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* KillEmAll: Anxiety kills at least one character in all her canon appearances. Even when finally killed in Huitzi's round, she still managed to kill Akeyra.
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* BreakoutCharacter: Huitzi. Like [[LawOfTalos Karl]], he's one of Unknown-Person's characters.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: A subtle one in Semblance's backstory. He killed an attacker that gravely wounded him and his girlfriend in an effort to save themselves. He starts out in Tartarus, the place where dead petitioners who have committed sins start out in. Winston even comments that Semblance isn't a bad fellow, but he screwed up big time.
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* OhCrap: Happens quite a number of times.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: A number of competitors aren't above killing to get a loved one revived.
* WhatTheHellHero: Huitzi calls out Akeyra once he finds out her motive for collecting the Soul Coins.
* WhatTheHellHero: Huitzi calls out Akeyra once he finds out her motive for collecting the Soul Coins.
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* BlownAcrossTheRoom: Melody's Amp Arms are made to do this to opponents via [[MakeMeWannaShout sonic attack]].
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* ElementalPowers: Being a mage, Lil' Jack can use a number of them. He beats Dretos by using a powerful fire spell.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Used when Anxiety attacks Sada and also a random person later on.
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* SaiGuy: Ragdoll's WeaponOfChoice.
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* BreakoutCharacter: [[TheWoobie Ragdoll]], [[FreakyIsCool Anxiety]] and Huitzi (partially because he's Unknown-Person's OC, like [[LawOfTalos Karl]]).
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Semblance gets killed by a falling clock hand. A gigantic one, no less.
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Minus the Extreme Prejudice part. Semblance gets ''unintentionally'' killed by a gigantic falling clock hand. A gigantic one, no less.hand.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Melody's reaction after killing Semblance, which is also the first time she had killed someone in her entire life.
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* PleaseWakeUp: Melody to Semblance after she unintentionally kills him.
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* ShownTheirWork: Unknown-Person and Tickity-Tock did a good amount of research on [[{{Mayincatec}} Aztec]] language, culture and history and incorporated it into Huitzi's story.
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* TheReveal
** [[spoiler: Shaun is Lil' Jack's future self]]
** [[spoiler: Melody is the reincarnation of Harmony Fasola, the woman who sealed the Ninth Symphony in the past.]]
** [[spoiler: Shaun is Lil' Jack's future self]]
** [[spoiler: Melody is the reincarnation of Harmony Fasola, the woman who sealed the Ninth Symphony in the past.]]
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** Subverted by Ragdoll, his white "mask" is actually his actual face.
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** Subverted by Ragdoll, his white "mask" is actually his actual face.
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* EldritchAbomination: The Ninth Symphony. A being of chaos and destruction that was once sealed by Melody's ancestor but has now broken loose. It's so destructive that ''both the entire underworld and Satan'' find it a massive problem!
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* ChildMage: Lil' Jack. Shaun may seem as this at first, being able to cast the same spells as Lil' Jack, but he's actually MUCH older. [[spoiler: This is because Shaun '''is''' Lil' Jack.]]
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* SirSwearsALot: Huitzi and Melody swear a lot more than the other competitors.
* SwordAndSorcerer: Jack and Lil' Jack, Huitzi and Akeyra.
* SymbolSwearing: Used [[SirSwearsalot frequently]] by Melody and a bit less frequently by Huitzi. Bonus points for Huitzi's having Aztec symbols.
* SwordAndSorcerer: Jack and Lil' Jack, Huitzi and Akeyra.
* SymbolSwearing: Used [[SirSwearsalot frequently]] by Melody and a bit less frequently by Huitzi. Bonus points for Huitzi's having Aztec symbols.
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* VictoriasSecretCompartment: At one point, Melody stores Semblance's Soul Coin in her cleavage. Turned out to be a good idea, because selfish Lil' Jack decided to nab the rest from her and use them in a spell.
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* VoiceOfTheLegion: Ragdoll. However, he isn't evil.
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* TearsOfBlood: Not exactly blood, but Ragdoll cries the weird black stuff that he's made of when he's sad or angry.
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* AnimalisticAbomination: Anxiety. Good god, Anxiety. It looks like a giant worm with a human torso and a wolf's skull for its head.
