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* Unintentionally Unsympathetic: Mustard. The fic goes out of his way to make you feel sorry for him, especially when it reveals he used to be a bullied kid abused by [[AdaptationalJerkass Shindo]] with the teachers unwillingly or unable to help him. Except his reaction was to ''hire a serial killer, bring him at his school and tell him to kill his bully''. Worse, said killer was the Sludge Villain, who planned to kill Shindo by taking over his body and Quirk, with Mustard not caring [[FridgeHorror what a villain could do with Shindo's powerful Quirk]]. Yet we are supposed to feel bad when he is arrested for, again, '' hiring a killer ''.
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* Unintentionally Unsympathetic: UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Mustard. The fic goes out of his way to make you feel sorry for him, especially when it reveals he used to be a bullied kid abused by [[AdaptationalJerkass Shindo]] with the teachers unwillingly or unable to help him. Except his reaction was to ''hire a serial killer, bring him at his school and tell him to kill his bully''. Worse, said killer was the Sludge Villain, who planned to kill Shindo by taking over his body and Quirk, with Mustard not caring [[FridgeHorror what a villain could do with Shindo's powerful Quirk]]. Yet we are supposed to feel bad when he is arrested for, again, '' hiring a killer ''.
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* Narm: The narration tries a little too hard to make Toga some sort on unholy, HumanoidAbomination, especially when you remember that, craziness aside, she is a teenager with knives. Sure, when Izuku and Mei were tied up with her, it was scary, but she really shouldn't cause ''Endeavor'' of all people to shake with fear.
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* Narm: {{Narm}}: The narration tries a little too hard to make Toga some sort on unholy, HumanoidAbomination, especially when you remember that, craziness aside, she is a teenager with knives. Sure, when Izuku and Mei were tied up with her, it was scary, but she really shouldn't cause ''Endeavor'' of all people to shake with fear.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Along with the author's other story Fanfic/BloodSexSugarMagic, this story's Toga can use the Quirks of the people she's copied... and then came chapter 226 of the Manga, [[spoiler: where canon Toga shows she can do it by using Ochako's Quirk on Miss Curious and her soldiers]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: Along with the author's other story Fanfic/BloodSexSugarMagic, this story's Toga can use the Quirks of the people she's copied... and then came chapter 226 of the Manga, [[spoiler: where canon Toga shows she can do it by using Ochako's Quirk on Miss Curious and her soldiers]].soldiers]].
* Narm: The narration tries a little too hard to make Toga some sort on unholy, HumanoidAbomination, especially when you remember that, craziness aside, she is a teenager with knives. Sure, when Izuku and Mei were tied up with her, it was scary, but she really shouldn't cause ''Endeavor'' of all people to shake with fear.
* Unintentionally Unsympathetic: Mustard. The fic goes out of his way to make you feel sorry for him, especially when it reveals he used to be a bullied kid abused by [[AdaptationalJerkass Shindo]] with the teachers unwillingly or unable to help him. Except his reaction was to ''hire a serial killer, bring him at his school and tell him to kill his bully''. Worse, said killer was the Sludge Villain, who planned to kill Shindo by taking over his body and Quirk, with Mustard not caring [[FridgeHorror what a villain could do with Shindo's powerful Quirk]]. Yet we are supposed to feel bad when he is arrested for, again, '' hiring a killer ''.
** Midoriya, too, when he learns of Mustard's backstory. Feeling a connection with him due to both being bullied? Understandable. Thinking that he can't blame him? Less so. Attacking the guy who was almost killed by the Sludge Villain and telling to his face he should' ve died? Dick move. It is especially jarring since [[DoubleStandard Izuku felt that showing a video that proved Bakugo was an asshole was crossing a line, but murder is apparently A-OK.]]
* Narm: The narration tries a little too hard to make Toga some sort on unholy, HumanoidAbomination, especially when you remember that, craziness aside, she is a teenager with knives. Sure, when Izuku and Mei were tied up with her, it was scary, but she really shouldn't cause ''Endeavor'' of all people to shake with fear.
