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* DemotedToExtra: Downplayed with Jen in the later books, but applicable. She is still a main charecter who affects the plot but chaerctesr like Mewtwo, Team Charm, and [[Darkrai, Wes, and N]] start receiving more overall focus and affect the plot more than she does. Special mention goes to Mewtwo, who directly drives much of the main conflict, handles the moajrioty of the fighting [[spoiler: including against Victini]] and is the one most proactive in investigating Cihper and Lorvina.
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* DemotedToExtra: Downplayed with Jen in the later books, but applicable. She is still a main charecter who affects the plot but chaerctesr charecters like Mewtwo, Team Charm, and [[Darkrai, Wes, and N]] start receiving more overall focus and affect the plot more than she does. Special mention goes to Mewtwo, who directly drives much of the main conflict, handles the moajrioty of the fighting [[spoiler: including against Victini]] and is the one most proactive in investigating Cihper and Lorvina.
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* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:Victini after Jen was forced to knock her out. Jen was attacked by Victini after she was trying to rescue Victini off a floating island's cliffside which the island was hovering over a black, fiery abyss]].
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*DemotedToExtra: Downplayed with Jen in the later books, but applicable. She is still a main charecter who affects the plot but chaerctesr like Mewtwo, Team Charm, and [[Darkrai, Wes, and N]] start receiving more overall focus and affect the plot more than she does. Special mention goes to Mewtwo, who directly drives much of the main conflict, handles the moajrioty of the fighting [[spoiler: including against Victini]] and is the one most proactive in investigating Cihper and Lorvina.
**Somewhat adverted in the climax where [[spoiler: Jen gets the final fight against Victini and saves repairs the Creation Engine with Hoopa's aid.]]
* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:Victini after Jen was forced to knock her out. Jen was attacked by Victini after she was trying to rescue Victini off afloating floating
island's cliffside which the island was hovering over a black, fiery abyss]].
**Somewhat adverted in the climax where [[spoiler: Jen gets the final fight against Victini and saves repairs the Creation Engine with Hoopa's aid.]]
* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:Victini after Jen was forced to knock her out. Jen was attacked by Victini after she was trying to rescue Victini off a
island's cliffside which the island was hovering over a black, fiery abyss]].
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*OutOfFocus: Jen gets this gradually after Mewtwo after shows up in the comic, even morso after joins her group at Celebi's forest. Mewtwo starts driving the plot at tone more than Jen does, such as his investigations , [[spoiler: fighting Victini]] and doing a ton of the heavy lifting when it comes ot combat and leading the group on the adventure. Adtioantly, other characters such as Team Charm's members and [[spoiler: Darkrai] join the group and receive much more focus and plot revlance than Jen herself does at times. She does not even speak to her [[spoiler: sister Lorvina, the *GreaterScopeVillain of the series]] onscreen when in her vicinity, despite being related. Jen does at least [[spoiler: get the final fight against Victini and gets to be the one who fixes the Cretaion Engine, with Hoopa's help though.]]
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** This is actually a plot point in Jen's character arc. Before MT.Freeze Jen insists that she stay in the world out of guilt for [[spoiler: what her sister did in Cipher.]] Gengar brings up the family left behind ( namely Jen's mother) and attempts to convince her to return home, reasoning her mother will miss her and staying in the pokemon world is not as pleasant as Jen will think. Later on, Jen still seems to consider staying but [[spoiler: Darkrai ]] tries to convince her to go home, reflecting Gengar's earlier point of life in the Mystery Dungeon world may not prove as pleasant as Jen thinks, her family will miss her, and its Jen's sisters's actions are not her fault. Jen's response to this is not shown, however.
