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* Cliffhanger: [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch3pt1-page-28/ This page]], which just so happens to be taking place on the [[LiteralMetaphor edge of a cliff]].
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* Cliffhanger: CliffHanger: [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch3pt1-page-28/ This page]], which just so happens to be taking place on the [[LiteralMetaphor edge of a cliff]].
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* Cliffhanger: [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch3pt1-page-28/ This page]], which just so happens to be taking place on the [[LiteralMetaphor edge of a cliff]].
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-->'''Alex:''' Oh, trés meta, Writer Boy. I see what you’re doing there...
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**Spooky later on states that birthdays carry magical powers that can be taken advantage of using certain spells. [[spoiler: Spooky himself was transported to Hell on his thirteenth birthday and spent a year there before he somehow managed to get out.]]
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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: In an interlude chapter, the team finds out they have some [[YaoiFangirl very creative fans]] online. Tsunami is disgusted, Fluke finds it hilarious, and Spooks is offended... [[ComicallyMissingThePoint that he's]] [[{{Wimpification}} not the one on top]].
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* [[DangerousSixteenthBirthday Dangerous Eighteenth Birthday]]: According to the Annihilator, superheroes under the age of eighteen are off limits to supervillains, [[EvenEvilHasStandards a policy enforced by himself among others]]. Kyle learns this on his eighteenth birthday, and takes it as a warning that his protection has expired. [[spoiler:[[WhamEpisode He's right.]]]]
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* MundaneUtility: The Platinum Priestess uses her magic to get Kyle dressed for a date.
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* MundaneUtility: The Platinum Priestess uses her magic to [[GorgeousGarmentGeneration get Kyle dressed for a date.date]].
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* ImmortalitySeeker: [[spoiler: The Annihilator and Platinum Priestess. They opened a door into Lampros' realm in the hopes that he would grant them immortality in exchange for passage into the human world.]]
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* ImmortalitySeeker: [[spoiler: The Annihilator and Platinum Priestess. They opened a door into Lampros' Laampros' realm in the hopes that he would grant them immortality in exchange for passage into the human world.]]
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* [[spoiler: ImmortalitySeeker: The Annihilator. He summons a demon specifically for this purpose.]]
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* [[spoiler: ImmortalitySeeker: [[spoiler: The Annihilator. He summons Annihilator and Platinum Priestess. They opened a demon specifically door into Lampros' realm in the hopes that he would grant them immortality in exchange for this purpose.passage into the human world.]]
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* [[spoiler: WhamEpisode: Chapter 2]]2.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Spooky to Kyle: "If you could do anything, ''right now'', what would you do?"
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* [[spoiler: BigRedDevil: [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Laampros]] seems to be one.]]
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* [[spoiler: LukeIAmYourFather: Kyle is Laampros's son.]]
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* [[spoiler: LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Kyle is Laampros's son.]]
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* WrongContextMagic: [[spoiler:Kyle's flame abilities aren't a mutation, nor do they come from magic or alien interference. What this means is anyone's guess.]]
** [[spoiler:Not anymore!]]
** [[spoiler:Not anymore!]]
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* WrongContextMagic: [[spoiler:Kyle's Kyle's flame abilities aren't a mutation, nor do they come from magic or alien interference. What this means is anyone's guess.]]
** [[spoiler:Not anymore!]][[spoiler: Turns out he's the offspring of a king of Hell]].
** [[spoiler:Not anymore!]]
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* WrongContextMagic: [[spoiler:Kyle's flame abilities aren't a mutation, nor do they come from magic or alien interference. What this means is anyone's guess.]]
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* WrongContextMagic: [[spoiler:Kyle's flame abilities aren't a mutation, nor do they come from magic or alien interference. What this means is anyone's guess.]]]]
** [[spoiler:Not anymore!]]
** [[spoiler:Not anymore!]]
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* WillNotTellALie: According to Spooky, Laampros would never lie about [[spoiler: Kyle being his son. It's a matter of {{pride}}.]]
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* {{Gayngster}}: The Annihalator. [[spoiler: Maybe. It's still not entirely clear whether he's gay or just faking it.]]
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* {{Gayngster}}: The Annihalator.Annihilator. [[spoiler: Maybe. It's still not entirely clear whether he's gay or just faking it.]]
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* FauxYay: [[spoiler: The Annihilator pretended to be gay to seduce Kyle so that he and Platinum Priestess could use him as a sacrifice to open a door to Laampros' realm.]]
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* HoneyTrap: [[spoiler: Annihilator seduced Kyle with the purpose of using him as a sacrifice to get into Laampros' realm. He mentions that if Kyle had been straight Platinum Priestess would have done the seducing instead.]]
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* FauxYay: [[spoiler: The Annihilator pretended to be gay to seduce Kyle so that he and Platinum Priestess could use him as a sacrifice to open a door to Laampros' realm.]]
