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** The part in which Hermione and Neville sing [[Music/{{BoB}} "Airplanes"]] was ridiculous enough, but the resurgence of the [[WesternAnimation/RegularShow Morde]][[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic twi]] meme makes it even harder to take seriously.
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** The part in which Hermione and Neville sing [[Music/{{BoB}} [[Music/BoBRapper "Airplanes"]] was ridiculous enough, but the resurgence of the [[WesternAnimation/RegularShow Morde]][[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic twi]] meme makes it even harder to take seriously.
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* DieForOurShip: Ron.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: Draco himself.
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* RonTheDeathEater:
** Ron himself is a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
** ''Lavender Brown'' of all people becomes a Death Eater. Needless to say, Book!Lavender showed no such inclination.
** The Death Eaters ''themselves'' are subjected to RonTheDeathEater, since [[GratuitousRape apparently they're all serial rapists]]. Dolohov demonstrates this when he appears, then Draco reveals in an ALLCAPS rant in part two that [[CrossesTheLineTwice they had massive rape parties at Malfoy Manor]].
** Ron himself is a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
** ''Lavender Brown'' of all people becomes a Death Eater. Needless to say, Book!Lavender showed no such inclination.
** The Death Eaters ''themselves'' are subjected to RonTheDeathEater, since [[GratuitousRape apparently they're all serial rapists]]. Dolohov demonstrates this when he appears, then Draco reveals in an ALLCAPS rant in part two that [[CrossesTheLineTwice they had massive rape parties at Malfoy Manor]].
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: A disproportionate number of the songs in Hermione's Talent (especially part 2) were new when it was written in 2010-11, placing its PresentDayPast firmly in early 2011.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Karaoke Night's naked pictures subplot ([[AbortedArc which gets forgotten within an in-story day]]) is this in light of the 2014 celebrity leaks.
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* HilariousInHindsight: HilariousInHindsight:
** Karaoke Night's naked pictures subplot ([[AbortedArc which gets forgotten within an in-story day]]) is this in light of the 2014 celebrityleaks.leaks.
** The part in which Hermione and Neville sing [[Music/{{BoB}} "Airplanes"]] was ridiculous enough, but the resurgence of the [[WesternAnimation/RegularShow Morde]][[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic twi]] meme makes it even harder to take seriously.
** Karaoke Night's naked pictures subplot ([[AbortedArc which gets forgotten within an in-story day]]) is this in light of the 2014 celebrity
** The part in which Hermione and Neville sing [[Music/{{BoB}} "Airplanes"]] was ridiculous enough, but the resurgence of the [[WesternAnimation/RegularShow Morde]][[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic twi]] meme makes it even harder to take seriously.
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* DiscreditedTrope: Part of what makes Hermione's Talent so entertaining is that it's pretty much ''everything'' that ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' was (maybe) written to spoof in 2006, such as the anachronistic music, unwizardly ''and'' anachronistic fashion and [[ClusterFBomb copious swearing]], posted in 2010 in apparently complete ignorance of it. The only thing missing was vampires.
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* DiscreditedTrope: Part of what makes Hermione's Talent ''Hermione's Talent'' so entertaining is that it's pretty much ''everything'' that ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' was (maybe) written to spoof in 2006, such as the anachronistic music, unwizardly ''and'' anachronistic fashion and [[ClusterFBomb copious swearing]], posted in 2010 in apparently complete ignorance of it. The only thing missing was vampires.
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* ShockingSwerve: As the [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/59699.html review]] put it: "You don't get to be all Hot Topic brand mock-edgy teen drama complete with kewl soundtrack and rapping Neville for seventeen chapters and then drop a completely unforeshadowed ''graphic rape scene'' on the reader, not even if the mock-edgy teen drama uses more F-words than I do."
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** Ron himself a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
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** Ron himself is a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
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* CanonDefilement: Everything.
