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* JerkassWoobie: The voice in Pip’s head is ''incredibly'' cruel to him, even cajoling him into self harm at times, among other self destructive behaviors. It’s hard not to feel some sympathy for it, though, as it had suffered beatings and bullying for ''years,'' so that Pip could dissociate when it was happening.
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* JerkassWoobie: The voice in Pip’s head is ''incredibly'' cruel to him, even cajoling him into self harm at times, among amongst other self destructive behaviors. It’s hard not to feel some sympathy for it, though, as it had suffered beatings and bullying for ''years,'' so that Pip could dissociate when it was happening.
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* {{Narm}}: Some of the dialogue isn't very organic or realistic.
** There's also the fact that the author doesn't seem to understand how bruises work, referring to them as "black hand marks."
** There's also the fact that the author doesn't seem to understand how bruises work, referring to them as "black hand marks."
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* JerkassWoobie: The voice in Pip’s head is ''incredibly'' cruel to him, even cajoling him into self harm at times, among other self destructive behaviors. It’s hard not to feel some sympathy for it, though, as it had suffered beatings and bullying for ''years,'' so that Pip could dissociate when it was happening.
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--->'''Kenny:''' Come on Pip, don't cry. [[InsaneTrollLogic I don't want to hurt you but if you keep struggling I can't help it.]] [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization Relax and enjoy it.]]
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** At one point, Pip has a nightmare about Kenny attempting to sexually assault him, only to be stopped by Damien, who appears as a demonic beast and ''devours'' Kenny before attempting to eat Pip's soul.
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** At one point, Pip has a nightmare about Kenny attempting to sexually assault him, only to be stopped by Damien, who appears as a demonic beast and ''devours'' Kenny before attempting to eat Pip's soul.soul.
* TheWoobie: Dear God, Phillip Pirrup.
* TheWoobie: Dear God, Phillip Pirrup.
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* {{Narm}}: Some of the dialogue isn't very organic or realistic.
**There's also the fact that the author doesn't seem to understand how bruises work, referring to them as "black hand marks."
* NightmareFuel: Pip is tormented by a voice inside of his head that encourages him to cut himself.
**Everything about Kenny, particularly if you've ever been a victim of rape and/or stalking.
--->'''Kenny:''' Come on Pip, don't cry. [[InsaneTrollLogic I don't want to hurt you but if you keep struggling I can't help it.]] [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization Relax and enjoy it.]]
** At one point, Pip has a nightmare about Kenny attempting to sexually assault him, only to be stopped by Damien, who appears as a demonic beast and ''devours'' Kenny before attempting to eat Pip's soul.
**There's also the fact that the author doesn't seem to understand how bruises work, referring to them as "black hand marks."
* NightmareFuel: Pip is tormented by a voice inside of his head that encourages him to cut himself.
**Everything about Kenny, particularly if you've ever been a victim of rape and/or stalking.
--->'''Kenny:''' Come on Pip, don't cry. [[InsaneTrollLogic I don't want to hurt you but if you keep struggling I can't help it.]] [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization Relax and enjoy it.]]
** At one point, Pip has a nightmare about Kenny attempting to sexually assault him, only to be stopped by Damien, who appears as a demonic beast and ''devours'' Kenny before attempting to eat Pip's soul.
