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* MoralEventHorizon: For some readers, Helne passes from basic {{Jerkass}} into this territory, when she blackmails Arden into becoming magically oath-bound to murder someone for her (he was ready to be executed rather than do the same thing for the Margravine), by refusing to heal his mortally wounded sister if Arden doesn't give Helge his real name. (Also, in most developed countries, medical professionals ''have to'' try and save dangerously injured people by law, as long as that wouldn't endanger their own life. E.g. a doctor can't just drive past a traffic accident without helping, like the average citizen can even if they attended a first aid course to get their driving license. So Helge, a trained healer, is apparently willing to commit the negligent manslaughter of an innocent woman to get her revenge.)
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* MoralEventHorizon: For some readers, Helne passes from basic {{Jerkass}} into this territory, when she blackmails Arden into becoming magically oath-bound to murder someone for her (he was ready to be executed killed rather than do the same thing for the Margravine), by refusing to heal his mortally wounded sister if Arden doesn't give Helge Helne his real name. (Also, in most developed countries, medical professionals ''have to'' try and to save dangerously injured people by law, ''by law'', as long as that wouldn't endanger their own life. life.[[note]] E.g. a doctor doctor, even when she's on vacation, can't just drive past a traffic accident without helping, like the average citizen can even if they had to attended a first aid course to get their driving license. Doctors also have to carry a more comprehensive package of first aid supplies in their car than everyone else for this reason.[[/note]] So Helge, Helne, a trained healer, is apparently willing to commit the negligent manslaughter of an innocent woman who has been helping her, just to get her revenge.)
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* MoralEventHorizon: For some readers, Helne passes from basic {{Jerkass}} into this territory, when she blackmails Arden into becoming magically oath-bound to murder someone for her (he was ready to be executed rather than do the same thing for the Margravine), by refusing to heal his mortally wounded sister if Arden doesn't give Helge his real name. (Also, in most developed countries, medical professionals ''have to'' try and save dangerously injured people by law, as long as that wouldn't endanger their own life. E.g. a doctor can't just drive past a traffic accident without helping, like the average citizen can even if they attended a first aid course to get their driving license. So Helge, a trained healer, is apparently willing to commit the negligent manslaughter of an innocent woman to get her revenge.)
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Arden seems to draw small animals to him. And fan art shows him
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: FriendToAllLivingThings: Arden seems to draw small animals to him. him. And fan art shows him seemingly getting along well with small animals.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters at “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. While he does have horns and glowy eyes, he is otherwise very people-shaped.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters at “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. While he does have horns horns, glowy eyes and glowy eyes, marks around his body, he is otherwise very people-shaped.people-shaped. A codex entry sheds some light on the matter, as Sóth-Dirra are apparently humans who have made a pact with one of the ancient gods who had been trapped into stones by the first human settlers of the land.
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* FamedInStory: The Soth-Dirra to the world at large, though most
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* FamedInStory: FamedInStory: The Soth-Dirra to the world at large, though most of the populace seems to have wildly varying ideas of what they may look like.
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* ActionGirl: Helne and Rehl. Rehl in particular is better at the [[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]] part of an entrance.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rehl has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a few pages previously.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rehl has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a few pages previously.
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* ActionGirl: Helne and Rehl. Rehl Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the [[http://cindersong.“[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]] action]]” part of an entrance.
* AfterActionPatchUp: Arden and Helne have a brief moment after they escape the jailhouse guards.
* AngerBornOfWorry: How Arden reacts to Rehl after she retrieves the keys from the guard room.
* ArcWords:
**“Its not clean work.” From the filler story.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sisterRehl Rhel has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a few pages previously.previously.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Arden and Rehl when facing the War Golem.
* CrazyEnoughToWork:
** Helne’s “plan” to break Arden from confinement.
** Rehl’s plan to take down the War Golem.
* CurbStompBattle: How Arden deals with the jail guards during his tower escape.
* AfterActionPatchUp: Arden and Helne have a brief moment after they escape the jailhouse guards.
* AngerBornOfWorry: How Arden reacts to Rehl after she retrieves the keys from the guard room.
* ArcWords:
**“Its not clean work.” From the filler story.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister
* BrotherSisterTeam: Arden and Rehl when facing the War Golem.
* CrazyEnoughToWork:
** Helne’s “plan” to break Arden from confinement.
** Rehl’s plan to take down the War Golem.
* CurbStompBattle: How Arden deals with the jail guards during his tower escape.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters as “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. While he does have horns and glowy eyes, he is otherwise very people-shaped.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: FamedInStory: The Soth-Dirra to the world at large, though most
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Arden seems to draw small animals to him. And fan art shows him
* FunnyBackgroundEvent:
** the two guards are technically a foreground event “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-12 here]]” , but they’re the background relative to our protagonists.
** Helne and Arden’s conversation “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-33 here]]” as Rehl makes a decision.
* IndyPloy: Helne’s modus operandi for her jailbreak. “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-15 The Plan]]”
* KillItWithFire: Arden’s method of combat resolution.
* MysteriousPast: Helne’s makes allusions to events that happened prior to the story’s start.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many charactersas at “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. destruction. While he does have horns and glowy eyes, he is otherwise very people-shaped.people-shaped.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Averted. The action continues during Helne and Arden’s escape, interrupting the conversation at a few points.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Helne’s reaction when the King dies.
