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** [[LittleSisterHeroine Gizel]] can be seen as a [[JerkassWoobie victim of the circumstances]] and her tribe's traditions, with the way her brother ran away from the ArrangedMarriage she was promised of ever since she was a child by her parents. However, it's shown that [[ItsAllAboutMe she willing to trap her brother against his wishes]] in said marriage, becomes [[SanitySlippage unhinged day after day from the anxiety]], drags her companions in the Abel search party on tiring journey, [[spoiler: is [[{{Yandere}} willing to attack and inflict near-lethal body harm]] to her brother's [[LoveRival female companion]], in addition of being NotBrainwashed]]! Gizel's actions wouldn't have any ounce of charm [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale if the genders were reversed]] (A brother forcing himself on his sister, anyone?)

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** [[LittleSisterHeroine Gizel]] can be seen as a [[JerkassWoobie victim of the circumstances]] and her tribe's traditions, with the way her brother ran away from the ArrangedMarriage she was promised of ever since she was a child by her parents. However, it's shown that [[ItsAllAboutMe she willing to trap her brother against his wishes]] in said marriage, becomes [[SanitySlippage unhinged day after day from the anxiety]], drags her companions in the Abel search party on tiring journey, [[spoiler: is [[{{Yandere}} willing to attack and inflict near-lethal body harm]] to her brother's [[LoveRival female companion]], in addition of being NotBrainwashed]]! Gizel's actions wouldn't have any an ounce of charm [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale if the genders were reversed]] (A brother forcing himself on his sister, anyone?)
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** The Riveras Kingdom, [[CorruptChurch Levi Church]] and [[TokenGood Sateria]] were supposed to be viewed as victims of their EvilGod Levi manipulations, after he's revealed to be [[spoiler: the False God [[DemiurgeArchtype Med]]]]. However, that happens after they've committed several acts of terrorism and hostility, that claimed several lives (see: Nalgarn). Driving nearby villages to decline with sabotage, monster attacks and [[PoisonAndCureGambit diseases]], to attempts at abduction and assassination. Most of the perpetrators were portrayed as {{Sinister Minister}}s who [[CardCarryingVillain fully embrace their role]] in their war against the "infidels". Yet the kingdom ends up [[AllIsWellThatEndsWell getting a happy ending]] handed to them by [[spoiler: placing a fake deity (based on Abel) to end their civil-religious wars]].

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** The Riveras Kingdom, [[CorruptChurch Levi Church]] and [[TokenGood [[TokenGoodTeammate Sateria]] were supposed to be viewed as victims of their EvilGod Levi manipulations, after he's revealed to be [[spoiler: the False God [[DemiurgeArchtype Med]]]]. However, that happens after they've committed several acts of terrorism and hostility, that claimed several lives (see: Nalgarn). Driving nearby villages to decline with sabotage, monster attacks and [[PoisonAndCureGambit diseases]], to attempts at abduction and assassination. Most of the perpetrators were portrayed as {{Sinister Minister}}s who [[CardCarryingVillain fully embrace their role]] in their war against the "infidels". Yet the kingdom ends up [[AllIsWellThatEndsWell getting a happy ending]] handed to them by [[spoiler: placing a fake deity (based on Abel) to end their civil-religious wars]].
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** [[CoolOldGuy Peter]], despite becoming a ReasonableAuthorityFigure to Abel, his [[TheTeamBenefactor greatest asset]], [[IntergenerationalFriendship friend]] and who also [[Ambadassador saved Abel from a sticky situation]] and had [[FreudianExcuse reasons]] to becoming a WellIntentionedExtremist... still comes off [[spoiler: as an EasilyForgiven monster who took two teenagers captives and [[WouldHurtAChild tried to have them killed]] because TheyKnewTooMuch, and [[NearVillainVictory came very close to killing Abel]] through an [[DirtyCoward underhanded method]]]]. [[spoiler: Abel even [[SaveTheVillain rescues him]] from a LaserGuidedKarma on the '''flimsy excuse''' that he would've spared Mea after killing him, disregarding the fact that Peter would've still [[MoralEventHorizon murdered him, left his companion to mourn him]] (unless [[FridgeHorror she's killed as well]]), and would've been [[HoistByHisOwnPetard killed by Kudor without Abel to save him]]]]!! Any reason to wonder why there is {{catharsis|Factor}} felt when Peter [[JerkassRealization realizes]] that [[ForgivenButNotForgotten this past incident]] '''maybe''' [[{{Deconstruction}} made it hard for Abel to trust him]] with his and Mea's life??

