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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Of the 7 members of the ship's crew, 1 (Nilje) is male.
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* TheOneGuy: Nilje
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* TheOneGuy: NiljeNilje is the only male in the ship's 7-person crew.
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* SpeechBubbleCensoring: Accidentally used in one strip due to poor planning.
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* SpeechBubbleCensoring: Accidentally used in one strip due to poor planning.planning, for which the author apologizes in TheRant.
-->This was supposed to be the first instance of full frontal (well, lateral) nudity in the comic. But then there wasn’t enough room at the top of the image for a text box. So now it looks like Ayuri is censored. Oh well, I’ll plan these out better in the future.
-->This was supposed to be the first instance of full frontal (well, lateral) nudity in the comic. But then there wasn’t enough room at the top of the image for a text box. So now it looks like Ayuri is censored. Oh well, I’ll plan these out better in the future.
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* RobotGirl: Kay
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* RobotGirl: KayAside from being made of plastic, Kay seems like an ordinary human woman.
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Dobeks, and also Kay when she's first created.
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Dobeks, and also Kay when she's first created.a domesticated species of non-sapient humanoid. Like most pets, they wear a collar at most, making some humans uncomfortable.
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* NakedOnArrival: KayWhen building [[RobotGirl Kay]], the crew neglects to clothe her.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Tanja and [[CatFolk Saye]], and Wanda and [[PuppeteerParasite Fenna]].
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* InterspeciesRomance: Two couples: Tanja (human) and [[CatFolk Saye]], Saye (CatFolk), and Wanda (human) and [[PuppeteerParasite Fenna]].Fenna (PuppeteerParasite).
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Nilje is the only male in the main cast.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Nilje is Of the only male in 7 members of the main cast.ship's crew, 1 (Nilje) is male.
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* CatFolk: Saye
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* CatFolk: Saye
Saye, leading to some discomfort when her girlfriend gets a [[FurryConfusion pet cat]].
* FurryConfusion: Cats makeSaye [[CatFolk Saye]] uncomfortable.
* FurryConfusion: Cats make
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* BornAsAnAdult: Kay[[RobotGirl Kay]] is constructed full-grown.
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* HumanoidAliens: Including a non-sapient, domesticated one.
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* RubberForeheadAliens: Dobeks, which are domesticated humanoids with the intelligence (and [[NakedPeopleAreFunny fashion sense]]) of a dog.
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''Ayuri'' is an occasionally NSFW SciencFiction WebComic by Jacob Jones. It follows the crew of the private starship ''Ayuri'', having been recently hired by Captain Wanda Otis.
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''Ayuri'' is an occasionally NSFW SciencFiction ScienceFiction WebComic by Jacob Jones. It follows the crew of the private starship ''Ayuri'', having been recently hired by Captain Wanda Otis.
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''Ayuri'' is an occasionally NSFW SciencFiction WebComic by Jacob Jones. It follows the crew of the private starship ''Ayuri'', having been recently hired by Captain Wanda Otis.
It can be read [[http://www.ayuricomic.com/ here]].
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!! Ayuri provides examples of:
* AllThereInTheManual: Fenna's status as a PuppeteerParasite, and dobeks serving as her species' host, are stated on her character page.
* {{Arcology}}: The comic starts with the characters in one.
* BornAsAnAdult: Kay
* CastFullOfGay: All characters shown to be in relationships so far are lesbians.
* CatFolk: Saye
* FurryConfusion: Cats make Saye uncomfortable.
* HumanoidAliens: Including a non-sapient, domesticated one.
* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Nilje is the only male in the main cast.
* InterspeciesRomance: Tanja and [[CatFolk Saye]], and Wanda and [[PuppeteerParasite Fenna]].
* NakedOnArrival: Kay
* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Dobeks, and also Kay when she's first created.
* NameFromAnotherSpecies: Fenna Otis, due to her marriage to Wanda.
* PuppeteerParasite: Fenna is a sympathetic version, with a non-sapient host.
* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: Kay's first action after booting up is to feel awkward about being naked.
* RobotGirl: Kay
* ScienceFiction
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Kay feels the need to buy clothing when she finds she doesn't have any, but doesn't mind doing so naked.
* SpeechBubbleCensoring: Accidentally used in one strip due to poor planning.
* TaintedVeins: Fenna, or more accurately, [[PuppeteerParasite her host]].
* TheOneGuy: Nilje
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It can be read [[http://www.ayuricomic.com/ here]].
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!! Ayuri provides examples of:
* AllThereInTheManual: Fenna's status as a PuppeteerParasite, and dobeks serving as her species' host, are stated on her character page.
* {{Arcology}}: The comic starts with the characters in one.
* BornAsAnAdult: Kay
* CastFullOfGay: All characters shown to be in relationships so far are lesbians.
* CatFolk: Saye
* FurryConfusion: Cats make Saye uncomfortable.
* HumanoidAliens: Including a non-sapient, domesticated one.
* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Nilje is the only male in the main cast.
* InterspeciesRomance: Tanja and [[CatFolk Saye]], and Wanda and [[PuppeteerParasite Fenna]].
* NakedOnArrival: Kay
* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Dobeks, and also Kay when she's first created.
* NameFromAnotherSpecies: Fenna Otis, due to her marriage to Wanda.
* PuppeteerParasite: Fenna is a sympathetic version, with a non-sapient host.
* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: Kay's first action after booting up is to feel awkward about being naked.
* RobotGirl: Kay
* ScienceFiction
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Kay feels the need to buy clothing when she finds she doesn't have any, but doesn't mind doing so naked.
* SpeechBubbleCensoring: Accidentally used in one strip due to poor planning.
* TaintedVeins: Fenna, or more accurately, [[PuppeteerParasite her host]].
* TheOneGuy: Nilje
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