** Though we can start with the fact that Hermione now seems to have the diction of a ValleyGirl and the [[ClusterFBomb vocabulary]] of [[Series/TheThickOfIt Malcolm Tucker]] on a bad day, and to have [[IdiotBall lost over 100 IQ points]] into the bargain. ''Then'' there's the fact that what little plot the story has fits into the Potterverse about as well as an elephant fits into a shoebox.
** Though we can start with the fact that Hermione now seems to have the diction of a ValleyGirl and the [[ClusterFBomb vocabulary]] of [[Series/TheThickOfIt Malcolm Tucker]] on a bad day, and to have [[IdiotBall lost over 100 IQ points]] into the bargain. ''Then'' there's the fact that what little plot the story has fits into the Potterverse about as well as an elephant fits into a shoebox.
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* CanonDefilement: Everything.
**''Everything''. Though we can start with the fact that Hermione now seems to have the diction of a ValleyGirl and the [[ClusterFBomb vocabulary]] of [[Series/TheThickOfIt Malcolm Tucker]] on a bad day, and to have [[IdiotBall lost over 100 IQ points]] into the bargain. ''Then'' there's the fact that what little plot the story has fits into the Potterverse about as well as an elephant fits into a shoebox.
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* RonTheDeathEater: He's a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
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* RonTheDeathEater: He's RonTheDeathEater:
** Ron himself a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
** Ron himself a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
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** ''Lavender Brown'' of all people becomes a Death Eater. Needless to say, Book!Lavender showed no such inclination.
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* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' as a LifetimeMovieOfTheWeek. Alternatively, ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' meets ''[[Series/TheJerrySpringerShow Jerry Springer]]'' meets ''Series/{{Glee}}''.
** With a dash of ''Hogwarts Exposed'' for the [[GratuitousRape worst moments]].
** With a dash of ''Hogwarts Exposed'' for the [[GratuitousRape worst moments]].
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** With a dash of ''Hogwarts Exposed'' for the [[GratuitousRape worst moments]].
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* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' as a LifetimeMovieOfTheWeek. Alternatively, ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' meets ''[[Series/TheJerrySpringerShow Jerry Springer]]'' meets ''Series/{{Glee}}''.
** With a dash of ''Hogwarts Exposed'' for the [[GratuitousRape worst moments]].
** With a dash of ''Hogwarts Exposed'' for the [[GratuitousRape worst moments]].
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* MarySue
** BlackHoleSue: Hermione was rated "toxic" on the fic's Pottersues [[http://pottersues.livejournal.com/744327.html write-up]] for this reason: the entire plot revolves around her, and nobody does anything that doesn't relate to her in some way.
** JerkSue and JerkStu: Hermione and Draco.
** PuritySue: Hermione tries to be both this ''and'' a JerkSue. Which makes the fact that she [[ClusterFBomb swears like a sailor sitting on a discarded syringe]] all the funnier.
** BlackHoleSue: Hermione was rated "toxic" on the fic's Pottersues [[http://pottersues.livejournal.com/744327.html write-up]] for this reason: the entire plot revolves around her, and nobody does anything that doesn't relate to her in some way.
** JerkSue and JerkStu: Hermione and Draco.
** PuritySue: Hermione tries to be both this ''and'' a JerkSue. Which makes the fact that she [[ClusterFBomb swears like a sailor sitting on a discarded syringe]] all the funnier.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Karaoke Night's naked pictures subplot ([[AbortedArc which gets forgotten within an in-story day]]) is this in light of the 2014 celebrity leaks.
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* UnfortunateImplications:
** See SlutShaming and {{Chickification}} on the main page.
** The story's original premise that somehow getting top grades in all her exams isn't enough to demonstrate to her fellow witches and wizards that [[FantasticRacism Muggle-borns are just as good as purebloods]]. In fact, [[OutOfCharacter Hermione's intelligence is nowhere to be seen]], rather ironically considering the fic's title.
** See SlutShaming and {{Chickification}} on the main page.
** The story's original premise that somehow getting top grades in all her exams isn't enough to demonstrate to her fellow witches and wizards that [[FantasticRacism Muggle-borns are just as good as purebloods]]. In fact, [[OutOfCharacter Hermione's intelligence is nowhere to be seen]], rather ironically considering the fic's title.
