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* LoveToHate: Checker Monarch is basically the ''My Little Pony'' equivalent to [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Frollo]], [[Literature/HarryPotter Umbridge]], or [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Ozai]]: A villain so loathsomely '' evil'' and so subtly terrifying that it's honestly amazing. Bonus points for the writer STILL managing to maintain OriginalFlavour despite her inclusion.
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* LoveToHate: Checker Monarch [[HateSink Checker]] [[CompleteMonster Monarch]] is basically the ''My Little Pony'' equivalent to [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], [[Literature/HarryPotter Dolores Umbridge]], or and [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Fire Lord Ozai]]: A villain so loathsomely '' evil'' and so subtly terrifying that it's honestly amazing. Bonus points for the writer STILL managing to maintain OriginalFlavour despite her inclusion.
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** The character of [[CompleteMonster Checker]] [[TheChessmaster Monarch]] is downright ''terrifying''. She's a powerful, cold, calculating and heartless [[TheSociopath sociopath]] who enjoys [[spoiler: [[MindRape Mind Raping]] ponies in their dreams]], and is utterly merciless in her attempts to ruin Trixie's life (made even worse by the fact that ''[[spoiler: [[CainAndAbel Trixie is her little sister]]]]''). Just about everyone Checker runs into is terrified of her, including her own henchmen. Especially horrifying is when [[spoiler: she completely snaps at the end of chapter 9 and she plots revenge against Ponyville ''and'' Canterlot, as the red in the heart of her Cutie Mark runs off in the rain - revealing the heart to be black]]. What makes Checker so terrifying is that her behavior is based off of real-life sociopaths, so unlike characters like Discord and Chrysalis, ''there are really people like her out there''.
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** The character of [[CompleteMonster Checker]] [[TheChessmaster Monarch]] is downright ''terrifying''. She's a powerful, cold, calculating and heartless [[TheSociopath sociopath]] who enjoys [[spoiler: [[MindRape Mind Raping]] ponies in their dreams]], and is utterly merciless in her attempts to ruin Trixie's life (made even worse by the fact that ''[[spoiler: [[CainAndAbel Trixie is her little sister]]]]''). Just about everyone Checker runs into is terrified of her, including her own henchmen. Especially horrifying is when [[spoiler: she completely snaps at the end of chapter 9 and she plots revenge against Ponyville ''and'' Canterlot, as the red in the heart of her Cutie Mark runs off in the rain - revealing the heart to be black]]. What makes Checker so terrifying is that her behavior is based off of real-life sociopaths, so unlike characters like [[CardCarryingVillain Discord and Chrysalis, Chrysalis]], ''there are really are people like her Checkmate Monarch who are out there''.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: Checker uses a bee's nest to attack Trixie at Cheerilee's school, allowing the foals to get stung. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E4OnYourMarks Turns out Applebloom is allergic.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: In the "Through New Eyes" chapter, Rainbow Dash experienced a nightmare where she messed up a flight test, crashed, and was mercilessly bullied by her classmates CircleOfShame style. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E22HurricaneFluttershy Then an episode of the show aired]] showing a disturbingly similar scene happening to Fluttershy in a flashback. Even the ''author'' was freaked out by the similarity!
** Checker causing Cheerilee's students to be sung by bees was already horrifying just on a WouldHurtAChild level. But when [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E4OnYourMarks On Your Marks]] revealed that [[PlotAllergy Apple Bloom is allergic to bee stings]], ''meaning Checker could have outright killed her!''
** Checker causing Cheerilee's students to be sung by bees was already horrifying just on a WouldHurtAChild level. But when [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E4OnYourMarks On Your Marks]] revealed that [[PlotAllergy Apple Bloom is allergic to bee stings]], ''meaning Checker could have outright killed her!''
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* HarsherInHindsight: HarsherInHindsight:
** In the "Through New Eyes" chapter, Rainbow Dash experienced a nightmare where she messed up a flight test, crashed, and was mercilessly bullied by her classmates CircleOfShame style. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E22HurricaneFluttershy Then an episode of the show aired]] showing a disturbingly similar scene happening to Fluttershy in a flashback. Even the ''author'' was freaked out by the similarity!
** Checker causing Cheerilee's students to be sung by bees was already horrifying just on a WouldHurtAChild level. But when[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E4OnYourMarks "[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E4OnYourMarks On Your Marks]] Marks]]" revealed that [[PlotAllergy Apple Bloom is allergic to bee stings]], ''meaning Checker could have outright killed her!''
** In the "Through New Eyes" chapter, Rainbow Dash experienced a nightmare where she messed up a flight test, crashed, and was mercilessly bullied by her classmates CircleOfShame style. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E22HurricaneFluttershy Then an episode of the show aired]] showing a disturbingly similar scene happening to Fluttershy in a flashback. Even the ''author'' was freaked out by the similarity!
** Checker causing Cheerilee's students to be sung by bees was already horrifying just on a WouldHurtAChild level. But when
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* LoveToHate: Checker Monarch is basically the ''My Little Pony'' equivalent to [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Frollo]], [[Literature/HarryPotter Umbridge]], or [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Ozai]]: A villain so loathsomely '' evil'' and so subtly terrifying that it's honestly amazing. Bonus points for the writer STILL managing to maintain OriginalFlavour despite her inclusion.
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* LoveToHate: Checker Monarch is basically the ''My Little Pony'' equivalent to [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Frollo]], [[Literature/HarryPotter Umbridge]], or [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Ozai]]: A villain so loathsomely '' evil'' and so subtly terrifying that it's honestly amazing. Bonus points for the writer STILL managing to maintain OriginalFlavour despite her inclusion.
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* GeniusBonus: [[BatOutOfHell The Ropen]] is an [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ropen actual cryptid from New Guinea]], [[AluminumChristmasTrees but so obscure many readers will likely never have heard of it]]. The author included it mainly to invoke this trope for fans of Cryptozoology who'd recognize it.
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* GeniusBonus: [[BatOutOfHell The Ropen]] is an [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ropen [[http://creationwiki.org/Ropen actual cryptid from New Guinea]], [[AluminumChristmasTrees but so obscure many readers will likely never have heard of it]]. The author included it mainly to invoke this trope for fans of Cryptozoology who'd recognize it.
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