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* BrokenBase: Despite the high quality of the story, there will always be a few points not everyone is pleased about.
** The Book 2 chapter 'The Heiress' has received mixed reactions. While the chapter was praised for its depiction of Asami's birthday, along with Asami and Korra's interactions with many different characters, other parts were criticized. Fans seemed divided on the reveal of a Kyalin relationship, and some fans criticized how some aspects of Asami's personal life seemed to contradict what had been previously established about the character. Some fans were also not pleased about her scenes with Iroh (though this was before his AgeLift was revealed). A few readers also criticized Korra's behavior towards the original character Brock, and more than a few readers were not pleased at the idea that the Korrasami relationship might be heading towards a break up due to their conversation at the end of the chapter.
** The Book 2 chapter 'The Heiress' has received mixed reactions. While the chapter was praised for its depiction of Asami's birthday, along with Asami and Korra's interactions with many different characters, other parts were criticized. Fans seemed divided on the reveal of a Kyalin relationship, and some fans criticized how some aspects of Asami's personal life seemed to contradict what had been previously established about the character. Some fans were also not pleased about her scenes with Iroh (though this was before his AgeLift was revealed). A few readers also criticized Korra's behavior towards the original character Brock, and more than a few readers were not pleased at the idea that the Korrasami relationship might be heading towards a break up due to their conversation at the end of the chapter.
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** It was revealed in 'The Heiress' that Lin Beifong and Kya had become a couple.
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* ParvumOpus: The Book 2 chapter 'The Heiress' has probbly received the most mixed reactions. While the chapter was praised for its depiction of Asami's party, along with Asami and Korra's interactions with many different characters, other parts were criticized. Fans seemed divided on the reveal of a [[LesYay Kyalin]] relationship, and some fans thought some aspects of Asami's personal life contradicted what had been previously established about the character. A few were also unsure about her scenes with Iroh (though this was before his AgeLift was revealed), and were not pleased at the idea that the Korrasami relationship might be heading towards a break up. However, the authors have maintained that the events of this chapter are important and will play a crucial role in later events.
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** While Ghazan’s death scene was considered rather chilling and decently described, what led up to his death was not considered to be written as well since it caused a lot of confusion with the readers. A number of readers actually thought Korra used lavabending to kill Ghazan, which was not the case. The scene required a few rewrites to straighten a few things out, but it still confuses some readers despite that.
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** While Ghazan’s death scene was considered rather chilling and decently described, what led up to his death was not considered to be written as well since it caused a lot of confusion with the readers. A number of readers actually thought Korra used lavabending to kill Ghazan, which was not the case. The scene required a few rewrites to straighten a few things out, but it still confuses some readers despite that.
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Deleting because negative reactions to this were minimal and does not apply for the Broken Base trope anyway.
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** Some fans have mixed feelings about Korra's intimacy with other characters, particularly the kissing scene between her, Opal and Kuvira. Though the authors have stated that Korra's behaviour is due to her being confined for so long, and wanting to experience these moments with all of her friends.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Ghazan was the most well received of the Red Lotus partly because of his cool design and abilities in canon. However, readers liked how he was the TokenGoodTeammate who treated Korra rather well.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Ghazan was the most well received of the Red Lotus partly because of his cool design and abilities in canon. However, But readers also liked how he was the almost a TokenGoodTeammate who treated Korra rather (relatively) well.
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** Whether killing off Zaheer's group by the end of Book One was a good idea or not.
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** When the authors stated they did not plan on having Meelo play a role beyond cameos and a few lines due to disliking him, the authors stated they were surprised by the response they received. As a result, they have decided to keep their opinions of certain characters to themselves from now on.
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** Averted with Meelo, after the authors said they did not plan on him playing much of a role beyond cameos and a few lines due to their own dislike of the character. (Interestingly enough, the authors later stated they were surprised by the response they received in defense of the character. As a result, they have decided to keep their opinions of certain characters to themselves from now on.)
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** Korra has shown a particular interest in kissing Opal ever since their sleepover with Kuvira, and each find the other to be a good kisser.
