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** [[spoiler:Reyes is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), is the Ultimate Fencer(just like how Peko is the Ultimate Swordswoman), likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.]]
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa story, and had started a relationship with Nao in the same chapter]].
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa story, and had started a relationship with Nao in the same chapter]].
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** [[spoiler:Reyes is Reyes [[spoiler:is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), is the Ultimate Fencer(just like how Peko is the Ultimate Swordswoman), likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.]]
** Some participants on the Discord server easilyfingered guessed that [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as was the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa story, and had started a relationship with Nao in the same chapter]].
** Some participants on the Discord server easily
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** Nao's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling the second killer out on how [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse his childhood doesn't excuse his actions]] would have been more poignant if Nao hadn't asked the killer about almost every single conceivable form of abuse his parents might have inflicted upon him, making the ArmorPiercingQuestion seem like an OverlyLongGag.
** The fact that the endings of the first three trials involve someone physically attacking a classmate (usually the blackened) can make them seem fairly melodramatic compared to canon.
** The fact that the endings of the first three trials involve someone physically attacking a classmate (usually the blackened) can make them seem fairly melodramatic compared to canon.
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** Nao's In the second trial, Nao makes a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling the second killer out on how [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse his childhood doesn't excuse his actions]] actions]], especially since the killer's parents aren't as cruel as they make them sem. It would have been more poignant if Nao hadn't asked the killer about almost every single conceivable form of abuse his their parents might have inflicted upon him, them, making the ArmorPiercingQuestion seem like an OverlyLongGag.
** The fact that the endings of the first three trials involve someone physically attacking a classmate (usually theblackened) blackened)[[labelnote:The incidents(Spoilers)]]At the end of the first trial, Kayle asks Samuru to execute her before Monokuma can, and he runs over to do so, knocking Reyes aside. In the second trial, Nao, disgusted by Jiro's actions, slaps him. In the third trial, Mako beats up Manon for killing the only two people they cared about.[[/labelnote]] can make them seem fairly melodramatic compared to canon.
** The fact that the endings of the first three trials involve someone physically attacking a classmate (usually the
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** [[spoiler:Reyes is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), wields a rapier, likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.]]
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa story]].
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa story]].
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** [[spoiler:Reyes is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), wields a rapier, is the Ultimate Fencer(just like how Peko is the Ultimate Swordswoman), likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.]]
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpastory]].story, and had started a relationship with Nao in the same chapter]].
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa
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** The fourth culprit is mostly calm for [[spoiler:her]] MotiveRant, but suddenly and uncharacteristically becomes very animated when declaring [[spoiler:her]] hatred for [[spoiler:Reyes(who died in the last chapter), Mako(her victim) and Samuru]].
** The mastermind's execution consists almost entirely of them giving a long, drawn-out FinalSpeech that goes on too long and is a bit too on-the-nose to take seriously.
** The mastermind's execution consists almost entirely of them giving a long, drawn-out FinalSpeech that goes on too long and is a bit too on-the-nose to take seriously.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: At the end of the fourth trial, Samuru refuses to admit to having executed [[spoiler:Umeko's mother]]. Was he telling the truth? Was he deliberately lying, possibly to deny [[spoiler:Umeko]] the satisfaction of hearing [[spoiler:her mother's killer]] admit to the crime? [[ButForMeItWasTuesday Or does he simply not remember every single woman he's executed]]?
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: At the end of the fourth trial, Samuru refuses to admit to having executed [[spoiler:Umeko's mother]]. Was he telling the truth? Was he deliberately lying, possibly to deny [[spoiler:Umeko]] the satisfaction of hearing [[spoiler:her mother's killer]] admit to the crime? [[ButForMeItWasTuesday Or does he simply not remember every single woman he's executed]]?executed]]? Eventually, it's shown that [[spoiler:he most likely did, in fact, kill Umeko's mother, but since he's dead by then, it isn't conclusively revealed whether he honestly believed he didn't do such a thing, or was merely lying about it.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: In hindsight, the second killer's warning that there was a murderer among them comes off as less of a VillainsDyingGrace, and more of a way of causing the next murder, [[spoiler:since Jirou is actually the mastermind]]. What's more, [[spoiler:Jirou]] specifies that the individual killed "plenty of times" before, a distinction that is necessary [[spoiler:since everyone in the class has apparently committed at least one murder before the killing game started]].
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* FridgeBrilliance: In hindsight, the second killer's warning that there was a murderer among them comes off as less of a VillainsDyingGrace, and more of a way of causing the next murder, [[spoiler:since Jirou is actually the mastermind]]. What's more, [[spoiler:Jirou]] specifies that the individual was the one person besides Samuru who had killed "plenty of times" before, a distinction that is necessary [[spoiler:since everyone in the class has apparently committed at least one murder before the killing game started]].
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* FridgeLogic: Nao's Ultimate {{NEET}} title is a blatant contradiction. Even ignoring the fact that by occasionally attending school, he wouldn't qualify for NEET status, Ultimate titles require the bearer to be in high school, so a true NEET wouldn't qualify.