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* DiscreditedTrope: Part of what makes Hermione's Talent so entertaining is that it's pretty much ''everything'' that ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' was (maybe) written to spoof in 2006, such as the anachronistic music, unwizardly ''and'' anachronistic fashion and [[ClusterFBomb copious swearing]], posted in 2010 in apparently complete ignorance of it. The only thing missing was vampires.
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** "Well everyone we have one more song to sing they I expect you all to head up to your beds you still have classes tomorrow morning. [[http://wtffanfiction.tumblr.com/post/29153709861/fandom-harry-potter-now-ms-granger-shall-be Now Ms. Granger shall be singing]] S&M by Music/{{Rihanna}}."
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** "Well everyone we have one more song to sing they I expect you all to head up to your beds you still have classes tomorrow morning. [[http://wtffanfiction.tumblr.com/post/29153709861/fandom-harry-potter-now-ms-granger-shall-be Now Ms. Granger shall be singing]] S&M [[SoundtrackDissonance S&M]] by Music/{{Rihanna}}."
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** Though we can start with the fact that Hermione now seems to have the diction of a ValleyGirl and the [[ClusterFBomb vocabulary]] of [[Series/TheThickOfIt Malcolm Tucker]] on a bad day, and to have [[IdiotBall lost over 100 IQ points]] into the bargain. ''Then'' there's the fact that what little plot the story has fits into the Potterverse about as well as an elephant fits into a shoebox.
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** Every time Ron, Lavender, Draco and ''especially'' Hermione launch into ALLCAPS {{Cluster F Bomb}}s.
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** Every time Ron, Lavender, Draco and ''especially'' ''[[CanonDefilement especially]]'' Hermione launch into ALLCAPS {{Cluster F Bomb}}s.
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** "Well everyone we have one more song to sing they I expect you all to head up to your beds you still have classes tomorrow morning. [[http://wtffanfiction.tumblr.com/post/29153709861/fandom-harry-potter-now-ms-granger-shall-be Now Ms. Granger shall be singing]] S&M by Music/{{Rihanna}}."
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* WTHCostumingDepartment: The few times Hermione's outfit gets described fall squarely under this heading, being OutOfCharacter for Hermione herself and not even in keeping with the wizarding world.
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* WTHCostumingDepartment: The few times Hermione's outfit gets described fall squarely under this heading, being OutOfCharacter for Hermione herself and not even in keeping with the wizarding world.world.
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** The story's original premise that somehow getting top grades in all her exams isn't enough to demonstrate to her fellow witches and wizards that [[FantasticRacism Muggle-borns are just as good as purebloods]]. In fact, [[OutOfCharacter Hermione's intelligence is nowhere to be seen]], rather ironically considering the fic's title.
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** The story's original premise that somehow getting top grades in all her exams isn't enough to demonstrate to her fellow witches and wizards that [[FantasticRacism Muggle-borns are just as good as purebloods]]. In fact, [[OutOfCharacter Hermione's intelligence is nowhere to be seen]], rather ironically considering the fic's title.title.
* WTHCostumingDepartment: The few times Hermione's outfit gets described fall squarely under this heading, being OutOfCharacter for Hermione herself and not even in keeping with the wizarding world.
* WTHCostumingDepartment: The few times Hermione's outfit gets described fall squarely under this heading, being OutOfCharacter for Hermione herself and not even in keeping with the wizarding world.
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* ShockingSwerve: As the [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/59699.html review]] put it: "You don't get to be all Hot Topic brand mock-edgy teen drama complete with kewl soundtrack and rapping Neville for seventeen chapters and then drop a completely unforeshadowed ''graphic rape scene'' on the reader, not even if the mock-edgy teen drama uses more F-words than I do."