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** While Ghazan was meant to be somewhat sympathetic, he appeared to be more so than the writers intended. Due to Ghazan being the nicest to Korra out of the Red Lotus and causing the least harm to her in comparison to Zaheer, Ming-Hua, and P’Li, readers felt that his CruelAndUnusualDeath was undeserved, especially considering that his death was far worse than them. Even though the writers have stated Ghazan did not have the best relationship with Korra since participated in kidnapping her as a child and training her to become an assassin, the fact he committed the least onscreen harm to her along with doing a number of nice things for her, such as comforting her when she cried or letting Korra keep Naga, makes it difficult for some readers to feel more sympathetic than the writers wanted. Not to mention that while Ghazan did attempt to kill Korra during the final battle, he was doing it to protect his own friends like Korra was protecting hers. It was probably not a coincidence the writers considered allowing Ghazan to be spared, and his death in Korra's nightmares during Book Two.
** While Brock who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readers are not really meant to care about, Korra's rather InnocentlyInsensitive treatment of him during Asami's birthday has rubbed readers the wrong way, and some readers actually felt sorry for him. More than a few readers have criticized the handling of that scene.
** While Brock who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readers are not really meant to care about, Korra's rather InnocentlyInsensitive treatment of him during Asami's birthday has rubbed readers the wrong way, and some readers actually felt sorry for him. More than a few readers have criticized the handling of that scene.
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** While Ghazan was meant to be somewhat sympathetic, he appeared to be more so than the writers intended. Due to Ghazan being the nicest most amicable to Korra out of the Red Lotus and causing the least harm to her in comparison to Zaheer, Ming-Hua, and P’Li, readers felt that his CruelAndUnusualDeath was undeserved, especially considering that his death was far worse than them. Even though the writers have stated Ghazan did not have the best a healthy relationship with Korra since he participated in kidnapping her as a child and training her to become an assassin, the fact he committed the least onscreen harm to her along with doing a number of nice things for her, such as comforting her when she cried or letting Korra keep Naga, makes it difficult for some readers not to feel more sympathetic than the writers wanted. Not to mention that while Ghazan did attempt to kill Korra during the final battle, he was doing it to protect his own friends like Korra was protecting hers. It was probably may not not have been a coincidence that the writers considered allowing Ghazan to be spared, and had Korra experience nightmares of his death in Korra's nightmares during Book Two.
** While Brock (an {{Expy}} of the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' character) who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readersare were not really meant to really care about, Korra's rather InnocentlyInsensitive treatment of him during Asami's birthday has rubbed readers the wrong way, and made some readers actually felt feel sorry for him. More than a few readers have criticized the handling of that scene.
** While Brock (an {{Expy}} of the ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' character) who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readers
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Broken Base already covered these problems, and I don\'t think Parvum applies anyway, as reception for the chapter was mixed not reviled. The Great Divide comparison doesn\'t really fit either, as the biggest complaint about that episode is that it doesn\'t tie in at all with the rest of the show, while The Heiress at least ties into a lot of things that had and would happen in the story.
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* ParvumOpus: "The Heiress" has been considered the weakest chapter of the story so far with some readers stating the quality of this chapter is far below any produced before it. It could be seen as the equivalent of the Great Divide from the original series. See BrokenBase for more details. Additionally, the authors appear to agree this is the case.
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It Was His Sled only really applies to Korrasami if the pairing turns out to be endgame, and at this point we don\'t know how that will work out.
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* ItWasHisSled: Based on the number of reviews that revealed this information, the kiss between Korra and Asami during Book Two has quickly gone into this territory.
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** Amon's true nature as a water-bender and blood-bender is revealed much sooner in the story than in canon.
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* ItWasHisSled: Based on the number of reviews that revealed this information, the kiss between Korra and Asami during Book Two has quickly gone into this territory.
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** Amon's true nature as a water-bender andblood-bender is revealed much sooner in the story than in canon. blood-bender.
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** Book Two Chapter Four 'The Heiress' has received quite a bit of mixed reactions. While the chapter was praised by how the writers did a good job making Asami's birtday seem like a large party along with Asami and Korra interacting with a fairly large number of characters, there were mixed to negative reactions to a number of other things. Fans seemed divided on whether the Kyalin relationship along with some feeling indifferent. Some fans criticized how revelations out of Asami's life seem to come out of nowhere along with a number of fans not being pleased with her scenes with Iroh. Some readers also criticized Korra's behavior towards the original character Brock. More than a few readers were not pleased at the idea that the Korrasami relationship might be heading towards a break up due to their conversation at the end of the chapter.
