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** Cloud, Tifa & Barret has successfully snuck into Hojo's lab to rescue Aerith and thanks to the Mayor, they have yet to be caught by the security.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That they would tail behind his back and sneakily follow him until they found Aerith before escaping undetected. Alternately, they could simply knock him out and take his keycard before they search the entire facility for her, only keeping him alive albeit subdued to interrogate him in case they were unable to find he before they kill him to ensure that he will no longer pose a danger to Midgar once Aerith is found.\\
'''Instead:''' Barret proceed to blew their cover by holding Hojo at gunpoint and while they're successful in rescuing Aerith, Hojo is able to call the security for help and sic monsters & machines against him while also allowing him to trap the party inside the facility in order to force them to battle his creatures ForScience.
'''You'd Expect:''' That they would tail behind his back and sneakily follow him until they found Aerith before escaping undetected. Alternately, they could simply knock him out and take his keycard before they search the entire facility for her, only keeping him alive albeit subdued to interrogate him in case they were unable to find he before they kill him to ensure that he will no longer pose a danger to Midgar once Aerith is found.\\
'''Instead:''' Barret proceed to blew their cover by holding Hojo at gunpoint and while they're successful in rescuing Aerith, Hojo is able to call the security for help and sic monsters & machines against him while also allowing him to trap the party inside the facility in order to force them to battle his creatures ForScience.
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** Cloud, Tifa & Barret has have successfully snuck into Hojo's lab to rescue Aerith and thanks to the Mayor, they have yet to be caught by the security.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That they would tail behind his back and sneakily follow him until theyfound find Aerith before escaping undetected. Alternately, they could simply knock him out and take his keycard before they search the entire facility for her, only keeping him alive albeit subdued to interrogate him in case they were are unable to find he her before they kill him to ensure that he will no longer pose a danger to Midgar once Aerith is found.\\
'''Instead:''' Barretproceed proceeds to blew blow their cover by holding Hojo at gunpoint and while they're successful in rescuing Aerith, Hojo is able to call the security for help and sic monsters & machines against him while also allowing him to trap the party inside the facility in order to force them to battle his creatures ForScience.
'''You'd Expect:''' That they would tail behind his back and sneakily follow him until they
'''Instead:''' Barret
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'''You'd Expect:''' For the insider to verify the Materia's location, the status of its construction double checking as to whether or not said rumors ended up being confirmed before they report said findings to the Wutaian government.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' For the insider to verify the Materia's location, the status of its construction as well as double checking as to whether or not said rumors ended up being confirmed true before they report said findings to the Wutaian government.\\
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** A Wutai spy within the Shinra headquarters has heard rumors that the company is creating the ultimate Materia that if used, can turn the tides of battle when the war against them is renewed.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' For the insider to verify the Materia's location, the status of its construction double checking as to whether or not said rumors ended up being confirmed before they report said findings to the Wutaian government.\\
'''Instead:''' They immediately informed their findings to Wutai the moment they heard the rumors with the latter sending Yuffie along with Sonon as her bodyguard to steal it. Not only did it turned out to be AllForNothing due to the Materia currently being in development stage but it ended up forcing Sonon so sacrifice himself to allow Yuffie to escape before Nero could kill her.
'''You'd Expect:''' For the insider to verify the Materia's location, the status of its construction double checking as to whether or not said rumors ended up being confirmed before they report said findings to the Wutaian government.\\
'''Instead:''' They immediately informed their findings to Wutai the moment they heard the rumors with the latter sending Yuffie along with Sonon as her bodyguard to steal it. Not only did it turned out to be AllForNothing due to the Materia currently being in development stage but it ended up forcing Sonon so sacrifice himself to allow Yuffie to escape before Nero could kill her.
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'''You'd Expect''': That Ilberd would recognize that his position is quite precarious, having assisted in setting it up, he should know the coup is anything but a slam dunk, as it hinges on [[spoiler:framing the Warrior of Light, a national hero with exactly zero motive, and the Scions of the Seventh Dawn, a neutral organization who voluntarily made life difficult for themselves to avoid accusations of being in the pockets of the very political faction now trying to arrest them]], all of which the rest of Eorzea was hours away from calling bullshit on in a best-case scenario. Additionally, his involvement shows the Crystal Braves are anything but trustworthy.\\
'''Instead''': Ilberd escalates the situation for [[ItAmusedMe his own amusement]], making him mostly responsible for the accused all be able to slip the net and forcing to conspiracy to bury the details instead of being able to immediately consolidate power. He's then surprised when the Braves are cut loose for being a liability and an incredibly convenient scapegoat, leaving them with no base, no money, no resources, and no friends in high places.
'''Instead''': Ilberd escalates the situation for [[ItAmusedMe his own amusement]], making him mostly responsible for the accused all be able to slip the net and forcing to conspiracy to bury the details instead of being able to immediately consolidate power. He's then surprised when the Braves are cut loose for being a liability and an incredibly convenient scapegoat, leaving them with no base, no money, no resources, and no friends in high places.