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** [[CoolOldGuy Peter]], despite becoming a ReasonableAuthorityFigure to Abel, his [[TheTeamBenefactor greatest asset]], [[IntergenerationalFriendship friend]] and who also [[Ambadassador [[{{Ambadassador}} saved Abel from a sticky situation]] and had [[FreudianExcuse reasons]] to becoming a WellIntentionedExtremist... still comes off [[spoiler: as an EasilyForgiven monster who took two teenagers captives and [[WouldHurtAChild tried to have them killed]] because TheyKnewTooMuch, and [[NearVillainVictory came very close to killing Abel]] through an [[DirtyCoward underhanded method]]]]. [[spoiler: Abel even [[SaveTheVillain rescues him]] from a LaserGuidedKarma on the '''flimsy excuse''' that he would've spared Mea after killing him, disregarding the fact that Peter would've still [[MoralEventHorizon murdered him, left his companion to mourn him]] (unless [[FridgeHorror she's killed as well]]), and would've been [[HoistByHisOwnPetard killed by Kudor without Abel to save him]]]]!! Any reason to wonder why there is {{catharsis|Factor}} felt when Peter [[JerkassRealization realizes]] that [[ForgivenButNotForgotten this past incident]] '''maybe''' [[{{Deconstruction}} made it hard for Abel to trust him]] with his and Mea's life??

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engage in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{def|iedTrope}}ying''' it in the ending]].

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engage in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] marriages as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], marriages, and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! little sister]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{def|iedTrope}}ying''' it in the ending]].



* JustHereForGodzilla: Admit it. Many, if not all, were drawn to the novel just from the idea of a [[spoiler: tribe that treats BrotherSisterIncest marriages as [[DeliberateValuesDissonance the definitive norm]] for an in-universe reason, and [[LittleSisterHeroine the protagonist's sister]] becoming a {{yandere}} and [[IWillFindYou chasing after him]] when he escapes their ArrangedMarriage]].
* {{Squick}}: The reveal of [[spoiler: the Marren clan's [[BrotherSisterIncest marriage customs]]]].
* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is proven correct, when his [[ForYourOwnGood father arranged for the wedding to be after three days]]), and [[IJustWantToBeFree wanting to be free]] and out of [[HiddenElfVillage the village]]. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll return after he's gotten married, or Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].
** The issue with the letter was downplayed in the Light Novel's extra chapter “Gizel's Struggle”. Where it was shown that indeed, [[spoiler: Gizel did read the letter]]!