* TranquilFury: Arden before he ends the fight with the jailhouse guards.
* WordOfGod: Several provided via codex pages and questions asked by readers on the site’s comments page.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Arden seems to draw small animals to him. And fan art shows him
* FunnyBackgroundEvent:
** the two guards are technically a foreground event “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-12 here]]” , but they’re the background relative to our protagonists.
** Helne and Arden’s conversation “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-33 here]]” as Rehl makes a decision.
* IndyPloy: Helne’s modus operandi for her jailbreak. “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-15 The Plan]]”
* KillItWithFire: Arden’s method of combat resolution.
* MysteriousPast: Helne’s makes allusions to events that happened prior to the story’s start.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Averted. The action continues during Helne and Arden’s escape, interrupting the conversation at a few points.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Helne’s reaction when the King dies.
* TranquilFury: Arden before he ends the fight with the jailhouse guards.
* WordOfGod: Several provided via codex pages and questions asked by readers on the site’s comments page.
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Cindersong tells the tale of Helne, an empathy-challenged healer and her quest for vengeance of the murder of her girlfriend. She enlists the aid of the mild-mannered dragon, Arden as muscle. And then the well-intentioned thief Rhel tags along. They stumble head-long into boisterous adventure and national intrigue as well as friendship and the occasional hug. A heartfelt and humorous fantasy comic.
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Cindersong tells the tale of Helne, an empathy-challenged healer and her quest for vengeance of the murder of her girlfriend. She enlists the aid of the mild-mannered dragon, Arden as muscle. And then the well-intentioned thief Rhel Rehl tags along. They stumble head-long into boisterous adventure and national intrigue as well as friendship and the occasional hug. A heartfelt and humorous fantasy comic.
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* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the [[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]] part of an entrance.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rhel has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a few pages previously.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rhel has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a few pages previously.
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* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel Rehl. Rehl in particular is better at the [[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]] part of an entrance.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sisterRhel Rehl has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a few pages previously.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister
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Cindersong is the tale of a misanthropic healer and her mild-mannered dragon as they search for her girlfriend's murderers. Unfortunately, her quest for bloody vengeance is frustrated by a series of increasingly cordial and well-meaning companions who insist on helping one another, learning new things, and exploring their feelings. Their travels take them through a wild and unexplored world- making friends, dodging foes, and skirting a deadly war.
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Cindersong is tells the tale of a misanthropic Helne, an empathy-challenged healer and her quest for vengeance of the murder of her girlfriend. She enlists the aid of the mild-mannered dragon dragon, Arden as they search for her girlfriend's murderers. Unfortunately, her quest for bloody vengeance is frustrated by a series of increasingly cordial muscle. And then the well-intentioned thief Rhel tags along. They stumble head-long into boisterous adventure and well-meaning companions who insist on helping one another, learning new things, national intrigue as well as friendship and exploring their feelings. Their travels take them through a wild the occasional hug. A heartfelt and unexplored world- making friends, dodging foes, and skirting a deadly war.humorous fantasy comic.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters at “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. While he does have horns and glowy eyes, he is otherwise very people-shaped.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters at as “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. While he does have horns and glowy eyes, he is otherwise very people-shaped.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rhel has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a pages previously.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rhel has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a few pages previously.
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“[[http://cindersong.com/ Cindersong]]” is a web comic created, written, and drawn by Sarah Stern.
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!! “Cindersong” contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]]” part of an entrance.
* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]]” part of an entrance.
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!! “Cindersong” Cindersong contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the“[[http://cindersong.[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]]” action]] part of an entrance.
* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the
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“[[http://cindersong.com/ Cindersong]]” is a web comic created, written, and drawn by Sarah Stern.
The comic updates Mondays and Fridays
Cindersong is the tale of a misanthropic healer and her mild-mannered dragon as they search for her girlfriend's murderers. Unfortunately, her quest for bloody vengeance is frustrated by a series of increasingly cordial and well-meaning companions who insist on helping one another, learning new things, and exploring their feelings. Their travels take them through a wild and unexplored world- making friends, dodging foes, and skirting a deadly war.
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!! “Cindersong” contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]]” part of an entrance.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rhel has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a pages previously.
* DeadpanSnarker: Helne has a particular flair for this.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters at “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. While he does have horns and glowy eyes, he is otherwise very people-shaped.
The comic updates Mondays and Fridays
Cindersong is the tale of a misanthropic healer and her mild-mannered dragon as they search for her girlfriend's murderers. Unfortunately, her quest for bloody vengeance is frustrated by a series of increasingly cordial and well-meaning companions who insist on helping one another, learning new things, and exploring their feelings. Their travels take them through a wild and unexplored world- making friends, dodging foes, and skirting a deadly war.
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!! “Cindersong” contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Helne and Rhel. Rhel in particular is better at the “[[http://cindersong.com/comic/page-28 action]]” part of an entrance.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Arden is very surprised that his sister Rhel has taken to stealing even though he incinerated three guards a pages previously.
* DeadpanSnarker: Helne has a particular flair for this.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Arden is referred to by many characters at “Dragon” and is spoken of as if he is a large, fire-breathing beast of destruction. While he does have horns and glowy eyes, he is otherwise very people-shaped.