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** The Book Two Chapter Four 2 chapter 'The Heiress' has received quite a bit of mixed reactions. While the chapter was praised by how the writers did a good job making for its depiction of Asami's birtday seem like a large party birthday, along with Asami and Korra interacting Korra's interactions with a fairly large number of many different characters, there were mixed to negative reactions to a number of other things. parts were criticized. Fans seemed divided on whether the reveal of a Kyalin relationship along with relationship, and some feeling indifferent. Some fans criticized how revelations out some aspects of Asami's personal life seem seemed to come out of nowhere along with a number of contradict what had been previously established about the character. Some fans were also not being pleased with about her scenes with Iroh. Some Iroh (though this was before his AgeLift was revealed). A few readers also criticized Korra's behavior towards the original character Brock. More Brock, and more than a few readers were not pleased at the idea that the Korrasami relationship might be heading towards a break up due to their conversation at the end of the chapter.
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Editing and applying correct trope. Narm did not really apply as it refers to a scene that comes off as unintentionally silly or funny.
** While Ghazan’s death scene was considered rather chilling and decently described, what led up to his death was not considered to be written as well since it caused a lot of confusion with the readers. A number of readers actually thought Korra used lavabending to kill Ghazan, which was not the case. The scene required a few rewrites to straighten a few things out, but it still confuses some readers despite that.
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* {{Narm}}: While Ghazan’s death scene during Chapter Eighteen of Book One was considered rather chilling and decently described, what led up to his death was not considered to be written as well since it caused a lot of confusion with the readers. A number of readers actually thought Korra used lavabending to kill Ghazan, which was not the case. The scene required a few rewrites to straighten a few things out, but it still confuses some readers despite that.
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Editing, also the fact that Korrasami is one person is one person\'s fan-preferred pairing does not make it the majority fan-preferred pairing.
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** Recently, the rather large amount of ShipTease in the story has been criticized and excessive, especially the weird kissing scenes between Korra, Opal, and Kuvira.
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** Recently, Some fans have mixed feelings about Korra's intimacy with other characters, particularly the rather large amount of ShipTease in the story has been criticized and excessive, especially the weird kissing scenes scene between Korra, Opal, her, Opal and Kuvira.Kuvira. Though the authors have stated that Korra's behaviour is due to her being confined for so long, and wanting to experience these moments with all of her friends.
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* DieForOurShip: Quite a few fans of the story were not pleased with some of Iroh's scenes with Asami during the Heiress. While reactions may not have necessarily reached these levels, some readers wish for Iroh to go away as well as a number of readers wish for Iroh's involvement in Asami's life to not evolve past friendship at best.
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* DieForOurShip: Quite a A few fans of the story were not pleased with some of Iroh's scenes with Asami during the Heiress. 'The Heiress'. While reactions may not have necessarily reached these levels, some readers wish for Iroh to go away as well as a number of readers wish for thought that Iroh's involvement in Asami's life to should not evolve past friendship at best.friendship.
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* FanPreferredCouple: Similar to canon, Korra and Asami are the fan preferred pairing in this story. Time will tell if they will become a couple in this story. The fans went nuts when Korra and Asami kiss during Book Two.
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The only people able to make this claim are the authors, not one reader who has lost interest.
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** Subverted to an extent in Book Two. Some of the recent decisions by the authors have caused a fair number of readers to lose interest.
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* SophomoreSlump: The first book received lots of praise while the second book has received far more criticism along with a fair number of readers losing interest in the story. The authors themselves have lampshaded they have lost some readers due to their decisions in the second book.
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* AssPull: During the chapter 'The Heiress,' it is stated that Asami has apparently had relations with multiple men and women in the past. This is not only something that seems to come out of nowhere, but it greatly contradicts how Asami made it clear her past was generally a FriendlessBackground and her father tried to arrange his friendships among other things. Even with Asami stating one chapter before that she 'kissed' several people in the past, nothing in the previous chapters ever indicates that she lived a lifestyle like that. The authors have acknowledged they did not really allude to this at all.
