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* {{Squick}}: The comic pulls no punches when portraying blood and gore, but probably the most disgusting moment so far is when Gogs sticks his fingers in Nigel's mouth to induce vomiting to try and retrieve the key to the chains. Not only does he get a large handful of puke, he splatters it all over a bear's face.
* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.
* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.
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* {{Squick}}: The comic pulls no punches when portraying blood and gore, but probably the most disgusting moment so far is when Gogs sticks his fingers in Nigel's mouth to induce vomiting to try and retrieve the key to the chains. Not only does he get a large handful of puke, he splatters it all over a bear's face.
* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.face.
* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.
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* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.
* WhatAnIdiot: The reader will have this opinion of Nigel by the end of Volume One.
* WhatAnIdiot: The reader will have this opinion of Nigel by the end of Volume One.
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* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.
* WhatAnIdiot: The reader will have this opinion of Nigel by the end of Volume One.direction.
* WhatAnIdiot: The reader will have this opinion of Nigel by the end of Volume One.
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* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.
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* {{Squick}}: The comic pulls no punches when portraying blood and gore, but probably the most disgusting moment so far is when Gogs sticks his fingers in Nigel's mouth to induce vomiting to try and retrieve the key to the chains. Not only does he get a large handful of puke, he splatters it all over a bear's face.
* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in thisdirection.direction.
* WhatAnIdiot: The reader will have this opinion of Nigel by the end of Volume One.
* StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this
* WhatAnIdiot: The reader will have this opinion of Nigel by the end of Volume One.
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* WhoWouldWin: In-story; Joel and his co-workers discover that you can't conclusively decide who would win in a fight between a gorilla and a bear.
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* Straw Character: Nigel is heading in this direction.
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* Straw Character: StrawCharacter: Nigel is heading in this direction.
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* WhoWouldWin: In-story; Joel and his co-workers discover that you can't conclusively decide who would win in a fight between a gorilla and a bear.
* Straw Character: Nigel is heading in this direction.
* Straw Character: Nigel is heading in this direction.
