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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Fans have noted that the relationship between Sonia and Lee is very similar to the relationship between Sly and Carmelita in the "Sly Cooper" series. Both of them are on the opposite sides of the law, both have feelings for each other, and both hate criminals without morals.
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* LesYay: Between Miranda Moreau and Marguerite. The former [[AmbiguouslyGay gets flustered every time she talks about the latter]].
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* TheScrappy: The MC's character is surprisingly disdained by the fandom, due to their awkwardness and incompetence despite being a criminal mastermind.
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* TheScrappy: The MC's Lee's character is surprisingly disdained by the fandom, due to their awkwardness and incompetence despite being a criminal mastermind.
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** Eris instantly gained several fans as soon as a sneak peak featuring her character model was released. Several players who aren't romancing have voiced their appreciation for her character due to being spontaneous and having a fun personality.
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** Eris instantly gained several fans as soon as a sneak peak featuring her character model was released. Several players who aren't romancing Eris have voiced their appreciation for her character due to being spontaneous and having a fun personality.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Samira "Blackbird" Yazdi gets this, despite initially being an EnsembleDarkHorse. While there are still several people who like her, she has some detractors, who are annoyed by her HairTriggerTemper and her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Samira "Blackbird" Yazdi gets this, despite initially being an EnsembleDarkHorse. While there are still several people who like her, she has some detractors, who are annoyed by her HairTriggerTemper and her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person. Some people who originally recruited her ended up replaying the story to recruit Anton instead.
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* {{Narm}}: Samira Yazdi's lines can come off a bit awkward, as she often switches from calm and professional to worried to angry.
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* {{Narm}}: Samira Yazdi's lines can come off a bit awkward, as she often switches from calm and professional to worried to angry.angry.
* TheScrappy: The MC's character is surprisingly disdained by the fandom, due to their awkwardness and incompetence despite being a criminal mastermind.
** Sybil is this to a lesser degree, her quirks putting off some fans.
* TheScrappy: The MC's character is surprisingly disdained by the fandom, due to their awkwardness and incompetence despite being a criminal mastermind.
** Sybil is this to a lesser degree, her quirks putting off some fans.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Samira "Blackbird" Yazdi gets this, despite initially being an EnsembleDarkHorse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Samira "Blackbird" Yazdi gets this, despite initially being an EnsembleDarkHorse. While there are still several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they detractors, who are put-off annoyed by a lot of her text showing up in red HairTriggerTemper and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.person.
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** Samira Yazdi is quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], [[TheAce ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye]], sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
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** Samira Yazdi is was quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], [[TheAce ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye]], sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
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* {{Narm}}: Samira Yazdi's lines can come off a bit awkward, a lot of the text show up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part.
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* {{Narm}}: Samira Yazdi's lines can come off a bit awkward, a lot of the text show up in red as she often switches from calm and she has an angry expression for the most part.professional to worried to angry.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Samira "Blackbird" Yazdi gets this despite being an EnsembleDarkHorse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Samira "Blackbird" Yazdi gets this this, despite initially being an EnsembleDarkHorse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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** Samira Yazdi is quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye, sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
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** Samira Yazdi is quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], [[TheAce ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye, eye]], sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
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* MemeticMutation: Bobby Low-Blow, Uppercut Jones' opponent in the wrestling ring, is often mocked for having a very weird looking face.
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* MemeticMutation: Bobby Low-Blow, Uppercut Jones' opponent in the wrestling ring, is often mocked for having a very weird looking face.face.
* {{Narm}}: Samira Yazdi's lines can come off a bit awkward, a lot of the text show up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part.
* {{Narm}}: Samira Yazdi's lines can come off a bit awkward, a lot of the text show up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Blackbird gets this despite being an Ensemble Dark Horse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Blackbird Samira "Blackbird" Yazdi gets this despite being an Ensemble Dark Horse.EnsembleDarkHorse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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** Anton Edison if he is chosen as a hacker. He is a TeenGenius with {{Adorkable}} personality, and funny interactions with his fellow teammates, especially if the Premium option to recruit his father is taken.
