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* {{Squick}}: given the nature of the work, it's not surprising to find a heavy dose of this. You're just getting comfortable with the characters, and then one will mention having some baby-liver paté. Even Oelita, who seems like the one you can most easily sympathize with, mentions early on that in honor of her dead father, she's wearing a coat made from his skin, and carrying around a few strips of papa jerky.
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* {{Squick}}: given Given the nature of the work, it's not surprising to find a heavy dose of this. You're just getting comfortable with the characters, and then one will mention having some baby-liver paté. Even Oelita, who seems like the one you can most easily sympathize with, mentions early on that in honor of her dead father, she's wearing a coat made from his skin, and carrying around a few strips of papa jerky.jerky.
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* {{Squick}}: given the nature of the work, it's not surprising to find a heavy dose of this. You're just getting comfortable with the characters, and then one will mention having some baby-liver paté. Even Oelita, who seems like the one you can most easily sympathize with, mentions early on that in honor of her dead father, she's wearing a coat made from his skin, and carrying around a few strips of papa jerky.
