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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/JoJopolis'' written by {{Website/Webtoons}} user doopo that is centered on the adventures of Johnnie Newt after the events of Jojopolis. It can be found [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/aap-mob-feedback/list?title_no=619836&page=2 here.]]
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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/JoJopolis'' written by {{Website/Webtoons}} {{Platform/Webtoons}} user doopo that is centered on the adventures of Johnnie Newt after the events of Jojopolis. It can be found [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/aap-mob-feedback/list?title_no=619836&page=2 here.]]
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* WholePlotReference: [[LightNovel/PurpleHazeFeedback It's a spinoff based on a major JJBA ally who didn't get a full character arc in the original using an evolved version of their stand alongside a male and female ally. If you aren't convinced yet, just read the title.]]
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* WholePlotReference: [[LightNovel/PurpleHazeFeedback [[Literature/PurpleHazeFeedback It's a spinoff based on a major JJBA ally who didn't get a full character arc in the original using an evolved version of their stand alongside a male and female ally. If you aren't convinced yet, just read the title.]]
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Gives Jonnie Newt his very own story
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Gives Jonnie Newt his very own storystory.
* TheBeastmaster: Jonnie's Stand allows him to control prawns just like in ''Webcomic/JoJopolis'', but here it's evolved to the point where he can control ''any'' type of invertebrate so long as they're within range.
* GroinAttack: Happens against Wessel in chapter 5.
* MusicalThemeNaming: Just like the [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure series it's based on]], most characters and Stands are named after music references.
* TheBeastmaster: Jonnie's Stand allows him to control prawns just like in ''Webcomic/JoJopolis'', but here it's evolved to the point where he can control ''any'' type of invertebrate so long as they're within range.
* GroinAttack: Happens against Wessel in chapter 5.
* MusicalThemeNaming: Just like the [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure series it's based on]], most characters and Stands are named after music references.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Based off of [[Webcomic/{{Jojopolis}}]]
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* WholePlotReference: [[LightNovel/PurpleHazeFeedback It's a spinoff based on a major jojo ally who didn't get a full character arc in the original using an evolved version of their stand alongside a male and female ally. If you aren't convinced yet, just read the title]]
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Based off of [[Webcomic/{{Jojopolis}}]]
''Webcomic/JoJopolis''.
* WholePlotReference: [[LightNovel/PurpleHazeFeedback It's a spinoff based on a majorjojo JJBA ally who didn't get a full character arc in the original using an evolved version of their stand alongside a male and female ally. If you aren't convinced yet, just read the title]]title.]]
* WholePlotReference: [[LightNovel/PurpleHazeFeedback It's a spinoff based on a major
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* NextTierPowerUp: A$AP Mob LORD$, an evolved version of A$AP Mob that Jonnie obtained between the events of Jojopolis and the story, with the power to control all invertebrates, not just prawns, and the ability to let anything controlled by it to ignore gravity.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Gives Jonnie Newt his very own story
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Based off of [[Webcomic/Jojopolis]]
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* WholePlotReference: [[LightNovel/PurpleHazeFeedback[[LightNovel/PurpleHazeFeedback It's a spinoff based on a major jojo ally who didn't get a full character arc in the original using an evolved version of their stand alongside a male and female ally. If you aren't convinced yet, just read the title]]
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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/JoJopolis'' written by {{Website/Webtoons}} user doopo that is centered on the adventures of Johnnie Newt after the events of Jojopolis. It can be found [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/aap-mob-feedback/list?title_no=619836&page=2 here.]]
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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/JoJopolis'' written by {{Website/Webtoons}} user doopo that is centered on the adventures of Johnnie Newt after the events of Jojopolis. It can be found [[https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/aap-mob-feedback/list?title_no=619836&page=2 here.]]]]
* RecursiveFanfiction: Based off of [[Webcomic/Jojopolis]]
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Based off of [[Webcomic/Jojopolis]]
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If you're going to make a TV Tropes page for something, at least have the intro look nice and don't leave it as a mess for six days.
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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/Jojopolis'' created by The doctor that is centered on the adventures of Johnnie Newt after the events of Jojopolis. It can be found here
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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/Jojopolis'' created ''Webcomic/JoJopolis'' written by The doctor {{Website/Webtoons}} user doopo that is centered on the adventures of Johnnie Newt after the events of Jojopolis. It can be found here[[https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/aap-mob-feedback/list?title_no=619836&page=2 here.]]
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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/Jojopolis'' created by The doctor. It can be found here
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A$AP Mob Feedback is a RecursiveFanfiction of ''Webcomic/Jojopolis'' created by The doctor.doctor that is centered on the adventures of Johnnie Newt after the events of Jojopolis. It can be found here
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