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* {{Heartwarming}}: Gabor's password hint is "My treasure". His password is LIVIMANDYELLIE - the names of his three daughters. Aww.
** And then proceeds to go straight into FridgeLogic territory right after when his desktop wallpaper mentions "a woman and three young girls", presumably his wife and daughters. Apparently he doesn't love his wife as much as he loves his daughters. It would be nice to add that his wife is still alive and they're still together.
** And then proceeds to go straight into FridgeLogic territory right after when his desktop wallpaper mentions "a woman and three young girls", presumably his wife and daughters. Apparently he doesn't love his wife as much as he loves his daughters. It would be nice to add that his wife is still alive and they're still together.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Gabor's password hint is "My treasure". His password is LIVIMANDYELLIE - the names of his three daughters. Aww.
** And then proceeds to go straight into FridgeLogic territory right after when his desktop wallpaper mentions "a woman and three young girls", presumably his wife and daughters. Apparently he doesn't love his wife as much as he loves his daughters. It would be nice to add that his wife is still alive and they're still together.
** And then proceeds to go straight into FridgeLogic territory right after when his desktop wallpaper mentions "a woman and three young girls", presumably his wife and daughters. Apparently he doesn't love his wife as much as he loves his daughters. It would be nice to add that his wife is still alive and they're still together.
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** Teremy describes a lot of sounds using musical references and terms. As he keeps doing this it goes from "okay" to this and then straight on to "irritating".
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** Teremy describes a lot of sounds using musical references and terms. As he keeps doing this it goes from "okay" to this and then straight on to "irritating".
"irritating".
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* UnfortunateImplications: The second book has a few.
** Alex and Teremy's discussion on the general population's lack of empathy to the repulsion illness seems to insinuate that people in general are stupid by nature and would rather hide than face the truth. There is no further exploring of the psychology behind this, and the book simply leaves it as the reason for Geminate's population being so compliant to DANDY's words on the repulsion illness.
** Dan Dynamo's act matches the speech and behaviour of the stereotypical religious [[TheFundamentalist fanatic]]. Couple that with Dan Dynamo being one of the bad guys, and we have a "religious fundamentalists are evil" implication lurking around.
** Alex and Teremy's discussion on the general population's lack of empathy to the repulsion illness seems to insinuate that people in general are stupid by nature and would rather hide than face the truth. There is no further exploring of the psychology behind this, and the book simply leaves it as the reason for Geminate's population being so compliant to DANDY's words on the repulsion illness.
** Dan Dynamo's act matches the speech and behaviour of the stereotypical religious [[TheFundamentalist fanatic]]. Couple that with Dan Dynamo being one of the bad guys, and we have a "religious fundamentalists are evil" implication lurking around.
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** Dan Dynamo's act matches the words and behaviour of a religious fundamentalist. Couple that with Dan Dynamo being one of the bad guys, and we have a "religious fundamentalists are evil" implication lurking around.
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** Dan Dynamo's act matches the words speech and behaviour of a the stereotypical religious fundamentalist.[[TheFundamentalist fanatic]]. Couple that with Dan Dynamo being one of the bad guys, and we have a "religious fundamentalists are evil" implication lurking around.
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* Heartwarming: Gabor's password hint is "My treasure". His password is LIVIMANDYELLIE - the names of his three daughters. Aww.
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* Heartwarming: {{Heartwarming}}: Gabor's password hint is "My treasure". His password is LIVIMANDYELLIE - the names of his three daughters. Aww.
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* {{Funny}}: Heartwarming: Gabor's password hint is "My treasure". His password is LIVIMANDYELLIE - the names of his three daughters. Aww.
** And then proceeds to go straight into FridgeLogic territory right after when his desktop wallpaper mentions "a woman and three young girls", presumably his wife and daughters. Apparently he doesn't love his wife as much as he loves his daughters. It would be nice to add that his wife is still alive and they're still together.
* FridgeLogic:
** When Gabor walks in on Livi breaking into his computer while Teremy watches from the other side of the desk, Teremy goes to stand next to Livi. If they had wanted to look innocent, Livi should have been the one to stand where Teremy is. Gabor doesn't even care about the sloppy attempt to break into his computer, even typing the password for them to see.