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*TheLawOfConservationOfDetail: During the chapter 'The Heiress,' it is stated that Asami has apparently had relations with multiple men and women in the past. This was criticized by some reviewers, who felt it contradicted Asami's established past, particularly her FriendlessBackground. The authors explained that this detail had been unimportant up until this point, and that they had established Asami having had previous relationships, as she had told Korra she had kissed other people before. The scene in 'The Heiress' merely went into further detail.
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Editing and applying correct trope. What An Idiot did not apply as Asami\'s decision was not due to ignorance but being divided between her loyalty to her father and her loyalty to Korra, as well as her desire to escape the Equalists
*ConflictingLoyalty: While it is understandable that Asami does not want to leave her father, she questions her decision to deny the Kyoshi Warriors help, as this makes her seem like she is aiding the Equalists. But she also knows the alternative is to leave her father in the hands of Amon, who will most likely let him die.
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** While it is understandable that Asami does not want to leave her father, refusing the help of the Kyoshi warriors was a rather idiotic move on her part since she does not know if Amon will truly save her father, so her father maybe as good as dead regardless of what she does. Not to mention, she is helping Amon, who is Korra's enemy, which makes her look even more guilty than when her father had Amon kidnap her in the first place.
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** Both Korra and Asami have been established as being far more intelligent than their canon counterparts, but the story has them act rather idiotic to cause their romantic relationship to fall apart. Along with Bolin, Asami has acted as someone who gives Korra exposition and explains things to her. Based on this story, it gives the impression she did explain a number of things regarding romantic relationships to Korra. Additionally, Korra usually asked questions about things she did not understand, but this story indicates that she did not ask any questions at all.
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** Both Korra and Asami have been established as being far more intelligent than their canon counterparts, but the story has them act do make some rather idiotic to cause their romantic relationship to fall apart. Along with Bolin, Asami has acted as someone who gives Korra exposition and explains things to her. Based on this story, it gives the impression she did explain a number of things impulsive decisions regarding romantic relationships their relationship, which leads to Korra. Additionally, some strain between them. Although this could be attributed to both character's isolation enforced by others, Asami by her father and Korra usually asked questions about things she did not understand, but this story indicates that she did not ask any questions at all.by the Red Lotus.
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The description for \"Die for our Ship\" the apparent reason for Iroh\'s status as a Scrappy, admits that it has not reached such levels. There is not enough indication from fanfic reviews or other supplementary material to indicate that Iroh has reached this level.
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** Iroh does not have a lot of fans due to DieForOurShip.
* {{Squick}}: Ship tease scenes between Iroh and Asami.
* {{Squick}}: Ship tease scenes between Iroh and Asami.
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Not relevant to this page. It\'s also incredibly sexist and insulting to the authors.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: While Asami appears to be sympathetic in some respects, she comes across this way in certain other aspects due to the writers' poor handling of her character during Book Two. She started off as sympathetic due to her lonely background, some of that sympathy was lost during Book Two where Asami comes across as a harlot. There is an implication that Asami was either leading Iroh on while she was still in a relationship with Korra and not informing him or she was considering the idea of cheating on Korra.
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** Amon's true nature as a water-bender and blood-bender is revealed much sooner in the story than in canon.
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* ItWasHisSled: Amon's true nature as a water-bender and blood-bender is revealed much sooner in the story than in canon.
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* You would be hard pressed to find anyone who does like Hiroshi Sato. He might be more loathed than his canon counterpart.
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** Iroh does not have a lot of fans due to DieForOurShip.
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** While Brock who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readers are not really meant to care about, Korra's rather InnocentlyInsensitive treatment of him during Asami's birthday has rubbed readers the wrong way, and some readers actually felt sorry for him.
* UnintentionallyUnsymathetic: While Asami appears to be sympathetic in some respects, she comes across this way in certain other aspects due to the writers' poor handling of her character during Book Two. She started off as sympathetic due to her lonely background, some of that sympathy was lost during Book Two where Asami comes across as a harlot. There is an implication that Asami was either leading Iroh on while she was still in a relationship with Korra and not informing him or she was considering the idea of cheating on Korra.