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* JustHereForGodzilla: Admit it. Many, if not all, were drawn to the novel just from the idea of a [[spoiler: tribe that treats BrotherSisterIncest marriages as [[DeliberateValuesDissonance the definitive norm]] for an in-universe reason, and [[LittleSisterHeroine the protagonist's sister]] becoming a {{yandere}} and [[IWillFindYou chasing after him]] when he escapes their ArrangedMarriage]].
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* MST3KMantra: Any discussion about how the Marren tribe haven't perished yet to genetic disorders from their [[BrotherSisterIncest incest marriages]] can end with this answer.
* {{Squick}}: The reveal of [[spoiler: the Marren clan's [[BrotherSisterIncest marriage customs]]]].
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: UnintentionallyUnsympathetic:
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Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is proven correct, when his [[ForYourOwnGood father arranged for the wedding to be after three days]]), and [[IJustWantToBeFree wanting to be free]] and out of [[HiddenElfVillage the village]]. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll return after he's gotten married, or Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].
** The issue with the letter was downplayed in the Light Novel's extra chapter “Gizel's Struggle”. Where it was shown that indeed, [[spoiler: Gizel did read the letter]]!letter]]!
** [[CoolOldGuy Peter]], despite becoming a ReasonableAuthorityFigure to Abel, his [[TheTeamBenefactor greatest asset]], [[IntergenerationalFriendship friend]] and who also [[Ambadassador saved Abel from a sticky situation]] and had [[FreudianExcuse reasons]] to becoming a WellIntentionedExtremist... still comes off [[spoiler: as an EasilyForgiven monster who took two teenagers captives and [[WouldHurtAChild tried to have them killed]] because TheyKnewTooMuch, and [[NearVillainVictory came very close to killing Abel]] through an [[DirtyCoward underhanded method]]]]. [[spoiler: Abel even [[SaveTheVillain rescues him]] from a LaserGuidedKarma on the '''flimsy excuse''' that he would've spared Mea after killing him, disregarding the fact that Peter would've still [[MoralEventHorizon murdered him, left his companion to mourn him]] (unless [[FridgeHorror she's killed as well]]), and would've been [[HoistByHisOwnPetard killed by Kudor without Abel to save him]]]]!! Any reason to wonder why there is {{catharsis|Factor}} felt when Peter [[JerkassRealization realizes]] that [[ForgivenButNotForgotten this past incident]] '''maybe''' [[{{Deconstruction}} made it hard for Abel to trust him]] with his and Mea's life??
** The Riveras Kingdom, [[CorruptChurch Levi Church]] and [[TokenGood Sateria]] were supposed to be viewed as victims of their EvilGod Levi manipulations, after he's revealed to be [[spoiler: the False God [[DemiurgeArchtype Med]]]]. However, that happens after they've committed several acts of terrorism and hostility, that claimed several lives (see: Nalgarn). Driving nearby villages to decline with sabotage, monster attacks and [[PoisonAndCureGambit diseases]], to attempts at abduction and assassination. Most of the perpetrators were portrayed as {{Sinister Minister}}s who [[CardCarryingVillain fully embrace their role]] in their war against the "infidels". Yet the kingdom ends up [[AllIsWellThatEndsWell getting a happy ending]] handed to them by [[spoiler: placing a fake deity (based on Abel) to end their civil-religious wars]].
** [[LittleSisterHeroine Gizel]] can be seen as a [[JerkassWoobie victim of the circumstances]] and her tribe's traditions, with the way her brother ran away from the ArrangedMarriage she was promised of ever since she was a child by her parents. However, it's shown that [[ItsAllAboutMe she willing to trap her brother against his wishes]] in said marriage, becomes [[SanitySlippage unhinged day after day from the anxiety]], drags her companions in the Abel search party on tiring journey, [[spoiler: is [[{{Yandere}} willing to attack and inflict near-lethal body harm]] to her brother's [[LoveRival female companion]], in addition of being NotBrainwashed]]! Gizel's actions wouldn't have any ounce of charm [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale if the genders were reversed]] (A brother forcing himself on his sister, anyone?)
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* AdaptationDistillation: The manga cuts '''A Lot''' of the webnovel, but [[Administrivia/TropesAreNotBad still manages to keep the story]] where it is headed almost without harm. Since a translation of the light novel is unavailable, here are some 'fluffs' that were omitted from webnovel to manga:
** [[StarterVillain Noswell]]'s story about his parents were omitted.
** [[TheDriver Elia]] was reduced to a background character.
** The hunt of 'Head-Eater Demon' was skipped to delivering it's fur, and the hunting of Palm Birds, [[SiblingsInCrime Gordon and Mordon]] and their confrontation with Gaston over the money were all removed.
** Several of Abel's musings about Mea were omitted.
** [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]]'s scouting and employment by Princess Charlotte and the arena fight between Gaston and [[BloodKnight Brian]], until Abel's meeting with Shame were shortened to Gaston cleaning his act, and a plot summery of what Charlotte's candidacy for the throne is about, stating that Gaston will be okay.
* AdaptationInducedPlotHole: Firo's attraction to Abel in the manga was implied to have happened due to him [[RescueRomance saving her]] in "that one time". Said "one time" actually happened in the Light Novel, but never in the webnovel nor shown in the manga.



* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the Light Novel's [[BonusContent short stories]] throws [[TheProtagonist Abel]] and [[{{Sidekick}} Mea]] in rather really dangerous situations the webnovel didn't have, but can induce a lot of AdultFear from the reader. ''The Returning Cold'' has Mea and Abel, the latter [[WorfHadTheFlu bedridden with a sickness]], encountering a WolfInSheepsClothing, who orders his minion to grab Mea while he goes to [[WouldHurtAChild chop her horns]], ''Mea's Present'' has Mea walking into the [[WretchedHive bad part]] of Lomarn city, and gets scammed out of her money and unknowingly [[AttemptedRape set up to be raped]] before [[BigDamnHeroes Abel rescues her]], ''The Queen of Flowers'' has [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Abel shouting]] at Euris to immediately [[ShootTheHostage kill him]], after the titular monster grabbed him and was about to [[ManaDrain drain magic from him]], etc.



* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler: [[GreaterScopeVillain Silfheim]], and by extension, [[LiteralSplitPersonality Count Julem and his underlings]]]]. Not only his Evil plan against [[BigGood Kudor]] and to TakeOverTheWorld almost [[YouCantThwartStageOne go without a hitch]] despite [[XanatosGambit a LOT of variables]] and the presence of a SpannerInTheWorks included [[XanatosSpeedChess in the plan as well]], it also put Kudor's in a [[ToBeLawfulOrGood frustrating position]], [[spoiler: as she has [[LivingMacGuffin one of the pieces to his plan]] against her within her grasp, but she [[IGaveMyWord can't do anything to harm it]] or it will make [[TeethClenchedTeamwork her newly appointed "apostle"]] angry]]!!
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Abel gets a lot of flak for running away from the village and his marriage to Gizel by a sizable portion of the comments on the manga, calling him out for being a coward, breaking his sister's heart, falling back to his previous life's moral standards, and failing to talk it out with his family to hopefully call off the wedding... despite the fact that Abel himself stated how it really feels wrong to him, actually tried to talk to his father to let him see things from his perspective, only for his father to tell him to just 'suck it up, be a man and take it' and rushes the wedding to cut any chance for Abel to escape. Not to mention his sister's [[YanDere creepy obsession with him]].

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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Abel gets a lot of flak for running away from the village and his marriage to Gizel by a sizable portion of the comments on the manga, calling him out for being a coward, breaking his sister's heart, falling back to his previous life's moral standards, and failing to talk it out with his family to hopefully call off the wedding... despite the fact that Abel himself stated how it really feels wrong to him, actually tried to talk to his father to let him see things from his perspective, only for his father to tell him to just 'suck it up, be a man and take it' and rushes the wedding to cut any chance for Abel to escape. Not to mention his sister's [[YanDere [[{{Yandere}} creepy obsession with him]].



* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the Light Novel's [[BonusContent short stories]] throws [[TheProtagonist Abel]] and [[{{Sidekick}} Mea]] in rather really dangerous situations the webnovel didn't have, but can induce a lot of AdultFear from the reader. ''The Returning Cold'' has Mea and Abel, the latter [[WorfHadTheFlu bedridden with a sickness]], encountering a WolfInSheepsClothing, who orders his minion to grab Mea while he goes to [[WouldHurtAChild chop her horns]], ''Mea's Present'' has Mea walking into the [[WretchedHive bad part]] of Lomarn city, and gets scammed out of her money and unknowingly [[AttemptedRape set up to be raped]] before [[BigDamnHeroes Abel rescues her]], ''The Queen of Flowers'' has [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Abel shouting]] at Euris to [[KillUsBoth kill him and the titular monster]], after it grabs a hold of him and is about to [[ManaDrain drain magic from him]], etc.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the Light Novel's [[BonusContent short stories]] throws [[TheProtagonist Abel]] and [[{{Sidekick}} Mea]] in rather really dangerous situations the webnovel didn't have, but can induce a lot of AdultFear from the reader. ''The Returning Cold'' has Mea and Abel, the latter [[WorfHadTheFlu bedridden with a sickness]], encountering a WolfInSheepsClothing, who orders his minion to grab Mea while he goes to [[WouldHurtAChild chop her horns]], ''Mea's Present'' has Mea walking into the [[WretchedHive bad part]] of Lomarn city, and gets scammed out of her money and unknowingly [[AttemptedRape set up to be raped]] before [[BigDamnHeroes Abel rescues her]], ''The Queen of Flowers'' has [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Abel shouting]] at Euris to [[KillUsBoth immediately [[ShootTheHostage kill him and him]], after the titular monster]], after it grabs a hold of monster grabbed him and is was about to [[ManaDrain drain magic from him]], etc.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the Light Novel's [[BonusContent short stories]] throws [[TheProtagonist Abel]] and [[{{Sidekick}} Mea]] in rather really dangerous situations the webnovel didn't have, but can induce a lot of AdultFear from the reader. ''The Returning Cold'' has Mea and Abel, the latter [[WorfHadTheFlo bedridden with a sickness]], encountering a WolfInSheepsClothing, who orders his minion to grab Mea while he goes to [[WouldHurtAChild chop her horns]], ''Mea's Present'' has Mea walking into the [[WretchedHive bad part]] of Lomarn city, and gets scammed out of her money and unknowingly [[AttemptedRape set up to be raped]] before [[BigDamnHeroes Abel rescues her]], ''The Queen of Flowers'' has [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Abel shouting]] at Euris to [[KillUsBoth kill him and the titular monster]], after it grabs a hold of him and is about to [[ManaDrain drain magic from him]], etc.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the Light Novel's [[BonusContent short stories]] throws [[TheProtagonist Abel]] and [[{{Sidekick}} Mea]] in rather really dangerous situations the webnovel didn't have, but can induce a lot of AdultFear from the reader. ''The Returning Cold'' has Mea and Abel, the latter [[WorfHadTheFlo [[WorfHadTheFlu bedridden with a sickness]], encountering a WolfInSheepsClothing, who orders his minion to grab Mea while he goes to [[WouldHurtAChild chop her horns]], ''Mea's Present'' has Mea walking into the [[WretchedHive bad part]] of Lomarn city, and gets scammed out of her money and unknowingly [[AttemptedRape set up to be raped]] before [[BigDamnHeroes Abel rescues her]], ''The Queen of Flowers'' has [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Abel shouting]] at Euris to [[KillUsBoth kill him and the titular monster]], after it grabs a hold of him and is about to [[ManaDrain drain magic from him]], etc.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the Light Novel's [[BonusContent short stories]] throws [[TheProtagonist Abel]] and [[{{Sidekick}} Mea]] in rather really dangerous situations the webnovel didn't have, but can induce a lot of AdultFear from the reader. ''The Returning Cold'' has Mea and Abel, the latter [[WorfHadTheFlo bedridden with a sickness]], encountering a WolfInSheepsClothing, who orders his minion to grab Mea while he goes to [[WouldHurtAChild chop her horns]], ''Mea's Present'' has Mea walking into the [[WretchedHive bad part]] of Lomarn city, and gets scammed out of her money and unknowingly [[AttemptedRape set up to be raped]] before [[BigDamnHeroes Abel rescues her]], ''The Queen of Flowers'' has [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Abel shouting]] at Euris to [[KillUsBoth kill him and the titular monster]], after it grabs a hold of him and is about to [[ManaDrain drain magic from him]], etc.
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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler: [[GreaterScopeVillain Silfheim]], and by extension, [[LiteralSplitPersonality Count Julem and his underlings]]]]. Not only his Evil plan against [[BigGood Kudor]] and to TakeOverTheWorld almost [[YouCannotThwartStageOne go without a hitch]] despite [[XanatosGambit a LOT of variables]] and the presence of a SpannerInTheWorks included [[XanatosSpeedChess in the plan as well]], it also put Kudor's in a [[ToBeLawfulOrGood frustrating position]], [[spoiler: as she has [[LivingMacGuffin one of the pieces to his plan]] against her within her grasp, but she [[IGaveMyWord can't do anything to harm it]] or it will make [[TeethClenchedTeamwork her newly appointed "apostle"]] angry]]!!

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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler: [[GreaterScopeVillain Silfheim]], and by extension, [[LiteralSplitPersonality Count Julem and his underlings]]]]. Not only his Evil plan against [[BigGood Kudor]] and to TakeOverTheWorld almost [[YouCannotThwartStageOne [[YouCantThwartStageOne go without a hitch]] despite [[XanatosGambit a LOT of variables]] and the presence of a SpannerInTheWorks included [[XanatosSpeedChess in the plan as well]], it also put Kudor's in a [[ToBeLawfulOrGood frustrating position]], [[spoiler: as she has [[LivingMacGuffin one of the pieces to his plan]] against her within her grasp, but she [[IGaveMyWord can't do anything to harm it]] or it will make [[TeethClenchedTeamwork her newly appointed "apostle"]] angry]]!!
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* CreatorsPet: According to WordOfGod, [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]] is this.
* JustHereForGodzilla: Admit it. Many, if not all, were drawn to the novel just from the idea of a [[spoiler: tribe that treats BrotherSisterIncest marriages as [[DeliberateValuesDissonance the definitive norm]] for an in-universe reason, and [[LittleSisterHeroine the protagonist's sister]] becoming a {{yandere}} and [[IWillFindYou chasing after him]] when he escapes their ArrangedMarriage]].
* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler: [[GreaterScopeVillain Silfheim]], and by extension, [[LiteralSplitPersonality Count Julem and his underlings]]]]. Not only his Evil plan against [[BigGood Kudor]] and to TakeOverTheWorld almost [[YouCannotThwartStageOne go without a hitch]] despite [[XanatosGambit a LOT of variables]] and the presence of a SpannerInTheWorks included [[XanatosSpeedChess in the plan as well]], it also put Kudor's in a [[ToBeLawfulOrGood frustrating position]], [[spoiler: as she has [[LivingMacGuffin one of the pieces to his plan]] against her within her grasp, but she [[IGaveMyWord can't do anything to harm it]] or it will make [[TeethClenchedTeamwork her newly appointed "apostle"]] angry]]!!
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is proven correct, when his [[ForYourOwnGood father arranged for the wedding to be after three days]]), and [[IJustWantToBeFree wanting to be free]] and out of [[HiddenElfVillage the village]]. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll return after he's gotten married, or Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].