** Teremy mentions that a computer program on Gabor's computer "took five years to boot up". Considering the story is set in a "distant future", either Teremy is just impatient or DANDY is too poor to upgrade their computers.
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** And then proceeds to go straight into FridgeLogic territory right after when his desktop wallpaper mentions "a woman and three young girls", presumably his wife and daughters. Apparently he doesn't love his wife as much as he loves his daughters. It would be nice to add that his wife is still alive and they're still together.
* FridgeLogic:
** When Gabor walks in on Livi breaking into his computer while Teremy watches from the other side of the desk, Teremy goes to stand next to Livi. If they had wanted to look innocent, Livi should have been the one to stand where Teremy is. Gabor doesn't even care about the sloppy attempt to break into his computer, even typing the password for them to see.
** Teremy mentions that a computer program on Gabor's computer "took five years to boot up". Considering the story is set in a "distant future", either Teremy is just impatient or DANDY is too poor to upgrade their computers.
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** This exchange:
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-->'''Jeremy:''' "Okay, okay, you're under arrest for ''using'' your prick--"
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-->'''Jeremy:''' "Okay, okay, you're under arrest for ''using'' your prick--"prick--"
** Teremy's lack of social graces leads to gems like:
---> (after being shouted at by a haywire for "handling" him) "Your "handle with care" sign fell off."
---> (in response to looking at a sweaty boy's face to see a supposed glimmer of happines) "If that's the poster picture of happiness, may the world drown in a sea of perspiration."
* Narm:
** ''Doo-doo'' is the unlocking sound Gabor's computer makes when the right password is typed.
** Both Loveless and Dan Dynamo's way of talking dive straight into this territory, swim around and have fun. It is incredibly difficult to take them seriously.
** Teremy describes a lot of sounds using musical references and terms. As he keeps doing this it goes from "okay" to this and then straight on to "irritating".
* UnfortunateImplications: The second book has a few.
** Alex and Teremy's discussion on the general population's lack of empathy to the repulsion illness seems to insinuate that people in general are stupid by nature and would rather hide than face the truth. There is no further exploring of the psychology behind this, and the book simply leaves it as the reason for Geminate's population being so compliant to DANDY's words on the repulsion illness.
** Dan Dynamo's act matches the words and behaviour of a religious fundamentalist. Couple that with Dan Dynamo being one of the bad guys, and we have a "religious fundamentalists are evil" implication lurking around.
** Teremy's lack of social graces leads to gems like:
---> (after being shouted at by a haywire for "handling" him) "Your "handle with care" sign fell off."
---> (in response to looking at a sweaty boy's face to see a supposed glimmer of happines) "If that's the poster picture of happiness, may the world drown in a sea of perspiration."
* Narm:
** ''Doo-doo'' is the unlocking sound Gabor's computer makes when the right password is typed.
** Both Loveless and Dan Dynamo's way of talking dive straight into this territory, swim around and have fun. It is incredibly difficult to take them seriously.
** Teremy describes a lot of sounds using musical references and terms. As he keeps doing this it goes from "okay" to this and then straight on to "irritating".
* UnfortunateImplications: The second book has a few.
** Alex and Teremy's discussion on the general population's lack of empathy to the repulsion illness seems to insinuate that people in general are stupid by nature and would rather hide than face the truth. There is no further exploring of the psychology behind this, and the book simply leaves it as the reason for Geminate's population being so compliant to DANDY's words on the repulsion illness.
** Dan Dynamo's act matches the words and behaviour of a religious fundamentalist. Couple that with Dan Dynamo being one of the bad guys, and we have a "religious fundamentalists are evil" implication lurking around.
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* {{Funny}}: This exchange:
-->'''Jeremy:''' "You're under arrest for being a prick!"
-->'''Gabor:''' "Itsubishi! That's not the proper charge!"
-->'''Jeremy:''' "Okay, okay, you're under arrest for ''using'' your prick--"
-->'''Jeremy:''' "You're under arrest for being a prick!"
-->'''Gabor:''' "Itsubishi! That's not the proper charge!"
-->'''Jeremy:''' "Okay, okay, you're under arrest for ''using'' your prick--"