* UnintentionallyUnsymathetic: While Asami appears to be sympathetic in some respects, she comes across this way in certain other aspects due to the writers' poor handling of her character during Book Two. She started off as sympathetic due to her lonely background, some of that sympathy was lost during Book Two where Asami comes across as a harlot. There is an implication that Asami was either leading Iroh on while she was still in a relationship with Korra and not informing him or she was considering the idea of cheating on Korra.
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** While Brock who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readers are not really meant to care about, Korra's rather InnocentlyInsensitive treatment of him during Asami's birthday has rubbed readers the wrong way, and some readers actually felt sorry for him.
him. More than a few readers have criticized the handling of that scene.
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* SophmoreSlump: The first book received lots of praise while the second book has received far more criticism along with a fair number of readers losing interest in the story. The authors themselves have lampshaded they have lost some readers due to their decisions in the second book.
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* SophmoreSlump: SophomoreSlump: The first book received lots of praise while the second book has received far more criticism along with a fair number of readers losing interest in the story. The authors themselves have lampshaded they have lost some readers due to their decisions in the second book.
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** Subverted to an extent in Book Two. Some of the recent decisions by the authors have caused a fair number of readers to lose interest.
** Recently, the rather large amount of ShipTease in the story has been criticized and excessive, especially the weird kissing scenes between Korra, Opal, and Kuvira.
* You would be hard pressed to find anyone who does like Hiroshi Sato. He might be more loathed than his canon counterpart.
* SophmoreSlump: The first book received lots of praise while the second book has received far more criticism along with a fair number of readers losing interest in the story. The authors themselves have lampshaded they have lost some readers due to their decisions in the second book.
** The handling of the Korrasami relationship was poorly done to say the least. While most praised how it was built up during Book One and the fact Korra and Asami became girlfriends at the beginning of Book Two, the writers had the relationship come to an abrupt halt within three chapters rather than trying to give the relationship proper development. Many readers have criticized the writers decision with this.
* UnintentionallyUnsymathetic: While Asami appears to be sympathetic in some respects, she comes across this way in certain other aspects due to the writers' poor handling of her character during Book Two. She started off as sympathetic due to her lonely background, some of that sympathy was lost during Book Two where Asami comes across as a harlot. There is an implication that Asami was either leading Iroh on while she was still in a relationship with Korra and not informing him or she was considering the idea of cheating on Korra.
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** Zaheer should not have told too many of his fellow Red Lotus members that he planned on capturing Korra's parents for possible leverage, especially the ones who did not need to know, such as Manu, who would not have had any effect on the plan. As a result, Manu ends up spilling the beans to Mako after being tortured.
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** Zaheer should not have told too many of his fellow Red Lotus members that he planned on capturing Korra's parents for possible leverage, especially the ones who did not need to know, such as Manu, who would not have had any effect on the plan. As a result, Manu ends up spilling the beans to Mako after being tortured.tortured.
** While it is understandable that Asami does not want to leave her father, refusing the help of the Kyoshi warriors was a rather idiotic move on her part since she does not know if Amon will truly save her father, so her father maybe as good as dead regardless of what she does. Not to mention, she is helping Amon, who is Korra's enemy, which makes her look even more guilty than when her father had Amon kidnap her in the first place.
** Both Korra and Asami have been established as being far more intelligent than their canon counterparts, but the story has them act rather idiotic to cause their romantic relationship to fall apart. Along with Bolin, Asami has acted as someone who gives Korra exposition and explains things to her. Based on this story, it gives the impression she did explain a number of things regarding romantic relationships to Korra. Additionally, Korra usually asked questions about things she did not understand, but this story indicates that she did not ask any questions at all.
** While it is understandable that Asami does not want to leave her father, refusing the help of the Kyoshi warriors was a rather idiotic move on her part since she does not know if Amon will truly save her father, so her father maybe as good as dead regardless of what she does. Not to mention, she is helping Amon, who is Korra's enemy, which makes her look even more guilty than when her father had Amon kidnap her in the first place.
