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* CriticalResearchFailure:
** The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time". [[note]]For reference velocity is distance ''divided'' by time.[[/note]]
** There are several in regard to altitude and air pressure. For example early on Dennagon is said to be flying ''one thousand'' miles high. For reference the International Space Station averages out at a quarter of that.
** The characters at one point use their wings to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash. Leaving that aside, the moon orbits Earth at a distance of 380,000 kilometers. Depending on the dragons' flight speed, it would take them weeks or even months to travel that far, not to mention that their wings would be absolutely useless in the vacuum of space.
** The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time". [[note]]For reference velocity is distance ''divided'' by time.[[/note]]
** There are several in regard to altitude and air pressure. For example early on Dennagon is said to be flying ''one thousand'' miles high. For reference the International Space Station averages out at a quarter of that.
** The characters at one point use their wings to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash. Leaving that aside, the moon orbits Earth at a distance of 380,000 kilometers. Depending on the dragons' flight speed, it would take them weeks or even months to travel that far, not to mention that their wings would be absolutely useless in the vacuum of space.
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** The characters at one point use their wings to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
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** The characters at one point use their wings to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash. Leaving that aside, the moon orbits Earth at a distance of 380,000 kilometers. Depending on the dragons' flight speed, it would take them weeks or even months to travel that far, not to mention that their wings would be absolutely useless in the vacuum of space.
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--> ''[[BringMeMyBrownPants Dennagon felt like taking a dump.]] Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left in his stomach.''
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--> ''[[BringMeMyBrownPants Dennagon felt like taking a dump.]] Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left [[ArtisticLicenseBiology in his stomach]].''[[note]]Fecal matter is stored in the large intestine, not the stomach.''[[/note]]
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--> ''Dennagon trudged through the grass, his noggin aching.''
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--> ''Dennagon trudged through the grass, [[BeigeProse his noggin aching.aching]].''
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--> ''Dennagon felt like taking a dump. Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left in his stomach.''
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--> ''Dennagon ''[[BringMeMyBrownPants Dennagon felt like taking a dump. dump.]] Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left in his stomach.''
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-->''"Interesting,” muttered Dennagon to himself, “The force of gravity is 9.8 meters per second squared on this planet, but not in space. I wonder if ‘space’ actually exists.”''
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-->''"Interesting,” muttered Dennagon to himself, “The force of gravity is 9.8 meters per second squared on this planet, but not in space. I wonder if ‘space’ actually exists.”''
”''[[note]]This is the ''acceleration'' of an object near the Earth's surface, not ''force''. The force of gravity throughout space varies according to the mass of and distance from celestial bodies.[[/note]]
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time". [[note]]For reference velocity is distance ''divided'' by time.[[/note]]
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* CriticalResearchFailure: CriticalResearchFailure:
** The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time". [[note]]For reference velocity is distance ''divided'' by time.[[/note]]
** The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time". [[note]]For reference velocity is distance ''divided'' by time.[[/note]]
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*** The characters at one point use their wings to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
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-->''"Interesting,” muttered Dennagon to himself, “The force of gravity is 9.8 meters per second squared on this planet, but not in space. I wonder if ‘space’ actually exists.”''
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-->''"Interesting,” muttered Dennagon to himself, “The force of gravity is 9.8 meters per second squared on this planet, but not in space. I wonder if ‘space’ actually exists.”''”''
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*** The characters at one point use their wins to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
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*** The characters at one point use their wins wings to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
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*** The characters at one point just fly, using their wings to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
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*** The characters at one point just fly, using use their wings wins to fly to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
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** There are several in regard to altitude and air pressure. For example early on Dennagon is said to be flying ''one thousand'' miles high. For reference the International Space Station averages out at a quarter of that.
*** The characters at one point just fly, using their wings to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
*** The characters at one point just fly, using their wings to the moon. There is just no way a celestial body can orbit within another celestial body's atmosphere, drag would make it lose momentum and crash.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time".
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time". [[note]]For reference velocity is distance ''divided'' by time.[[/note]]
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--> ''Dennagon felt like taking a dump. Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left in his stomach.''
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--> ''Dennagon felt like taking a dump. Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left in his stomach.''''
** As stated, there are a lot of points where the author tries to make Dennagon seem intelligent by reciting, learning, and musing over scientific facts. A lot of the times (and every time these facts are actually discussed) these smart people facts are high or lower school physics and Dennagon contemplating or just learning them makes him look like a dumbass. Like this gem.
-->''"Interesting,” muttered Dennagon to himself, “The force of gravity is 9.8 meters per second squared on this planet, but not in space. I wonder if ‘space’ actually exists.”''
** As stated, there are a lot of points where the author tries to make Dennagon seem intelligent by reciting, learning, and musing over scientific facts. A lot of the times (and every time these facts are actually discussed) these smart people facts are high or lower school physics and Dennagon contemplating or just learning them makes him look like a dumbass. Like this gem.
-->''"Interesting,” muttered Dennagon to himself, “The force of gravity is 9.8 meters per second squared on this planet, but not in space. I wonder if ‘space’ actually exists.”''
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The author tries to make Dennagon seem smart by making him recite scientific facts. This backfires at times, such as when he claims that "velocity is distance ''multiplied'' by time".
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* {{Narm}}
** The writing is full of PurpleProse, MeaninglessMeaningfulWords and SesquipedalianLoquaciousness. Case in point:
--> ''Upon the Mesozoic verdure, the sun cast its dawn light, giving life to the hovering woodland realm in the form pf photosynthetic vitality that sparkled betwixt the morning arbor.''
** After quite a bit of Purple Prose, we get [[SophisticatedAsHell this gem]]:
--> ''Dennagon trudged through the grass, his noggin aching.''
** This is how Dennagon reacts when he's surprised:
--> ''Dennagon felt like taking a dump. Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left in his stomach.''
** The writing is full of PurpleProse, MeaninglessMeaningfulWords and SesquipedalianLoquaciousness. Case in point:
--> ''Upon the Mesozoic verdure, the sun cast its dawn light, giving life to the hovering woodland realm in the form pf photosynthetic vitality that sparkled betwixt the morning arbor.''
** After quite a bit of Purple Prose, we get [[SophisticatedAsHell this gem]]:
--> ''Dennagon trudged through the grass, his noggin aching.''
** This is how Dennagon reacts when he's surprised:
--> ''Dennagon felt like taking a dump. Luckily, he hadn’t any fecal matter left in his stomach.''
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Not YMMV and misuse of trope
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* {{MacGuffin}} The Lexicon a book that all knowledge of the universe. Yeah, fits the bill.
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%% * DesignatedHero: DennagonDennagon
* {{MacGuffin}} The Lexicon a book that all knowledge of the universe. Yeah, fits the bill.
* {{MacGuffin}} The Lexicon a book that all knowledge of the universe. Yeah, fits the bill.
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%% * DesignatedHero: Dennagon
