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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's past she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family, exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Abuse and harassment come in many forms, and are never the victim's fault.
** SlutShaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
** Little acts of kindness actually can make a big difference in someone's day, and repeated acts of kindness can make a difference in a person's life.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Abuse and harassment come in many forms, and are never the victim's fault.
** SlutShaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
** Little acts of kindness actually can make a big difference in someone's day, and repeated acts of kindness can make a difference in a person's life.
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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's past she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family, exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Abuse and harassment come in many forms, and are never the victim's fault.
** SlutShaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
** Little acts of kindness actually can make a big difference in someone's day, and repeated acts of kindness can make a difference in a person's life.amazing.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Abuse and harassment come in many forms, and are never the victim's fault.
** SlutShaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
** Little acts of kindness actually can make a big difference in someone's day, and repeated acts of kindness can make a difference in a person's life.
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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's past she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family,exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's past she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family,exhibits family, exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
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** Slut shaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
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** Slut shaming SlutShaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
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* CompleteMonster: Malum Mulciber. Although he UsedToBeASweetKid despite his CreepyChild tendencies, as a teenager he exhibits no redeeming qualities. He's a blood purist, a bully and a misogynist. He aspires to become a Death Eater, and possesses no compassion of any sort. In the first chapter alone he severely sexually harassed and arguably put Mary under a mild form of torture. Needless to say, he is far from nice.
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** Slut shaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
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** Slut shaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.bullying.
** Little acts of kindness actually can make a big difference in someone's day, and repeated acts of kindness can make a difference in a person's life.
** Little acts of kindness actually can make a big difference in someone's day, and repeated acts of kindness can make a difference in a person's life.
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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's past she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family,exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's past she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family,exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.amazing.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Abuse and harassment come in many forms, and are never the victim's fault.
** Slut shaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Abuse and harassment come in many forms, and are never the victim's fault.
** Slut shaming is a form of bullying and sexual harassment, and should not be any more acceptable than any other form of bullying.
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* HoYay: Even ignoring the official homosexuality and Subtext, this fanfic still has its fair share.
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* HoYay: Even ignoring the official homosexuality and Subtext, subtext, this fanfic still has its fair share.
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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's TragicPast she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family,exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
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* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's
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* CompleteMonster: Malum Mulciber. Although he UsedToBeASweetKid despite his CreepyChild tendencies, as a teenager he exhibits no redeeming qualities. He's a blood purist, a bully and a misogynist. He aspires to become a Death Eater, and possesses no compassion of any sort. In the first chapter alone he severely sexually harassed and arguably put Mary under a mild form of torture. Needless to say, he is far from nice.
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* CompleteMonster: Malum Mulciber. Although he UsedToBeASweetKid despite his CreepyChild tendencies, as a teenager he exhibits no redeeming qualities. He's a blood purist, a bully and a misogynist. He aspires to become a Death Eater, and possesses no compassion of any sort. In the first chapter alone he severely sexually harassed and arguably put Mary under a mild form of torture. Needless to say, he is far from nice.nice.
* HoYay: Even ignoring the official homosexuality and Subtext, this fanfic still has its fair share.
** James compliments Regulus on his butt and the size of his... package in Chapter 13.
** Sirius' apology to Remus is rather intense, so much so that he feels like his heart is breaking. Meanwhile, Remus is uncharacteristically brittle and bitter about it.
* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's TragicPast she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family,exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
* HoYay: Even ignoring the official homosexuality and Subtext, this fanfic still has its fair share.
** James compliments Regulus on his butt and the size of his... package in Chapter 13.
** Sirius' apology to Remus is rather intense, so much so that he feels like his heart is breaking. Meanwhile, Remus is uncharacteristically brittle and bitter about it.
* IronWoobie: Leslie and Mary. Despite Mary's TragicPast she continues to work hard in all of her classes and earn money to support her family,exhibits remarkable resilience for someone in her situation, and doesn't wallow in self-pity. Meanwhile, Leslie doesn't let anything phase her, despite the kind of household she grew up in and the fact that her best friend and crush just died. Of course, this doesn't prevent her from being depressed, but the fact that she (almost) never breaks down is amazing.
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* CompleteMonster: Malum Mulciber. Although he UsedToBeASweetKid despite his CreepyChild tendencies, as a teenager he exhibits no redeeming qualities. He's a blood purist, a bully and a misogynist. He aspires to become a Death Eater, and possesses no compassion of any sort. In the first chapter alone he severely sexually harassed and arguably put Mary under a mild form of torture.
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* CompleteMonster: Malum Mulciber. Although he UsedToBeASweetKid despite his CreepyChild tendencies, as a teenager he exhibits no redeeming qualities. He's a blood purist, a bully and a misogynist. He aspires to become a Death Eater, and possesses no compassion of any sort. In the first chapter alone he severely sexually harassed and arguably put Mary under a mild form of torture. Needless to say, he is far from nice.
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** Maria Zabini: Does she honestly love Mulciber, or is it just infatuation? Just how naive is she to his true colors? Is she a kind but clueless girl, trying to be a dutiful daughter, or simply can't let go of the image she's had of him since they were children?
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** Maria Zabini: Does she honestly love Mulciber, or is it just infatuation? Just how naive is she to his true colors? Is she a kind but clueless girl, trying to be a dutiful daughter, or simply can't let go of the image she's had of him since they were children?children?
* CompleteMonster: Malum Mulciber. Although he UsedToBeASweetKid despite his CreepyChild tendencies, as a teenager he exhibits no redeeming qualities. He's a blood purist, a bully and a misogynist. He aspires to become a Death Eater, and possesses no compassion of any sort. In the first chapter alone he severely sexually harassed and arguably put Mary under a mild form of torture.
* CompleteMonster: Malum Mulciber. Although he UsedToBeASweetKid despite his CreepyChild tendencies, as a teenager he exhibits no redeeming qualities. He's a blood purist, a bully and a misogynist. He aspires to become a Death Eater, and possesses no compassion of any sort. In the first chapter alone he severely sexually harassed and arguably put Mary under a mild form of torture.
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** James Potter: Does he really love Lily yet, or at this point is it mere infatuation?
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** James Potter: Does he really love Lily yet, or at this point is it mere infatuation?infatuation?
** Florence: Is she a bad friend for pursuing Alton despite knowing of Bertha's crush on him, or is she in the right to pursue someone she's interested in?
** Maria Zabini: Does she honestly love Mulciber, or is it just infatuation? Just how naive is she to his true colors? Is she a kind but clueless girl, trying to be a dutiful daughter, or simply can't let go of the image she's had of him since they were children?
** Florence: Is she a bad friend for pursuing Alton despite knowing of Bertha's crush on him, or is she in the right to pursue someone she's interested in?
** Maria Zabini: Does she honestly love Mulciber, or is it just infatuation? Just how naive is she to his true colors? Is she a kind but clueless girl, trying to be a dutiful daughter, or simply can't let go of the image she's had of him since they were children?
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** The Marauders: Well-intentioned pranksters who just don't always know where to draw the line, or band of bullies who are just looking for an excuse to cause havoc? Or maybe a bit of both?
** Severus Snape: An otherwise good guy involved in a bad crowd, or a creep asides from his love for Lily? Or somewhere in between?
** JamesPotter:Potter: Does he really love Lily yet, or at this point is it mere infatuation?
** Severus Snape: An otherwise good guy involved in a bad crowd, or a creep asides from his love for Lily? Or somewhere in between?
** James
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