** Both Korra and Asami have been established as being far more intelligent than their canon counterparts, but the story has them act rather idiotic to cause their romantic relationship to fall apart. Along with Bolin, Asami has acted as someone who gives Korra exposition and explains things to her. Based on this story, it gives the impression she did explain a number of things regarding romantic relationships to Korra. Additionally, Korra usually asked questions about things she did not understand, but this story indicates that she did not ask any questions at all.
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* AssPull: During the chapter 'The Heiress,' it is stated that Asami has apparently had relations with multiple men and women in the past. This is not only something that seems to come out of nowhere, but it greatly contradicts how Asami made it clear her past was generally a FriendlessBackground and her father tried to arrange his friendships among other things. Even with Asami stating one chapter before that she 'kissed' several people in the past, nothing in the previous chapters ever indicates that she lived a lifestyle like that.
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* AssPull: During the chapter 'The Heiress,' it is stated that Asami has apparently had relations with multiple men and women in the past. This is not only something that seems to come out of nowhere, but it greatly contradicts how Asami made it clear her past was generally a FriendlessBackground and her father tried to arrange his friendships among other things. Even with Asami stating one chapter before that she 'kissed' several people in the past, nothing in the previous chapters ever indicates that she lived a lifestyle like that. The authors have acknowledged they did not really allude to this at all.
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* ParvumOpus: "The Heiress" has been considered the weakest chapter of the story so far with some readers stating the quality of this chapter is far below any produced before it. It could be seen as the equivalent of the Great Divide from the original series. See BrokenBase for more details.
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* ParvumOpus: "The Heiress" has been considered the weakest chapter of the story so far with some readers stating the quality of this chapter is far below any produced before it. It could be seen as the equivalent of the Great Divide from the original series. See BrokenBase for more details. Additionally, the authors appear to agree this is the case.
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** Many readers have noticed that Korra's persona in the story is a more calm and reserved nature along with a greater willingness to think her actions through than her canon counterpart. While this was a popular change, the authors later clarified that it was not meant to be seen as a positive change to Korra's personality because it is a direct result of the abuse that she suffered at the hands of Zaheer and the Red Lotus.
** In the first season of ''Avatar: The Last Airbender'' Katara made frequent visits to a fortuneteller by the name of Aunt Wu, in one of those scenes the fortuneteller kicks Katara out and explains that she will pass away in her sleep shortly after the birth of her fourth great-grandchild. More than seventy years have passed and Katara has outlived most of her friends and even some of her family, while her oldest grandchild Jinora is nowhere near the age of having children. It can be easy for one to get the impression that Katara's long life is in equal parts a blessing and a curse.
** Many readers have noticed that Korra's persona in the story is a more calm and reserved nature along with a greater willingness to think her actions through than her canon counterpart. While this was a popular change, the authors later clarified that it was not meant to be seen as a positive change to Korra's personality because it is a direct result of the abuse that she suffered at the hands of Zaheer and the Red Lotus.
** In the first season of ''Avatar: The Last Airbender'' Katara made frequent visits to a fortuneteller by the name of Aunt Wu, in one of those scenes the fortuneteller kicks Katara out and explains that she will pass away in her sleep shortly after the birth of her fourth great-grandchild. More than seventy years have passed and Katara has outlived most of her friends and even some of her family, while her oldest grandchild Jinora is nowhere near the age of having children. It can be easy for one to get the impression that Katara's long life is in equal parts a blessing and a curse.
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* MagnificentBastard: Zaheer gives an impressive showing of his intelligence with his [[TheStrategist strategic planning]], [[ManipulativeBastard long term manipulation of Korra]], impressive playing of XanatosSpeedChess and [[CrazyPrepared large amount of thorough contingencies]]. But this trope ends up {{Subverted}} because Zaheer's plans would have not been so badly derailed had he not pointlessly murdered Yujin and told [[TheFool Manu]] about his plans only to give Korra reason to distrust him and the Red Lotus and for Manu to needlessly drop his cover and then [[NiceJobFixingItVillain reveal information that allowed Mako and Bolin to rescue Korra's parents]].
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* ParvumOpus: "The Heiress" has been considered the weakest chapter of the story so far with some readers stating the quality of this chapter is far below any produced before it. It could be seen as the equivalent of the Great Divide from the original series. See BrokenBase for more details.
