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** Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.
** Likewise, it would have been interesting to see some kids from the other side of the creek join with Craig because they too are tired of Xaviers rule.
** Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.
** Likewise, it would have been interesting to see some kids from the other side of the creek join with Craig because they too are tired of Xaviers rule.
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**TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.
**royalty. Likewise, it would have been interesting to see some kids from the other side of the creek join with Craig because they too are tired of Xaviers Xavier's rule.
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** Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.
** Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.royalty.
**Likewise, it would have been interesting to see some kids from the other side of the creek join with Craig because they too are tired of Xaviers rule.
**Likewise, it would have been interesting to see some kids from the other side of the creek join with Craig because they too are tired of Xaviers rule.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Paloma is the only Creek kid who willingly sides with Xavier during Capture the Flag. It would've been interesting to see others who did the same, like the Tea Timers as Eliza flat-out admitted she was evil and admired Xavier for being royalty.