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* AnimalisticAbomination: Anxiety. Good god, Anxiety. It looks like a giant worm with a human torso and a wolf's skull for its head. And since he/she's part of a TerribleTrio, her "brothers" Sorrow and Anger can also be considered these.
* BadassNormal: Huitzi is one of two petitioners without some kind of technological or supernatural power and he knows how to kick ass. Leona on the other hand is [[SubvertedTrope very hesitant to fight]].
* BadassNormal: Huitzi is one of two petitioners without some kind of technological or supernatural power and he knows how to kick ass. Leona on the other hand is [[SubvertedTrope very hesitant to fight]].
** There's also Semblance (A cyborg) versus Keeno (A guy with a shadow demon sealed within).
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* TheQuietOne: Out of all the characters that can talk, Semblance is the one who converses the least.
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* TheQuietOne: Out of all the characters that can talk, Semblance is the one character who converses the least.least. Even Anxiety talks more often if Illas is counted.
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* TerribleTrio: Anxiety, Sorrow and Anger. The Porter decides to send Anxiety first, and later sends the other two when Anxiety is defeated by Huitzi.
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* TheStoic: Semblance.
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* DemonicPossession: Various kinds:
** Keeno has a demon sealed within his body. Unlike many examples, Keeno is in control of it and not the other way around.
** Evan was killed by a Grell (a negative energy-eating demon) and it merged with him instead of eating his soul. [[TwoBeingsOneBody Both sides have separate minds]].
** Later on, Lil' Jack tries to use Melody's gathered soul coins to bring back Jack. Although Jack is resistant to possession, it doesn't save him from being possessed by the Nine.
** Keeno has a demon sealed within his body. Unlike many examples, Keeno is in control of it and not the other way around.
** Evan was killed by a Grell (a negative energy-eating demon) and it merged with him instead of eating his soul. [[TwoBeingsOneBody Both sides have separate minds]].
** Later on, Lil' Jack tries to use Melody's gathered soul coins to bring back Jack. Although Jack is resistant to possession, it doesn't save him from being possessed by the Nine.
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* TwoBeingsOneBody: Evan, who has a Grell demon fused to him.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Almost all the petitioners have one to varying degrees of intensity. This is why they are here in the Burning Avalon tournament.
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* MeaningfulName: Melody Fasola comes from a family of MagicMusic users.
** Lucifer has the power of Satan in his right arm.
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* MeaningfulName: Melody Fasola comes from a family of MagicMusic users.
** Lucifer has the power of Satan in his right arm.
* MindScrew: Whatever unintelligible stuff goes through Ragdoll's mind is left to the reader's imagination. Heck, most of his comic entries contain copious amounts of it.
** Lucifer has the power of Satan in his right arm.
* MindScrew: Whatever unintelligible stuff goes through Ragdoll's mind is left to the reader's imagination. Heck, most of his comic entries contain copious amounts of it.
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* CrossoverCosmology: The land of the dead contains underworlds from different religions and mythologies. We have places like [[{{Zoroastrianism}} The Chinvat Bridge]], the [[ChineseMythology Sanzu River]], [[GreekMythology Tartarus]], The WorldTree, etc. [[UsefulNotes/{{Islam}} Jannah]] is also mentioned although not visited.
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* CrossoverCosmology: The land of the dead contains underworlds from different religions and mythologies. We have places like [[{{Zoroastrianism}} The Chinvat Bridge]], the [[ChineseMythology Sanzu River]], [[GreekMythology Tartarus]], The WorldTree, etc. [[UsefulNotes/{{Islam}} Jannah]] is also mentioned although not visited.Jannah]], The WorldTree, etc.
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* ActionGirl: Melody.
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* ActionGirl: Melody.Melody and Sada. Sono relies more on stalling, allowing her curse Apnea to drain her foe's energy.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality:
** Dretos. As an otherworldy entity he has little understanding of things like good or evil.
** Ragdoll, who can only feel the emotions of others. His view on things is otherwise... [[MindScrew weird]].
** Dretos. As an otherworldy entity he has little understanding of things like good or evil.
** Ragdoll, who can only feel the emotions of others. His view on things is otherwise... [[MindScrew weird]].
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** Sono was cursed with an curse that constantly drains her energy and makes her feel sleepy... but if an opponent is nearby, it drains ''their'' energy instead and [[LifeDrain passes it to her]].