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* FridgeBrilliance: In hindsight, the second killer's warning that there was a murderer among them comes off as less of a VillainsDyingGrace, and more of a way of causing the next murder, [[spoiler:since Jirou is actually the mastermind]]. What's more, [[spoiler:Jirou]] specifies that the individual killed "plenty of times" before, a distinction that is necessary [[spoiler:since everyone in the class has apparently committed at least one murder before the killing game started]].
* FridgeLogic: Nao's Ultimate {{NEET}} title is a blatant contradiction. Even ignoring the fact that by occasionally attending school, he wouldn't qualify for NEET status, Ultimate titles require the bearer to be in high school, so a true NEET wouldn't qualify. [[spoiler:This is eventually addressed in the story, with Nao saying that he doesn't deserve his Ultimate title, and was only chosen because the person responsible saw something in him]].
* FridgeLogic: Nao's Ultimate {{NEET}} title is a blatant contradiction. Even ignoring the fact that by occasionally attending school, he wouldn't qualify for NEET status, Ultimate titles require the bearer to be in high school, so a true NEET wouldn't qualify. [[spoiler:This is eventually addressed in the story, with Nao saying that he doesn't deserve his Ultimate title, and was only chosen because the person responsible saw something in him]].
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: At the end of the fourth trial, Samuru refuses to admit to having executed [[spoiler:Umeko's mother]]. Was he telling the truth? Was he deliberately lying, possibly to deny [[spoiler:Umeko]] the satisfaction of hearing [[spoiler:her mother's killer]] admit to the crime? [[ButForMeItWasTuesday Or does he simply not remember every single woman he's executed]]?
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* CaptainObviousReveal: [[spoiler:Reyes is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), wields a rapier, likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.]]
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** [[spoiler:Reyes is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), wields a rapier, likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.]]]]
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa story]].
** [[spoiler:Reyes is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), wields a rapier, likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.
** Some participants on the Discord server easily fingered [[spoiler:Nao's new girlfriend Umeko]] as the fourth culprit, since [[spoiler:she took the longest time to get through the maze(giving her time to carry out the murder), and rather suspiciously asked Nao about what he thought of the previous killers' motivations (likely to see if he sympathized with her). It also helps that she's yet another case of a dead LoveInterest in a Danganronpa story]].
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* CaptainObviousReveal: [[spoiler:Reyes is Sparkling Justice. She comes from Spain (the country where Sparkling Justice was said to be from), wields a rapier, likes justice, and dislikes criminals and corruption.]]
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** The fact that the endings of the first three trials involve someone assaulting a classmate (usually the blackened) can make them seem fairly melodramatic compared to canon.
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--->"[[AndThatsTerrible These weren't just awful and tragic. This is truly the most awful and most tragic. It was vile and disgusting]]. No one can surely stomach the incident. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even a serial killer will throw up just by seeing everything happen like it was normal]]. No! It was not normal to see blood drip in every block and alleyway.
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--->"[[AndThatsTerrible These weren't just awful and tragic. This is truly the most awful and most tragic. It was vile and disgusting]]. No one can surely stomach the incident. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even a serial killer will surely throw up just by seeing everything happen happened like it was normal]]. No! It was not normal to see blood drip in every block and alleyway.
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-=->"[[AndThatsTerrible These weren't just awful and tragic. This is truly the most awful and most tragic. It was vile and disgusting]]. No one can surely stomach the incident. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even a serial killer will throw up just by seeing everything happen like it was normal]]. No! It was not normal to see blood drip in every block and alleyway.
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*FridgeLogic: Nao's Ultimate {{NEET}} title is a blatant contradiction. Even ignoring the fact that by occasionally attending school, he wouldn't qualify for NEET status, Ultimate titles require the bearer to be in high school, so a true NEET wouldn't qualify.
*{{Narm}}:
**Prologue 3 is an incredibly melodramatic summary of what happened since the Tragedy, so much so that it is hard to take it seriously.
-=->"[[AndThatsTerrible These weren't just awful and tragic. This is truly the most awful and most tragic. It was vile and disgusting]]. No one can surely stomach the incident. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even a serial killer will throw up just by seeing everything happen like it was normal]]. No! It was not normal to see blood drip in every block and alleyway.
**Nao's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling the second killer out on how [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse his childhood doesn't excuse his actions]] would have been more poignant if Nao hadn't asked the killer about almost every single conceivable form of abuse his parents might have inflicted upon him, making the ArmorPiercingQuestion seem like an OverlyLongGag.
*ProlongedPrologue: This fic has six pre-prologue chapters, and another two chapters for the actual prologue.
*{{Narm}}:
**Prologue 3 is an incredibly melodramatic summary of what happened since the Tragedy, so much so that it is hard to take it seriously.
-=->"[[AndThatsTerrible These weren't just awful and tragic. This is truly the most awful and most tragic. It was vile and disgusting]]. No one can surely stomach the incident. [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even a serial killer will throw up just by seeing everything happen like it was normal]]. No! It was not normal to see blood drip in every block and alleyway.
**Nao's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech calling the second killer out on how [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse his childhood doesn't excuse his actions]] would have been more poignant if Nao hadn't asked the killer about almost every single conceivable form of abuse his parents might have inflicted upon him, making the ArmorPiercingQuestion seem like an OverlyLongGag.
*ProlongedPrologue: This fic has six pre-prologue chapters, and another two chapters for the actual prologue.
