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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The post-prologue part of the story takes place in a dimension that requires love from Earth to function, leading to the natives to create a conspiracy to harvest love from Earth. All of this is revealed in a single InfoDump and doesn't really come in play at all in the rest of the story (which is a GayRomance story). Not helping is how this introduces a lot of questions that the narrator offhandely dismisses.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The post-prologue part of the story takes place in a dimension that requires love from Earth to function, leading to the natives to create a conspiracy to harvest love from Earth. All of this is revealed in a single InfoDump and doesn't really come in play at all in the rest of the story (which is a GayRomance story). Not helping is how this [[VoodooShark introduces a lot of questions questions]] that the narrator offhandely dismisses.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The post-prologue part of the story takes place in a dimension that requires love from Earth to function, leading to the natives to create a conspiracy to harvest love from Earth. All of this is revealed in a single InfoDump and doesn't really come in play at all in the rest of the story (which is a GayRomance story). Not helping is how this introduces a lot of questions that the narrator offhandely dismisses.
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* IndecisiveParody: The prologue was meant to be a parody/deconstruction of [[RomanceGame otome]] (i.e. girl-oriented romance game genre) stereotypes (ex: clumsy and not-too-bright heroine, NiceGuy and bad boy love interests, AlphaBitch who only exists as a romantic complication for the heroine, etc.) with the post-prologue part revealing that the "prologue" was only a ShowWithinAShow with the characters' actors having vastly different and less stereotypical personalities. However, a combination of the prologue actually being relatively well-written, the lack of overt parodic jokes causing the prologue to feel not all that different from other straight-up otome games, and several visual novel websites categorizing it as an otome game in spite of the majority of the game having a male protagonist, led many a player to not realize the prologue was intended to be a parody and become genuinely disappointed when the HalfwayPlotSwitch to a male protagonist occurred.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: [[http://xkcd.com/513/ It was nice of Liam to be secretive for 10 years just to suddenly throw a decade of friendship away because Josh doesn't want more...]]
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* TheWoobie: Liam after rejected. Of course, Josh wasn't happy to lose a friend either.
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* TheWoobie: Liam after being rejected. Of course, Josh wasn't happy to lose a friend either.
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* TheWoobie: Liam after rejected. Of course, Josh wasn't happy to lose a friend either.