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** Sono was cursed with an curse that constantly drains her energy vitality and makes her feel sleepy... tired... but if an opponent is nearby, it drains ''their'' energy instead and [[LifeDrain passes it to her]].her]].
* {{Curse}}: Sono is cursed with an energy-draining curse that takes a physical form known as Apnea. [[CursedWithAwesome However]], it can drain the energy of ''others'' and pass the energy to Sono.
* {{Curse}}: Sono is cursed with an energy-draining curse that takes a physical form known as Apnea. [[CursedWithAwesome However]], it can drain the energy of ''others'' and pass the energy to Sono.
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* DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: After Lil' Jack loses his Soul Coins to Melody, Shaun explains to Jack about what will happen, then unmasks. It turns out that [[TheReveal Shaun IS Lil' Jack]] after a soul reconstruction.]]
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* DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: After Lil' Jack loses his Soul Coins to Melody, Shaun explains to Lil' Jack about what will happen, then unmasks. It turns out that [[TheReveal Shaun IS Lil' Jack]] after a soul reconstruction.]]
* EvilBrit: Lil' Jack isn't really evil (he's just a kid!), but is ''very'' selfish, spoiled, cocky and borderline sociopathic.
* ManySpiritsInsideOfOne: Ragdoll is a patchwork of spirit parts. Dretos is a being partially merged with spirits stored inside him.
* TheUnintelligible: Ragdoll tends to speak in weird garbled sentences. He ''can'' speak normal language, however.
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* VillainProtagonist: Dretos and Anxiety.
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* VillainProtagonist: Dretos and Anxiety.Anxiety.
* YourMindMakesItReal: Dretos' illusions can cause physical damage as if they were real, once the victim is unable to discern between illusion and reality.
* YourMindMakesItReal: Dretos' illusions can cause physical damage as if they were real, once the victim is unable to discern between illusion and reality.
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* DeusExMachina: The 16 soul coins [[spoiler: trap the Nine inside them]].
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* DeusExMachina: The 16 soul coins [[spoiler: trap the Nine inside them]].
* TheEmpath: Ragdoll, who can only feel the emotions of those around him.
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* DeusExMachina: The 16 soul coins DramaticUnmask: [[spoiler: trap the Nine inside them]].
After Lil' Jack loses his Soul Coins to Melody, Shaun explains to Jack about what will happen, then unmasks. It turns out that [[TheReveal Shaun IS Lil' Jack]] after a soul reconstruction.]]
* TheEmpath: Ragdoll,who can whose only emotions he can feel are the emotions of those around him.
* TheEmpath: Ragdoll,
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* BreakoutCharacter: [[TheWoobie Ragdoll]], [[FreakyIsCool Anxiety]] and Huitzi (partially because he's Unknown-Person's OC, like [[LawOfTalos Karl]]).
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Ragdoll, Anxiety and Huitzi.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even demons dislike Dretos' methods of MindRape.
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* CrossoverCosmology: The land of the dead contains underworlds from different religions and mythologies. We have places like [[{{Zoroastrianism}} The Chinvat Bridge]], the [[ChineseMythology Sanzu River]], [[GreekMythology Tartarus]], The WorldTree, etc. [[UsefulNotes/Islam Jannah]] is also mentioned although not visited.
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* CrossoverCosmology: The land of the dead contains underworlds from different religions and mythologies. We have places like [[{{Zoroastrianism}} The Chinvat Bridge]], the [[ChineseMythology Sanzu River]], [[GreekMythology Tartarus]], The WorldTree, etc. [[UsefulNotes/Islam [[UsefulNotes/{{Islam}} Jannah]] is also mentioned although not visited.
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* CoolMask: Both Murdoc and Shaun have one.
** Subverted by Ragdoll, his white "mask" is actually his actual face.
** Subverted by Ragdoll, his white "mask" is actually his actual face.
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* CrossoverCosmology: The land of the dead contains underworlds from different religions and mythologies. We have places like [[{{Zoroastrianism}} The Chinvat Bridge]], the [[ChineseMythology Sanzu River]], [[GreekMythology Tartarus]], The WorldTree, etc.WorldTree, etc. [[UsefulNotes/Islam Jannah]] is also mentioned although not visited.