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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is proven correct, when his [[ForYourOwnGood father arranged for the wedding to be after three days]]), and [[IJustWantToBeFree wanting to be free]] and out of [[HiddenElfVillage the village]]. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll return after he's gotten married, or Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].party]].
** The issue with the letter was downplayed in the Light Novel's extra chapter “Gizel's Struggle”. Where it was shown that indeed, [[spoiler: Gizel did read the letter]]!
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{def|iedTrope}}ying''' it in the ending]].

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages engage in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{def|iedTrope}}ying''' it in the ending]].
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{DEF|iedTrope}}YING''' it in the ending]].

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{DEF|iedTrope}}YING''' '''{{def|iedTrope}}ying''' it in the ending]].
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{DEFI|edTrope}}NG''' it in the ending]].

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him '''{{DEFI|edTrope}}NG''' '''{{DEF|iedTrope}}YING''' it in the ending]]. ending]].
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him {{DEFi|edTrope}}NG it in the ending]].

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of tradition]] in a good light, [[spoiler: with him {{DEFi|edTrope}}NG '''{{DEFI|edTrope}}NG''' it in the ending]]. ending]].
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead use [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of traditions]] in a good light.

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead use cast [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of traditions]] tradition]] in a good light. light, [[spoiler: with him {{DEFi|edTrope}}NG it in the ending]].
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: [[BigBrotherAttraction little sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead use [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of traditions]] in a good light.

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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: little [[BigBrotherAttraction little sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead use [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of traditions]] in a good light. light.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: TheProtagonist is reincarnated and born in a tribe of magic users who [[spoiler: engages in BrotherSisterIncest marriages]] as the norm in their traditions, and TheProtagonist himself is a [[spoiler: product of said marriages]], and is promised in matrimony to his [[spoiler: [[BigBrotherAttraction little sister]]]]! However, the trope is then {{subverted|Trope}}, as said tradition is only used as a motivation for TheProtagonist's escape from the village [[CallToAdventure to the outside world]], to lessen the guilt from said escape, and the story instead use [[YourTraditionIsNotMine his act of defiance of traditions]] in a good light.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Abel gets a lot of flak for running away from the village and his marriage to Gizel by a sizable portion of the comments on the manga, calling him out for being a coward, breaking his sister's heart, falling back to his previous life's moral standards, and failing to talk it out with his family. Despite the fact that Abel himself stated how

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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Abel gets a lot of flak for running away from the village and his marriage to Gizel by a sizable portion of the comments on the manga, calling him out for being a coward, breaking his sister's heart, falling back to his previous life's moral standards, and failing to talk it out with his family. Despite family to hopefully call off the wedding... despite the fact that Abel himself stated how it really feels wrong to him, actually tried to talk to his father to let him see things from his perspective, only for his father to tell him to just 'suck it up, be a man and take it' and rushes the wedding to cut any chance for Abel to escape. Not to mention his sister's [[YanDere creepy obsession with him]].
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Abel gets a lot of flak for running away from the village and his marriage to Gizel by a sizable portion of the comments on the manga, calling him out for being a coward, breaking his sister's heart, falling back to his previous life's moral standards, and failing to talk it out with his family. Despite the fact that Abel himself stated how
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is likely), and [[IJustWantToBeFree wanting to be free]] and out of [[HiddenElfVillage the village]]. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll return after he's gotten married, or Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].