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** This is actually a plot point in Jen's character arc. Before MT.Freeze Jen insists that she stay in the world out of guilt for [[spoiler: what her sister did in Cipher.]] Gengar brings up the family left behind ( namely Jen's mother) and attempts to convince her to return home, reasoning her mother will miss her and staying in the pokemon world is not as pleasant as Jen will think. Later on, Jen still seems to consider staying but [[spoiler: Darkrai ]] tries to convince her to go home, reflecting Gengar's earlier point of life in the Mystery Dungeon world may not prove as pleasant as Jen thinks, her family will miss her, and its Jen's sisters's [[spoiler: Lorvina's actions in Cipher]] are not her fault. Jen's response to this is not shown, however.
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**This is actually a plot point in Jen's character arc. Before MT.Freeze Jen insists that she stay in the world out of guilt for [[spoiler: what her sister did in Cipher.]] Gengar brings up the family left behind ( namely Jen's mother) and attempts to convince her to return home, reasoning her mother will miss her and staying in the pokemon world is not as pleasant as Jen will think. Later on, Jen still seems to consider staying but [[spoiler: Darkrai ]] tries to convince her to go home, reflecting Gengar's earlier point of life in the Mystery Dungeon world may not prove as pleasant as Jen thinks, her family will miss her, and its Jen's sisters's actions are not her fault. Jen's response to this is not shown, however.
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*SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Unlike most Mystery Dungeon protagonists, Jen is not immediately skilled in combat and is unadapted to her new body, and is overall stressed and terrified by her experience in the Mystery Dungeon world. . She is terrified and completely out of her element, and cannot do much of anything in a fight for the majority of the comic.
**The usual mystery dungeon concept of competent *KidHero is adverted here. Jen, being only a child during the story, is terrified at being stranded alone in a new world and her adventure often proves too much for her to handle. She is completely terrified of the various dangers and threats she has to do with to the point she has a breakdown at several points out of fear and stress. Any child put in Jen's position would have realistically acted the same.
**The usual mystery dungeon concept of competent *KidHero is adverted here. Jen, being only a child during the story, is terrified at being stranded alone in a new world and her adventure often proves too much for her to handle. She is completely terrified of the various dangers and threats she has to do with to the point she has a breakdown at several points out of fear and stress. Any child put in Jen's position would have realistically acted the same.
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The comic features some exceptional artwork and writing, and successfully pulls together characters and plot threads from across the Pokémon continuity. It's a long runner comic since 2012 that has been regularly updated twice a week, until personal issues have put the comic on an indefinite hiatus in 2019.
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The comic features some exceptional artwork and writing, and successfully pulls together characters and plot threads from across the Pokémon continuity. It's a long runner comic since 2012 that has been regularly updated twice a week, until personal issues have put the comic on an indefinite hiatus in 2019. The original links don't work anymore but here [[https://mspfa.com/?s=42766&p=1here is a link to the mirror site]]. The comic can also be seen on [[https://www.deviantart.com/sulfurbunny sulfurbunnys]] Website/DeviantArt.
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* LoveMartyr: Despite everything she's done to him, Darkrai still thinks of Lovrina as his "partner."
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* LoveMartyr: Despite everything she's done to him, Darkrai still thinks of Lovrina as his "partner."
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* StockholmSyndrome: Despite everything she's done to him, Darkrai still thinks of Lovrina as his "partner."
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* StockholmSyndrome: LoveMartyr: Despite everything she's done to him, Darkrai still thinks of Lovrina as his "partner."
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The normal introduction to the ''Mystery Dungeon'' games is that the protagonist wakes up in the Pokémon world, and after some brief anxiety that they have been transformed into a Pokémon they find a partner and set out on an adventure; there's no real danger, since they generally wake up near civilization and friendly Pokémon. This webcomic shows how lucky the other protagonists are: Jen wakes up in the middle of the wilderness, dazed and confused to suddenly becoming an Audino, having no understanding of how her powers work, struggles against hostile Pokémon in her fight for survival, and her adventure (trekking the wilderness to get to civilization and safety) is shown as gruelling, with the long distance walked itself causing injuries. Once they get to Treasure Town, the story becomes more lighthearted and typically adventurous like the actual games, but the gruelling first chapters still stand out quite a bit.