* Unintentionally Unsympathetic: Mustard. The fic goes out of his way to make you feel sorry for him, especially when it reveals he used to be a bullied kid abused by [[AdaptationalJerkass Shindo]] with the teachers unwillingly or unable to help him. Except his reaction was to ''hire a serial killer, bring him at his school and tell him to kill his bully''. Worse, said killer was the Sludge Villain, who planned to kill Shindo by taking over his body and Quirk, with Mustard not caring [[FridgeHorror what a villain could do with Shindo's powerful Quirk]]. Yet we are supposed to feel bad when he is arrested for, again, '' hiring a killer ''.
** Midoriya, too, when he learns of Mustard's backstory. Feeling a connection with him due to both being bullied? Understandable. Thinking that he can't blame him? Less so. Attacking the guy who was almost killed by the Sludge Villain and telling to his face he should' ve died? Dick move. It is especially jarring since [[DoubleStandard Izuku felt that showing a video that proved Bakugo was an asshole was crossing a line, but murder is apparently A-OK.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: In and out of universe, every time we see [[spoiler: Hagakure, it's actually Toga.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: In and out of universe, every time we see [[spoiler: Hagakure, it's actually Toga.]]]]
* HilariousInHindsight: Along with the author's other story Fanfic/BloodSexSugarMagic, this story's Toga can use the Quirks of the people she's copied... and then came chapter 226 of the Manga, [[spoiler: where canon Toga shows she can do it by using Ochako's Quirk on Miss Curious and her soldiers]].
* HilariousInHindsight: Along with the author's other story Fanfic/BloodSexSugarMagic, this story's Toga can use the Quirks of the people she's copied... and then came chapter 226 of the Manga, [[spoiler: where canon Toga shows she can do it by using Ochako's Quirk on Miss Curious and her soldiers]].
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* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type. She's eventually revealed to be Hagakure]].
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* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type. She's eventually revealed to be Hagakure]].Hagakure]].
* HarsherInHindsight: In and out of universe, every time we see [[spoiler: Hagakure, it's actually Toga.]]
* HarsherInHindsight: In and out of universe, every time we see [[spoiler: Hagakure, it's actually Toga.]]
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* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type. She's eventually revealed to be Hagakure]].
* TakeThatScrappy: Downplayed given that he's not an actual scrappy but Aizawa gets called out and shut down several times within the story because [[WordOfGod IllMadeKnight]] believed he "doesn't get enough crap for all his screw ups".
* TakeThatScrappy: Downplayed given that he's not an actual scrappy but Aizawa gets called out and shut down several times within the story because [[WordOfGod IllMadeKnight]] believed he "doesn't get enough crap for all his screw ups".
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* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type. She's eventually revealed to be Hagakure]].
* TakeThatScrappy: Downplayed given that he's not an actual scrappy but Aizawa gets called out and shut down several times within the story because [[WordOfGod IllMadeKnight]] believed he "doesn't get enough crap for all his screw ups".Hagakure]].
* TakeThatScrappy: Downplayed given that he's not an actual scrappy but Aizawa gets called out and shut down several times within the story because [[WordOfGod IllMadeKnight]] believed he "doesn't get enough crap for all his screw ups".
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* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type]].
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* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type]].type. She's eventually revealed to be Hagakure]].
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Uraraka. Some love her for taking Mineta's perversion but taking it to a point where it's basically RefugeInAudacity. Others hate her for essentially just being the same as Mineta in canon or even worse.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Uraraka. Some love her for taking Mineta's perversion but taking it to a point where it's basically RefugeInAudacity. Others hate her for essentially just being the same as Mineta in canon or even worse.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Uraraka. Some love her for taking Mineta's perversion but taking it to a point where it's basically RefugeInAudacity. Others hate her for essentially just being the same as Mineta in canon or even worse.
* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type]].
* TakeThatScrappy: Downplayed given that he's not an actual scrappy but Aizawa gets called out and shut down several times within the story because [[WordOfGod IllMadeKnight]] believed he "doesn't get enough crap for all his screw ups".
* EpilepticTrees: Who did Toga originally replace? By chapter 14, she was theorized to have replaced Jiro, Kirishima, Uraraka, Hagakure, Ojiro, Tsuyu, Kaminari, Momo and Shinsou. It doesn't help that she has shapeshifted into different people throughout the story and that [[spoiler: her quirk allows her to copy a person's quirk regardless of type]].
* TakeThatScrappy: Downplayed given that he's not an actual scrappy but Aizawa gets called out and shut down several times within the story because [[WordOfGod IllMadeKnight]] believed he "doesn't get enough crap for all his screw ups".
