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* JerkassHasAPoint: James accuses Peter, who broke Anna's heart when he ran away with another woman, of flaunting his wife and family in front of her when they meet in a bookshop. As much of a {{Jerkass}} as Peter is, it's hard not to agree when he says that he didn't know Anna would be there and just wanted to go shopping with his family.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: late in the story it is revealed that Henry is part of a secret society plotting to overthrow the monarchy, murder the royal family and institute a democracy, but that Henry has become conflicted about his role in the group due to his relationship with Ella. While all this sounds potentially cool and intriguing...in the same chapter that the revolutionaries are introduced, Henry gives up the names of his co-conspirators to Edmund and they are all arrested off-page.
* {{Wangst}}: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
* {{Wangst}}: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: late Late in the story it is revealed that Henry is part of a secret society plotting to overthrow the monarchy, murder the royal family and institute a democracy, but that Henry has become conflicted about his role in the group due to his relationship with Ella. While all this sounds potentially cool and intriguing...in the same chapter that the revolutionaries are introduced, Henry gives up the names of his co-conspirators to Edmund and they are all arrested off-page.
* {{Wangst}}: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as aprincess.princess.
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* {{Wangst}}: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a
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* JerkassHasAPoint: James accuses Peter, who broke Anna's heart when he ran away with another woman, of flaunting his wife and family in front of her when they meet in a bookshop. As much of a {{Jerkass}} as Peter is, it's hard not to agree when he says that he didn't know Anna would be there and just wanted to go shopping with his family.
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* ''Wangst'': Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
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* ''Wangst'': {{Wangst}}: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
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* Wangst: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
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* Wangst: ''Wangst'': Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: late in the story it is revealed that Henry is part of a secret society plotting to overthrow the monarchy, murder the royal family and institute a democracy, but that Henry has become conflicted about his role in the group due to his relationship with Ella. While all this sounds potentially cool and intriguing...in the same chapter that the revolutionaries are introduced, Henry gives up the names of his co-conspirators to Edmund and they are all arrested off-page.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: late in the story it is revealed that Henry is part of a secret society plotting to overthrow the monarchy, murder the royal family and institute a democracy, but that Henry has become conflicted about his role in the group due to his relationship with Ella. While all this sounds potentially cool and intriguing...in the same chapter that the revolutionaries are introduced, Henry gives up the names of his co-conspirators to Edmund and they are all arrested off-page.off-page.
* Wangst: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
* Wangst: Cinderella can fall into this at times, particularly when thinking about how bored she is as a princess.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Sarah is a delightfully ditzy girl and her interactions with the more hard-nosed Anna provide some much needed levity in the story. She gets PutOnABus less than a third of the way into the story and is never seen again.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: late in the story it is revealed that Henry is part of a secret society plotting to overthrow the monarchy, murder the royal family and institute a democracy, but that Henry has become conflicted about his role in the group due to his relationship with Ella. While all this sounds potentially cool and intriguing...in the same chapter that the revolutionaries are introduced, Henry gives up the names of his co-conspirators to Edmund and they are all arrested off-page.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: late in the story it is revealed that Henry is part of a secret society plotting to overthrow the monarchy, murder the royal family and institute a democracy, but that Henry has become conflicted about his role in the group due to his relationship with Ella. While all this sounds potentially cool and intriguing...in the same chapter that the revolutionaries are introduced, Henry gives up the names of his co-conspirators to Edmund and they are all arrested off-page.