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'''You'd Expect''': That Ilberd would recognize that his position is quite precarious, having assisted in setting it up, precarious. [[spoiler:While he should know was fully aware the coup arrest is a wheels-within-wheels farce he was asked to take some fall from by deliberately escalating]], the outcome was anything but a slam dunk, as it hinges on [[spoiler:framing the Warrior of Light, a national hero with exactly zero motive, and the Scions of the Seventh Dawn, a neutral organization who voluntarily made life difficult for themselves certain once other Eorzean leaders got time to avoid accusations of being in the pockets of the very political faction now trying to arrest them]], all of which the rest of Eorzea was hours away from calling bullshit on in a best-case scenario.react. Additionally, his involvement shows the Crystal Braves are anything but trustworthy.\\
'''Instead''': Ilberdescalates the continues to inflame a situation for [[ItAmusedMe his own amusement]], making him mostly responsible for backers want stabilized, including abducting and attempting to execute a valuable political prisoner and trying to assassinate a national hero in the accused process, all to push a personal agenda that simply cannot be able to slip achieved in the net and forcing to conspiracy to bury short term, especially in the details instead of being able to immediately consolidate power.current political climate. He's then surprised when the Braves are cut loose for being a liability and an incredibly convenient scapegoat, leaving them with no base, no money, no resources, and no friends in high places.
'''Instead''': Ilberd
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** Speaking of the Crystal Braves, the same incident has them very publicly turning their coats, going from a controversial neutral force to throwing in their lot as the kind of private army they were formed to avoid. This is especially true for ringleader Ilberd, who's ordered the deaths of every loyalist member of the force to set this up.\\
'''You'd Expect''': That Ilberd would recognize that his position is quite precarious, having assisted in setting it up, he should know the coup is anything but a slam dunk, as it hinges on [[spoiler:framing the Warrior of Light, a national hero with exactly zero motive, and the Scions of the Seventh Dawn, a neutral organization who voluntarily made life difficult for themselves to avoid accusations of being in the pockets of the very political faction now trying to arrest them]], all of which the rest of Eorzea was hours away from calling bullshit on in a best-case scenario. Additionally, his involvement shows the Crystal Braves are anything but trustworthy.\\
'''Instead''': Ilberd escalates the situation for [[ItAmusedMe his own amusement]], making him mostly responsible for the accused all be able to slip the net and forcing to conspiracy to bury the details instead of being able to immediately consolidate power. He's then surprised when the Braves are cut loose for being a liability and an incredibly convenient scapegoat, leaving them with no base, no money, no resources, and no friends in high places.
'''You'd Expect''': That Ilberd would recognize that his position is quite precarious, having assisted in setting it up, he should know the coup is anything but a slam dunk, as it hinges on [[spoiler:framing the Warrior of Light, a national hero with exactly zero motive, and the Scions of the Seventh Dawn, a neutral organization who voluntarily made life difficult for themselves to avoid accusations of being in the pockets of the very political faction now trying to arrest them]], all of which the rest of Eorzea was hours away from calling bullshit on in a best-case scenario. Additionally, his involvement shows the Crystal Braves are anything but trustworthy.\\
'''Instead''': Ilberd escalates the situation for [[ItAmusedMe his own amusement]], making him mostly responsible for the accused all be able to slip the net and forcing to conspiracy to bury the details instead of being able to immediately consolidate power. He's then surprised when the Braves are cut loose for being a liability and an incredibly convenient scapegoat, leaving them with no base, no money, no resources, and no friends in high places.
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'''Instead:''': They insist on fighting, and Bartz wallops Kelgar ''so'' hard he's bedridden. [[spoiler:And then dies a short while later.]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Way to cost yourselves an ally for the fight against Exdeath, team!]]
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* ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyCrystalChronicles1'' has the world covered in miasma, which is deadly to breathe in unless people use crystals to keep it at bay. Even the water is affected by Miasma. De Nam, a researcher, tries to [[AcquiredPoisonImmunity build up an immunity to Miasma by taking sips of the tainted water over time.]]\\
'''You'd Expect''': De Nam to stop drinking the water when it's clear that his immunity idea is not working and is making him sick.\\
'''Instead''': He keeps drinking the water. Slaying a specific monster has you recovering De Nam's bandana, but it's not clear if he transformed into a monster or if a monster got him while he was weakened. In either case, De Nam is clearly gone.
'''You'd Expect''': De Nam to stop drinking the water when it's clear that his immunity idea is not working and is making him sick.\\
'''Instead''': He keeps drinking the water. Slaying a specific monster has you recovering De Nam's bandana, but it's not clear if he transformed into a monster or if a monster got him while he was weakened. In either case, De Nam is clearly gone.