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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is likely), proven correct, when his [[ForYourOwnGood father arranged for the wedding to be after three days]]), and [[IJustWantToBeFree wanting to be free]] and out of [[HiddenElfVillage the village]]. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll return after he's gotten married, or Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is likely), and wanting to be free and out of the village. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll be either getting married, or will return if Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].

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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her]] (which is likely), and [[IJustWantToBeFree wanting to be free free]] and out of [[HiddenElfVillage the village.village]]. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll be either getting return after he's gotten married, or will return if Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that his village will strong-arm him into marrying her (which is likely), and wanting to be free and out of the village. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll be either getting married, or will return if Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].

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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Abel's [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere reaction to his incoming marriage]] to his sister can be... polarizing. On one hand, he knows from his previous life of the potential risks like birth-defects (which he did try talking his father out of it, but he didn't understand), along with making Gizel grow [[NoSocialSkills attached and dependent on him]], fearing that [[ShotgunWedding his village will strong-arm him into marrying her her]] (which is likely), and wanting to be free and out of the village. On the other hand, Abel left [[DearJohnLetter an abrupt letter]] explaining how he'd only see his sister as a.. sister and he's sorry about that, and that he'll be either getting married, or will return if Gizel gotten married instead. This could be interpreted the wrong way (and it's implied Gizel crumbled the letter and ignored its content), leading to his sister [[spoiler: turning {{Yandere}} and manipulating the village into forming a search party]].
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* {{Squick}}: The reveal of [[spoiler: [[BrotherSisterIncest the Marren clan's marriage customs]]]].

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* {{Squick}}: The reveal of [[spoiler: [[BrotherSisterIncest the Marren clan's [[BrotherSisterIncest marriage customs]]]].
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* EvilIsSexy: Prince Alphonse Dinrat is mentioned to be quite handsome, but [[TheEvilPrince what is inside]] is a different story.
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* EvilIsSexy: Prince Alphonse Dinrat is mentioned to be quite handsome, but [[TheEvilPrince what is inside]] is a different story.
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** The hunt of 'Head-Eater Demon' was skipped to delivering it's fur, and the hunting of Palm Birds, [[SiblingsInCrime Gordon and Mordon]] and their confrontaion with Gaston over the money were all removed.

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** The hunt of 'Head-Eater Demon' was skipped to delivering it's fur, and the hunting of Palm Birds, [[SiblingsInCrime Gordon and Mordon]] and their confrontaion confrontation with Gaston over the money were all removed.



** [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]]'s scouting and employment by Princess Charlotte and the arena fight between Gaston and [[BloodKnight Brian]], until Abel's meeting with Shame were shortened to Gaston cleaing his act, and a plot summery of what Charlotte's candidacy for the throne is about.

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** [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]]'s scouting and employment by Princess Charlotte and the arena fight between Gaston and [[BloodKnight Brian]], until Abel's meeting with Shame were shortened to Gaston cleaing cleaning his act, and a plot summery of what Charlotte's candidacy for the throne is about.about, stating that Gaston will be okay.
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** [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]]'s scouting and employment by Princess Charlotte and the arena fight between Gaston and [[BloodKnight Brian]], until his meeting with Shame were shortened to Gaston cleaing his act, and a plot summery of what Charlotte's candidacy for the throne is about.

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** [[FakeUltimateHero Gaston]]'s scouting and employment by Princess Charlotte and the arena fight between Gaston and [[BloodKnight Brian]], until his Abel's meeting with Shame were shortened to Gaston cleaing his act, and a plot summery of what Charlotte's candidacy for the throne is about.
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** [[TheDriver Elia]]'s was reduced to a background character.

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** [[TheDriver Elia]]'s Elia]] was reduced to a background character.
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** The hunt of 'Head-Eater Demon' was skipped to delivering it's fur, and the hunting of Palm Birds, [[SibilingsInCrime Gordon and Mordon]] and their confrontaion with Gaston over the money were all removed.

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** The hunt of 'Head-Eater Demon' was skipped to delivering it's fur, and the hunting of Palm Birds, [[SibilingsInCrime [[SiblingsInCrime Gordon and Mordon]] and their confrontaion with Gaston over the money were all removed.

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