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* BetterThanCanon: The author states he's on a quest to, as he puts it, fix everything that was wrong with a below average Yu-Gi-Oh anime that had so much potential to be good and just wasn't.
** So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.
** So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.
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* CatharsisFactor: After all that Tron has done, seeing [[spoiler:him on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle from Merag]] is nothing short of satisfying.
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* CatharsisFactor: After CatharsisFactor:
**After all that Tron has done, seeing [[spoiler:him on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle from Merag]] is nothing short of satisfying.
**After all that Tron has done, seeing [[spoiler:him on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle from Merag]] is nothing short of satisfying.
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* NightmareFuel: The graphic way in which Carrion was murdered by [[spoiler: Kotori when she became possessed by Number 96]] after defeating him in a duel.
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* NightmareFuel: NightmareFuel:
** The graphic way in which Carrion was murdered by [[spoiler: Kotori when she became possessed by Number 96]] after defeating him in a duel.
** The graphic way in which Carrion was murdered by [[spoiler: Kotori when she became possessed by Number 96]] after defeating him in a duel.
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's key themes and tone, and instead tries to make it more like 5D's.
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's key themes and tone, and instead tries to make it more like 5D's.
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's themes while trying to make it better, instead trying to make it more like 5D's.
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's key themes while trying to make it better, and tone, and instead trying tries to make it more like 5D's.
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* BetterThanCanon: The author states he's on a quest to, as he puts it, fix everything that was wrong with a below average Yu-Gi-Oh anime that had so much potential to be good and just wasn't. So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.
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* BetterThanCanon: The author states he's on a quest to, as he puts it, fix everything that was wrong with a below average Yu-Gi-Oh anime that had so much potential to be good and just wasn't.
** So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.
** So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.
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** On a similar note, considering everything Number 96 has done [[spoiler: possessing Kotori being the big one]] it is nothing short of satisfying when [spoiler: Kotori is the one to defeat him which then leads to him being killed by Number 43]]
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** On a similar note, considering everything Number 96 has done [[spoiler: possessing Kotori being the big one]] it is nothing short of satisfying when [spoiler: [[spoiler: Kotori is the one to defeat deliver him some much deserved payback by defeating him in a duel which then leads to him being killed by Number 43]]43 immediately afterwards]]
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** On a similar note, considering everything Number 96 has done [[spoiler: possessing Kotori being the big one]] it is nothing short of satisfying when [spoiler: Kotori is the one to defeat him which then leads to him being killed by Number 43]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Tron crossed it after he [[spoiler:put Number 43 in III, his own son's deck, knowing what could potentially happen]]. This is ultimately what causes [[spoiler:V to betray him]], making this an in-universe example at the very least.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Tron crossed it after he [[spoiler:put Number 43 in III, his own son's deck, knowing what could potentially happen]]. This is ultimately what causes [[spoiler:V to betray him]], making this an in-universe example at the very least.least.
* NightmareFuel: The graphic way in which Carrion was murdered by [[spoiler: Kotori when she became possessed by Number 96]] after defeating him in a duel.
** Kotori's Transformation when she activates Rank Up Magic Barian's Force during her duel with Yuma.
** Tron's Skull like scars made out of Barian Crystals on half of his face which replaced the space void from canon.
* NightmareFuel: The graphic way in which Carrion was murdered by [[spoiler: Kotori when she became possessed by Number 96]] after defeating him in a duel.
** Kotori's Transformation when she activates Rank Up Magic Barian's Force during her duel with Yuma.
** Tron's Skull like scars made out of Barian Crystals on half of his face which replaced the space void from canon.
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* CatharsisFactor: After all that Tron has done, seeing [[spoiler:him on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle from Merag is nothing short of satisfying]].
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* CatharsisFactor: After all that Tron has done, seeing [[spoiler:him on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle from Merag Merag]] is nothing short of satisfying]].satisfying.
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* CatharsisFactor: After all that Tron has done, seeing [[spoiler:him on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle from Merag is nothing short of satisfying]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: Tron crossed it after he [[spoiler:put Number 43 in III, his own son's deck, knowing what could potentially happen]]. This is ultimately what causes [[spoiler:V to betray him]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: Tron crossed it after he [[spoiler:put Number 43 in III, his own son's deck, knowing what could potentially happen]]. This is ultimately what causes [[spoiler:V to betray him]].him]], making this an in-universe example at the very least.
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's themes while trying to make it better, instead trying to make it more like 5D's.
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's themes while trying to make it better, instead trying to make it more like 5D's.5D's.
* MoralEventHorizon: Tron crossed it after he [[spoiler:put Number 43 in III, his own son's deck, knowing what could potentially happen]]. This is ultimately what causes [[spoiler:V to betray him]].
* MoralEventHorizon: Tron crossed it after he [[spoiler:put Number 43 in III, his own son's deck, knowing what could potentially happen]]. This is ultimately what causes [[spoiler:V to betray him]].
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's themes while trying to make it better.
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* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's themes while trying to make it better.better, instead trying to make it more like 5D's.
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* BetterThanCanon: The author states he's on a quest to, as he puts it, fix everything that was wrong with a below average Yu-Gi-Oh anime that had so much potential to be good and just wasn't. So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.
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* BetterThanCanon: The author states he's on a quest to, as he puts it, fix everything that was wrong with a below average Yu-Gi-Oh anime that had so much potential to be good and just wasn't. So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.whole.
* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's themes while trying to make it better.
* BrokenBase: Some fans are fine with the Darker and Edgier take of this fic, while others are not feeling that the fic lost sight of Zexal's themes while trying to make it better.
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* BetterThanCanon: The author states he's on a quest to, as he puts it, fix everything that was wrong with a below average Yu-Gi-Oh anime that had so much potential to be good and just wasn't. So far his quest to improve ZEXAL is relatively successful, with the greatest strengths of the story being intense action from well written duels, a romance that enhances the plot instead of dominating over it, and three dimensional characters that are much more fleshed out from their original counterparts and given more opportunities to shine, all the while carrying a sense of respect for the audience and the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise as a whole.