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* MarySue
** BlackHoleSue: Hermione was rated "toxic" on the fic's Pottersues [[http://pottersues.livejournal.com/744327.html write-up]] for this reason: the entire plot revolves around her, and nobody does anything that doesn't relate to her in some way.
** JerkSue and JerkStu: Hermione and Draco.
** PuritySue: Hermione tries to be both this ''and'' a JerkSue. Which makes the fact that she [[ClusterFBomb swears like a sailor sitting on a discarded syringe]] all the funnier.
** BlackHoleSue: Hermione was rated "toxic" on the fic's Pottersues [[http://pottersues.livejournal.com/744327.html write-up]] for this reason: the entire plot revolves around her, and nobody does anything that doesn't relate to her in some way.
** JerkSue and JerkStu: Hermione and Draco.
** PuritySue: Hermione tries to be both this ''and'' a JerkSue. Which makes the fact that she [[ClusterFBomb swears like a sailor sitting on a discarded syringe]] all the funnier.
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* LostInMediasRes: The fic launches straight into unattributed dialogue and singing without any real context.
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* CrossingTheLineTwice: The rape scene crosses the line once, but Draco's ALLCAPS rant about how the Death Eaters did it all the time when they were at Malfoy Manor is impossible to take seriously.
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** The Death Eaters ''themselves'' are subjected to RonTheDeathEater, since [[GratuitousRape apparently they're all serial rapists]]. Dolohov demonstrates this when he appears, then Draco reveals in an ALLCAPS rant in part two that [[CrossesTheLineTwice they had massive rape parties at Malfoy Manor]].
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* {{Glurge}}: When the fic isn't showering us with overwrought [[DarkerAndEdgier grimdark]], it's this instead.
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!!YMMV tropes in ''Fanfic/HermionesTalent'':
* DracoInLeatherPants: Draco himself.
* {{Narm}}:
** Every time the story reminds the reader of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', which is often.
**[[PrettyFlyForAWhiteGuy Neville's rapping]].
** Every time Ron, Lavender, Draco and ''especially'' Hermione launch into ALLCAPS {{Cluster F Bomb}}s.
** Draco's argument that they were on a break when he cheated on Hermione. Either the author intended it as a ShoutOut to the RunningGag from ''Series/{{Friends}}'', in which case it's hilariously inappropriate in a theoretically serious fic, or she didn't, in which case it's just hilarious.
* RonTheDeathEater: He's a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
* SoBadItsGood: It's an unintentional ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' clone trying to play itself straight. Of course it's this.
* UnfortunateImplications:
** See SlutShaming and {{Chickification}} on the main page.
** The story's original premise that somehow getting top grades in all her exams isn't enough to demonstrate to her fellow witches and wizards that [[FantasticRacism Muggle-borns are just as good as purebloods]]. In fact, [[OutOfCharacter Hermione's intelligence is nowhere to be seen]], rather ironically considering the fic's title.
* DracoInLeatherPants: Draco himself.
* {{Narm}}:
** Every time the story reminds the reader of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', which is often.
**[[PrettyFlyForAWhiteGuy Neville's rapping]].
** Every time Ron, Lavender, Draco and ''especially'' Hermione launch into ALLCAPS {{Cluster F Bomb}}s.
** Draco's argument that they were on a break when he cheated on Hermione. Either the author intended it as a ShoutOut to the RunningGag from ''Series/{{Friends}}'', in which case it's hilariously inappropriate in a theoretically serious fic, or she didn't, in which case it's just hilarious.
* RonTheDeathEater: He's a cheating bastard who gets killed by an actual Death Eater.
* SoBadItsGood: It's an unintentional ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' clone trying to play itself straight. Of course it's this.
* UnfortunateImplications:
** See SlutShaming and {{Chickification}} on the main page.
** The story's original premise that somehow getting top grades in all her exams isn't enough to demonstrate to her fellow witches and wizards that [[FantasticRacism Muggle-borns are just as good as purebloods]]. In fact, [[OutOfCharacter Hermione's intelligence is nowhere to be seen]], rather ironically considering the fic's title.