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: While Ghazan was meant to be somewhat sympathetic, he appeared to be more so than the writers intended. Due to Ghazan being the nicest to Korra out of the Red Lotus and causing the least harm to her in comparison to Zaheer, Ming-Hua, and P’Li, readers felt that his CruelAndUnusualDeath was undeserved, especially considering that his death was far worse than them. Even though the writers have stated Ghazan did not have the best relationship with Korra since participated in kidnapping her as a child and training her to become an assassin, the fact he committed the least onscreen harm to her along with doing a number of nice things for her, such as comforting her when she cried or letting Korra keep Naga, makes it difficult for some readers to feel more sympathetic than the writers wanted. Not to mention that while Ghazan did attempt to kill Korra during the final battle, he was doing it to protect his own friends like Korra was protecting hers. It was probably not a coincidence the writers considered allowing Ghazan to be spared, and his death in Korra's nightmares during Book Two.
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** While Ghazan was meant to be somewhat sympathetic, he appeared to be more so than the writers intended. Due to Ghazan being the nicest to Korra out of the Red Lotus and causing the least harm to her in comparison to Zaheer, Ming-Hua, and P’Li, readers felt that his CruelAndUnusualDeath was undeserved, especially considering that his death was far worse than them. Even though the writers have stated Ghazan did not have the best relationship with Korra since participated in kidnapping her as a child and training her to become an assassin, the fact he committed the least onscreen harm to her along with doing a number of nice things for her, such as comforting her when she cried or letting Korra keep Naga, makes it difficult for some readers to feel more sympathetic than the writers wanted. Not to mention that while Ghazan did attempt to kill Korra during the final battle, he was doing it to protect his own friends like Korra was protecting hers. It was probably not a coincidence the writers considered allowing Ghazan to be spared, and his death in Korra's nightmares during BookTwo.Two.
** While Brock who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readers are not really meant to care about, Korra's rather InnocentlyInsensitive treatment of him during Asami's birthday has rubbed readers the wrong way, and some readers actually felt sorry for him.
** While Ghazan was meant to be somewhat sympathetic, he appeared to be more so than the writers intended. Due to Ghazan being the nicest to Korra out of the Red Lotus and causing the least harm to her in comparison to Zaheer, Ming-Hua, and P’Li, readers felt that his CruelAndUnusualDeath was undeserved, especially considering that his death was far worse than them. Even though the writers have stated Ghazan did not have the best relationship with Korra since participated in kidnapping her as a child and training her to become an assassin, the fact he committed the least onscreen harm to her along with doing a number of nice things for her, such as comforting her when she cried or letting Korra keep Naga, makes it difficult for some readers to feel more sympathetic than the writers wanted. Not to mention that while Ghazan did attempt to kill Korra during the final battle, he was doing it to protect his own friends like Korra was protecting hers. It was probably not a coincidence the writers considered allowing Ghazan to be spared, and his death in Korra's nightmares during Book
** While Brock who appeared in 'The Heiress' might have been a one shot character the readers are not really meant to care about, Korra's rather InnocentlyInsensitive treatment of him during Asami's birthday has rubbed readers the wrong way, and some readers actually felt sorry for him.
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* AssPull: During the chapter 'The Heiress,' it is stated that Asami has apparently had relations with multiple men and women in the past. This is not only something that seems to come out of nowhere, but it greatly contradicts how Asami made it clear her past was generally a FriendlessBackground and her father tried to arrange his friendships among other things. Even with Asami stating one chapter before that she 'kissed' several people in the past, nothing in the previous chapters ever indicates that she lived a lifestyle like that.
** Book Two Chapter Four 'The Heiress' has received quite a bit of mixed reactions. While the chapter was praised by how the writers did a good job making Asami's birtday seem like a large party along with Asami and Korra interacting with a fairly large number of characters, there were mixed to negative reactions to a number of other things. Fans seemed divided on whether the Kyalin relationship along with some feeling indifferent. Some fans criticized how revelations out of Asami's life seem to come out of nowhere along with a number of fans not being pleased with her scenes with Iroh. Some readers also criticized Korra's behavior towards the original character Brock. More than a few readers were not pleased at the idea that the Korrasami relationship might be heading towards a break up due to their conversation at the end of the chapter.
