: Again, because it's a TrollFic.
** Subverted and Averted with Haruka.
** GodModeSue: ''[[PrecisionFStrike Motherfucking]] Universe Arcana.''
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter
** ParodySue: Again, because it's a TrollFic.
** Subverted and Averted with Haruka.
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** Subverted with Haruka; Katie clearly is taking extra precautions with Haruka's story, and constantly apologizes for possibly offending actual trans people. It helps that Katie has made her a legit OC.
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** Subverted with Haruka; Katie clearly is taking extra precautions with Haruka's story, and constantly apologizes for possibly offending actual trans people. It helps that Katie has made her a legit OC.OC.
* WhatAnIdiot: Alice runs off in Chapter 5 because she was bored. She's in the T.V. World for the ''first time.'' She makes Haruka panic, and basically lures Haruka to her Shadow, almost getting both of them killed.
* WhatAnIdiot: Alice runs off in Chapter 5 because she was bored. She's in the T.V. World for the ''first time.'' She makes Haruka panic, and basically lures Haruka to her Shadow, almost getting both of them killed.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Haruka Fujiwara is quickly becoming this, both with her personality and with her backstory.
* MarySue: Just like [[SwimmingInTerror SiT]], it's [[TrollFic intentional.]]
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter 5
* TheyJustDidntCare: Alice gets the most powerful Arcana in the series ''ever'', before she even makes a Social Link! And let's not get started on the other Social Links.
** Subverted with Haruka; Katie clearly is taking extra precautions with Haruka's story, and constantly apologizes for possibly offending actual trans people. It helps that Katie has made her a legit OC.
* MarySue: Just like [[SwimmingInTerror SiT]], it's [[TrollFic intentional.]]
** JerkSue: Nearly gets herself and Haruka killed in Chapter 5
* TheyJustDidntCare: Alice gets the most powerful Arcana in the series ''ever'', before she even makes a Social Link! And let's not get started on the other Social Links.
** Subverted with Haruka; Katie clearly is taking extra precautions with Haruka's story, and constantly apologizes for possibly offending actual trans people. It helps that Katie has made her a legit OC.
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