** Uppercut Jones if he is chosen as a muscle over Lena. He is a hardworking GentleGiant who dreams of running his own wrestling federation his own way, and tries to choose non-violent methods whenever possible.
** Uppercut Jones if he is chosen as a muscle over Lena. He is a hardworking GentleGiant who dreams of running his own wrestling federation his own way, and tries to choose non-violent methods whenever possible.
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* BaseBreakingCharcter: Blackbird gets this despite being an Ensemble Dark Horse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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* BaseBreakingCharcter: BaseBreakingCharacter: Blackbird gets this despite being an Ensemble Dark Horse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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* Base-BreakingCharcter: Blackbird gets this despite being an Ensemble Dark Horse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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* Base-BreakingCharcter: BaseBreakingCharcter: Blackbird gets this despite being an Ensemble Dark Horse. While there are several people who like her, she has some detractors. They have stated how they are put-off by a lot of her text showing up in red and she has an angry expression for the most part, leading some to believe that she has anger issues. They also find her tendency to talk about her alias in the third person annoying, believing that she could be a narcissist.
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base-breaking character. I know she has a large fanbase, but a good chunk of people legitimately don't like her.
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** The Grifter. Should Lee choose Peter Graves, a method actor with dreams of making it in Hollywood, or Miranda Moreau, a woman who has ties to the Royal Family of Monaco?
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** Eris instantly gained several fans as soon as a sneak peak featuring her character model was released. Several players who aren't romancing have voiced their appreciation for her character due to being spontaneous and having a fun personality.
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* FanPreferredCouple: Many fans' heart were shattered when it was confirmed that Uppercut Jones is not a Love Interest.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Samira Yazdi is quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye, sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: EnsembleDarkhorse:
** Samira Yazdi is quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye, sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
** Samira Yazdi is quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye, sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
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Hate Sink would seem to be the appropriate trope, which isn't listed as YMMV.
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* MemeticMutation: Bobby Low-Blow, Uppercut Jones' opponent in the wrestling ring, is often mocked for having a very weird looking face.
%%* TheScrappy: Ansel Crane became this after one chapter. He sells out Lee's heist crew to the Police, which results in Eris getting arrested. He then promotes himself as a security expert who can outthink and catch any thief.
%%* TheScrappy: Ansel Crane became this after one chapter. He sells out Lee's heist crew to the Police, which results in Eris getting arrested. He then promotes himself as a security expert who can outthink and catch any thief.
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* MemeticMutation: Bobby Low-Blow, Uppercut Jones' opponent in the wrestling ring, is often mocked for having a very weird looking face.
%%* TheScrappy: Ansel Crane became this after one chapter. He sells out Lee's heist crew to the Police, which results in Eris getting arrested. He then promotes himself as a security expert who can outthink and catch any thief.face.
%%* TheScrappy: Ansel Crane became this after one chapter. He sells out Lee's heist crew to the Police, which results in Eris getting arrested. He then promotes himself as a security expert who can outthink and catch any thief.
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** Sonia is well liked to the point that several people are hoping that she becomes a love interest.
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I've made the example of Ansel being The Scrappy invisible for now because the audience isn't supposed to like Ansel: he's the antagonist after all, so he's not a scrappy. I've made it invisible instead lf deleting it because it's a good write up, so if any one finds a good alternate trope to put, go ahead. 🙂
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** The Driver. Should Lee choose Fabien Ahmad, a banned F-1 Driver, or Tillie Marshall, a former X-Games driver who has lost her sponsorships? Complicating matters is the fact that both of them are love interests.
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** The Driver. Should Lee choose Fabien Ahmad, a banned F-1 Driver, racer, or Tillie Marshall, a former X-Games driver racer who has lost her sponsorships? Complicating matters is the fact that both of them are love interests.
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** The Driver. Should Lee choose Fabien Ahmad, a banned F-1 Driver, or Tillie Marshall, a former X-Games driver who has lost her sponsorships. Complicating matters is the fact that both of them are love interests.
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** The Driver. Should Lee choose Fabien Ahmad, a banned F-1 Driver, or Tillie Marshall, a former X-Games driver who has lost her sponsorships. sponsorships? Complicating matters is the fact that both of them are love interests.