* DieForOurShip: Quite a few fans of the story were not pleased with some of Iroh's scenes with Asami during the Heiress. While reactions may not have necessarily reached these levels, some readers wish for Iroh to go away as well as a number of readers wish for Iroh's involvement in Asami's life to not evolve past friendship at best.
* DieForOurShip: Quite a few fans of the story were not pleased with some of Iroh's scenes with Asami during the Heiress. While reactions may not have necessarily reached these levels, some readers wish for Iroh to go away as well as a number of readers wish for Iroh's involvement in Asami's life to not evolve past friendship at best.
* {{Squick}}: Ship tease scenes between Iroh and Asami.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The writers stated they considered sparing Ghazan at the end of Book One, but decided to kill him off. This appeared to be a possible missed opportunity, due to how he was the nicest to Korra, and some readers would have been interested in any interactions he could have had with her after she was responsible for killing his friends.
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** The writers stated they considered sparing Ghazan at the end of Book One, but decided to kill him off. This appeared to be a possible missed opportunity, due to how he was the nicest to Korra, and some readers would have been interested in any interactions he could have had with her after she was responsible for killing hisfriends.friends.
** During Chapter One of Book Two, it is established that Korra is still recovering from multiple injuries she received from the Red Lotus. The writers confirmed that some of her injuries, specifically the ones on her arms, would leave scars. However, her injuries go unmentioned again during the early chapters of Book Two even though those chapters are being used to establish that the influence of the Red Lotus will continue to affect Korra's psyche. It would have been interesting to see how Korra and her friends or family would react to the fact Korra received scars or how Korra is trying to cover them up. It would have been a strong symbolic tool to further emphasis that Korra will never be truly free from the Red Lotus either physically or mentally. However, the lack of mention of the injuries during the early chapters will reduce any impact they may have if they are mentioned in a later chapter.
** In canon, Korra's CoolBigSis relationship with the Airbabies was a highlight. It would have been interesting to see how Korra's initial relationship with the Airbabies would develop in Saga during the beginning of Book Two, especially after how Korra got along with Jinora during Book One and how accepting they were of her being their grandfather's reincarnation. Additionally, Korra admits she has an easier time talking or spending time with them. Instead of receiving more screentime to develop their friendship, she only has a handful of short scenes with them and occasionally makes a reference to an off-screen moment she had with them.
** The writers stated they considered sparing Ghazan at the end of Book One, but decided to kill him off. This appeared to be a possible missed opportunity, due to how he was the nicest to Korra, and some readers would have been interested in any interactions he could have had with her after she was responsible for killing his
** During Chapter One of Book Two, it is established that Korra is still recovering from multiple injuries she received from the Red Lotus. The writers confirmed that some of her injuries, specifically the ones on her arms, would leave scars. However, her injuries go unmentioned again during the early chapters of Book Two even though those chapters are being used to establish that the influence of the Red Lotus will continue to affect Korra's psyche. It would have been interesting to see how Korra and her friends or family would react to the fact Korra received scars or how Korra is trying to cover them up. It would have been a strong symbolic tool to further emphasis that Korra will never be truly free from the Red Lotus either physically or mentally. However, the lack of mention of the injuries during the early chapters will reduce any impact they may have if they are mentioned in a later chapter.
** In canon, Korra's CoolBigSis relationship with the Airbabies was a highlight. It would have been interesting to see how Korra's initial relationship with the Airbabies would develop in Saga during the beginning of Book Two, especially after how Korra got along with Jinora during Book One and how accepting they were of her being their grandfather's reincarnation. Additionally, Korra admits she has an easier time talking or spending time with them. Instead of receiving more screentime to develop their friendship, she only has a handful of short scenes with them and occasionally makes a reference to an off-screen moment she had with them.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. The story has been praised by making it clear that while Korra is attempting to move on with her life after the Red Lotus, their deaths and her imprisonment by them have lingering effects, and it will continued to effect her well into the future.
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** Is Tenzin's more relaxed treatment of Korra, such as not putting restrictions on her while she is on the island and refraining from openly criticizing pro-bending, a result of being more understanding of her circumstances? Or does Tenzin believe that with Tonraq and Senna being on the island that it is not his place to impose restrictions on Korra with her parents present?