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* FauxYay: [[spoiler: The Annihilator pretended to be gay to seduce Kyle so that he and Platinum Priestess could use him as a sacrifice to open a door to Laampros' realm.]]
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* LetsGetDangerous: Though initially immune to Kyle's fire powers, Annihilator learns the hard way not to piss him off as Kyle's anger causes his powers to grow strong enough to severely burn his arm.
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* LetsGetDangerous: [[spoiler: Though initially immune to Kyle's fire powers, Annihilator learns the hard way not to piss him off as Kyle's anger causes his powers to grow strong enough to severely burn his arm.]]
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler:58]]) and Kyle (17, going on 18) seemed to be heading to one of these...ntil Chapter 2.
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler:58]]) and Kyle (17, going on 18) seemed seem to be heading to one of these...ntil these... [[spoiler: until Chapter 2.]]
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Annihilator claims this is the reason he's evil, but he doesn't seem too sure of it, [[spoiler: and he does sort-of apologize to Kyle after using him to open a gate to Laampros' realm, saying he deserves better.]]
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* [[SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains Sensible Heroine, Skimpy (Anti?)Villainess]]: Compare [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch1-page-5/ The Commander]] with [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch1-page-14/ The Platinum Priestess]].
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* [[SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains Sensible Heroine, Skimpy (Anti?)Villainess]]: Villainess]]: Compare [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch1-page-5/ The Commander]] with [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch1-page-14/ The Platinum Priestess]].
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* KnightTemplar: Two rather violent heroes attacked the Anihilator and used brutal force on Kyle (who they thought was the Invisible Man).
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* KnightTemplar: Two rather violent heroes attacked the Anihilator Annihilator and used brutal force on Kyle (who they thought was the Invisible Man).Man).
* LetsGetDangerous: Though initially immune to Kyle's fire powers, Annihilator learns the hard way not to piss him off as Kyle's anger causes his powers to grow strong enough to severely burn his arm.
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* SecretIdentity: Everybody's quite liberal with them, with Kyle calling Fluke "Paul" in public and the Anihilator calling the Platinum Priestess [[AwesomeMcCoolName "Sircea"]] infront of a hero. The Anihilator also has no problem at all revealing his name to Kyle.
** [[spoiler: According to the Anihilator, the names of Kyle's teammates are an OpenSecret to both the other heroes and villains alike.]]
** [[spoiler: According to the Anihilator, the names of Kyle's teammates are an OpenSecret to both the other heroes and villains alike.]]
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* SecretIdentity: Everybody's quite liberal with them, with Kyle calling Fluke "Paul" in public and the Anihilator Annihilator calling the Platinum Priestess [[AwesomeMcCoolName "Sircea"]] infront of a hero. The Anihilator Annihilator also has no problem at all revealing his name to Kyle.
** [[spoiler: According to theAnihilator, Annihilator, the names of Kyle's teammates are an OpenSecret to both the other heroes and villains alike.]]
** [[spoiler: According to the
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* OneHeadTaller: Annihilator, to ''everyone''.
** [[spoiler: Laampros is several heads taller than him!]]
** [[spoiler: Laampros is several heads taller than him!]]
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler:58]]) and Kyle (17, going on 18) seem to be heading to one of these.
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* NinetiesAntiHero: Hunter and Killer, the vigilantes who show up to fight Annihilator in Hong Kong. They're cocky [[JerkAss Jerkasses]] who don't care about collateral damage in the service of their worwork.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colorist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue and first two chapters are complete. Somewhat NSFW at times, though nothing gratuitous.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colorist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue and first two chapters are complete. Somewhat NSFW at times, though ''usually'' nothing gratuitous.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colorist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue and first two chapters are complete.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colorist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue and first two chapters are complete.
complete. Somewhat NSFW at times, though nothing gratuitous.
* FauxYay: [[spoiler: The Annihilator pretended to be gay to seduce Kyle so that he and Platinum Priestess could use him as a sacrifice to open a door to Laampros' realm.]]
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* OccultDetective: According to WordOfGod, "[Spooky's] work outside of The Young Protectors does involve what are essentially 'occult investigations'."
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Annihilator. One one hand, he is a known supervillain (whose alias doesn't exactly inspire confidence in his benevolence) and doesn't seem to have a problem with manipulation. On the other, his evilness is (so far) an InformedAttribute; at worst, he's played some mind games.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Annihilator. One one hand, he is a known supervillain (whose alias doesn't exactly inspire confidence in his benevolence) and doesn't seem to have a problem with manipulation. On the other, his evilness is (so far) an InformedAttribute; at worst, he's played some mind games.[[spoiler: He's not so ambiguous now as of the latter half of Chapter 2. Same goes for the Platinum Priestess.]]
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* CoolCar: Spooky Jones's red 1969 Pontiac Firebird convertible (seen [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch3pt1-page-3/ here]]).
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colorist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue and first chapter are complete.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colorist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue and first chapter two chapters are complete.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colourist].[colorist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue and first chapter are complete.