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** The Driver. Should Lee choose Fabien Ahmad, a banned F-1 Driver, or Tillie Marshall, a former X-Games driver who has lost her sponsorships. Complicating matters is the fact that both of them are love interests.
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** The Classic Thief. Should Lee choose Sybil, a nimble but eccentric thief, or Niles Edison, a master criminal known as Eddie Quick who is Anton's father and has numerous connections.
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** The Classic Thief. Should Lee choose Sybil, a nimble but eccentric thief, or Niles Edison, a master criminal known as Eddie Quick who is Anton's father and has numerous connections.connections?
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** The Classic Thief. Should Lee choose Sybil, a nimble but eccentric thief, or Niles Edison, a master criminal known as Eddie Quick, Anton's father, and has numerous connections to various criminals?
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** The Classic Thief. Should Lee choose Sybil, a nimble but eccentric thief, or Niles Edison, a master criminal known as Eddie Quick, Quick who is Anton's father, father and has numerous connections to various criminals?connections.
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** The Classic Thief. Should Lee choose Sybil, a nimble but eccentric thief, or Niles Edison, a master criminal known as Eddie Quick, Anton's father, and has numerous connections to various criminals?
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Samira Yazdi is quickly beloved by the fandom for her passionate personality, [[GoodParents efforts to provide the best she could for her daughter]], ability to look up databases in the blink of an eye, sense of justice when she took down corrupt governments and corporations, and being the first character to wear a hijab.
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* Author'sSavingThrow: The book tackles several issues that Choices players have previously bemoaned about such as playing as a criminal, having Rye and Eris being jealous of each other over Lee's affections, and giving players the choice to choose their Heist Crew.
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* Author'sSavingThrow: AuthorsSavingThrow: The book tackles several issues that Choices players have previously bemoaned about such as playing as a criminal, having Rye and Eris being jealous of each other over Lee's affections, and giving players the choice to choose their Heist Crew.
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** The Hacker. Should Lee choose Anton Edison, the son of a master thief Eddie Quick, or Samira Yazdi, a Vigilante Hacker known as Blackbird?
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** The Hacker. Should Lee choose Anton Edison, the son of a master thief known as Eddie Quick, or Samira Yazdi, a Vigilante Hacker known as Blackbird?
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* MemeticMutation: Bobby Low-Blow, Uppercut Jones' opponent in the wrestling ring, is often mocked for having a very weird looking face.
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*TheScrappy: Ansel Crane became this after one chapter. He sells out Lee's heist crew to the Police, which results in Eris getting arrested. He then promotes himself as a security expert who can outthink and catch any thief.
*TheScrappy: Ansel Crane became this after one chapter. He sells out Lee's heist crew to the Police, which results in Eris getting arrested. He then promotes himself as a security expert who can outthink and catch any thief.
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*Author'sSavingThrow: The book tackles several issues that Choices players have previously bemoaned about such as playing as a criminal, having Rye and Eris being jealous of each other over Lee's affections, and giving players the choice to choose their Heist Crew.
*BrokenBase: Given that you can choose members of your heist crew, this happens frequently.
** The Hacker. Should Lee choose Anton Edison, the son of a master thief Eddie Quick, or Samira Yazdi, a Vigilante Hacker known as Blackbird?
** The Muscle. Should Lee choose Mervin Kalani, a gentle giant wrestler known as Uppercut Jones, or Lena Ortiz, Ansel's ex-girlfriend who knows all of his strengths and weaknesses?
*MemeticMutation: Bobby Low-Blow, Uppercut Jones' opponent in the wrestling ring, is often mocked for having a very weird looking face.
*BrokenBase: Given that you can choose members of your heist crew, this happens frequently.
** The Hacker. Should Lee choose Anton Edison, the son of a master thief Eddie Quick, or Samira Yazdi, a Vigilante Hacker known as Blackbird?
** The Muscle. Should Lee choose Mervin Kalani, a gentle giant wrestler known as Uppercut Jones, or Lena Ortiz, Ansel's ex-girlfriend who knows all of his strengths and weaknesses?
*MemeticMutation: Bobby Low-Blow, Uppercut Jones' opponent in the wrestling ring, is often mocked for having a very weird looking face.