* EmpathicEnvironment: The souls of the dead, Nidhoggr and other hazards attack a number of contestants mid-battle.
* ExpressiveAccessory: Ragdoll's scarf changes colour depending on how he and his opponent are feeling.
* LivingShadow: Xenos, a demon locked within Keeno. It likes to piss off Keeno and try to make Keeno believe that it's in control.
* NiceHat: Huitzi's Tzoncalli. [[BerserkButton Don't touch it]].
* TheQuietOne: Out of all the characters that can talk, Semblance is the one who converses the least.
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* RedRightHand: Evan and Lucifer.RedRightHand:
** Lucifer's right arm is normally limp until he calls on the power of Satan. Then it becomes this trope.
** Evan's right arm is demonic, as a result of getting merged with a demon.
** Lucifer's right arm is normally limp until he calls on the power of Satan. Then it becomes this trope.
** Evan's right arm is demonic, as a result of getting merged with a demon.
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* CursedWithAwesome:
** Keeno's demon in his arm allows him to use [[CastingAShadow shadow-like powers]] when in a pinch.
** Lucifer's Satan arm. It's normally limp, but when he is desperate, the arm turns into a bony arm in purple aura that can use devastating attacks.
** Evan was merged with a demon when it killed him. This gives him a shapeshifting arm with high offensive powers.
** Sono was cursed with an curse that constantly drains her energy and makes her feel sleepy... but if an opponent is nearby, it drains ''their'' energy instead and [[LifeDrain passes it to her]].
** Keeno's demon in his arm allows him to use [[CastingAShadow shadow-like powers]] when in a pinch.
** Lucifer's Satan arm. It's normally limp, but when he is desperate, the arm turns into a bony arm in purple aura that can use devastating attacks.
** Evan was merged with a demon when it killed him. This gives him a shapeshifting arm with high offensive powers.
** Sono was cursed with an curse that constantly drains her energy and makes her feel sleepy... but if an opponent is nearby, it drains ''their'' energy instead and [[LifeDrain passes it to her]].
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* BerserkButton: Do NOT touch Huitzi's helmet!
** A lot of the petitioners have another- having their soul coin stolen.
** A lot of the petitioners have another- having their soul coin stolen.
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* UseYourHead: Huitzi's headbutt attack on Clay.
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* UseYourHead: Huitzi's headbutt attack on Clay.Clay.
* VillainProtagonist: Dretos and Anxiety.
* VillainProtagonist: Dretos and Anxiety.
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Character sheet can be found [[Characters/BurningAvalon here]].
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* OffWithHisHead: Huitzi cuts off Ragdoll's head.
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* OffWithHisHead: Huitzi cuts off Ragdoll's head. head.
* OocIsSeriousBusiness: Huitzi acts calmly when Ragdoll [[BerserkButton takes off his helmet]]. This is actually part of a ploy to steal Ragdoll's Soul Coin, as Ragdoll copies Huitzi's act of taking something important.
* OocIsSeriousBusiness: Huitzi acts calmly when Ragdoll [[BerserkButton takes off his helmet]]. This is actually part of a ploy to steal Ragdoll's Soul Coin, as Ragdoll copies Huitzi's act of taking something important.
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* TheMagicVersusTechnologyWar: Melody (a cyborg) fights against Lucifer (a guy with {{Satan}}'s power in one arm) and Lil' Jack (a ChildMage). She beats both of them.
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* TheMagicVersusTechnologyWar: Melody (a cyborg) fights against Lucifer (a guy with {{Satan}}'s power in one arm) in her first round and Lil' Jack (a ChildMage).ChildMage) later on. She beats both of them.
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* RockBeatsLaser: Huitzi (an Aztec warrior armed with nothing but a spear) actually manages to beat Melody (a cyborg girl with four sonic-blasting backpack speaker arms) in their first encounter, but this is stopped short by a horde of angry souls.
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** In his first fight, he defeats the augmented gun-wielding soldier Clay.
** In his first fight, he defeats the augmented gun-wielding soldier Clay.
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-->"This *****ed up story has no heroes."
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-->"This *****ed up [[PrecisionFStrike fucked up]] story has no heroes."
