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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: ThoseTwoGuys/ThoseTwoBadGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Below the author's avatar: if (ANNOYED_W_FANS==true) { KILL_CHAR(rand()); }
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* [[BunnyEarsLawyer]]: Reg. She might be a little too obsessed with kobolds, but are you going to argue with someone who can bisect a night creature with a single slice?
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* [[BunnyEarsLawyer]]: BunnyEarsLawyer: Reg. She might be a little too obsessed with kobolds, but are you going to argue with someone who can bisect a night creature with a single slice?
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* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier.
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* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier.soldier.
* [[BunnyEarsLawyer]]: Reg. She might be a little too obsessed with kobolds, but are you going to argue with someone who can bisect a night creature with a single slice?
* [[BunnyEarsLawyer]]: Reg. She might be a little too obsessed with kobolds, but are you going to argue with someone who can bisect a night creature with a single slice?
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* MobileShrubbery: Misty uses a bin in an effort to sneak out of the Mountainhome. It doesn't work.
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* MobileShrubbery: Misty uses a bin in an effort to sneak out of the Mountainhome. It doesn't work.work.
* SacrificialLamb: Darkerdaffodil, the nice elf who saves the migrants from the zombies, becomes friends with Misty and the first person to believe in her dream, is shot on sight, along with the rest of the elves, the moment the migrants set foot in Shielddawn.
* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier.
* SacrificialLamb: Darkerdaffodil, the nice elf who saves the migrants from the zombies, becomes friends with Misty and the first person to believe in her dream, is shot on sight, along with the rest of the elves, the moment the migrants set foot in Shielddawn.
* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The story takes a couple of turns into darker comedy, once along the journey and once at the end. To be expected, from Dwarf Fortress
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* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' donkey has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.
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* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' donkey mule has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.
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* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Misty gets these when Kulet demonstrates how a Nun of Armok offers tribute to the God of Blood.
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* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Misty gets these when Kulet demonstrates Misty's reaction to Kulet's demonstration of how a Nun of Armok offers tribute to the God of Blood.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. May also count as ThoseTwoBadGuys in that their objective is to capture Misty and bring her home, but they aren't evil.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: ThoseTwoBadGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. May also Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as ThoseTwoBadGuys antagonists within the context of the story in that their objective mission is to capture Misty and bring her home, but they aren't evil.home against her will.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]].
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* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. May also count as ThoseTwoBadGuys in that their objective is to capture Misty and bring her home, but they aren't evil.
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* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Misty gets these when Kulet demonstrates how a Nun of Armok offers tribute to the God of Blood.
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* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Misty gets these when Kulet demonstrates how a Nun of Armok offers tribute to the God of Blood.Blood.
* MobileShrubbery: Misty uses a bin in an effort to sneak out of the Mountainhome. It doesn't work.
* MobileShrubbery: Misty uses a bin in an effort to sneak out of the Mountainhome. It doesn't work.
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* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' donkey has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.
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* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' donkey has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.with.
* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Misty gets these when Kulet demonstrates how a Nun of Armok offers tribute to the God of Blood.
* WideEyesAndShrunkenIrises: Misty gets these when Kulet demonstrates how a Nun of Armok offers tribute to the God of Blood.
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* ImagineSpot: Misty parrying the EARTH ITSELF and raking in enough ExperiencePoints to become SUPER MISTY! Nope.
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* ImagineSpot: Misty parrying the EARTH ITSELF and raking in enough ExperiencePoints to become SUPER MISTY! Nope.Nope.
* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' donkey has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.
* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' donkey has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.
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* WindmillCrusader: Reg is absolutely convinced that kobolds are behind everything. EVERYTHING.
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* WindmillCrusader: Reg is absolutely convinced that kobolds are behind everything. EVERYTHING.EVERYTHING.
* LookBehindYou: "Look! Behind you! A KOBOLD!" Reg falls for it easily.
* ImagineSpot: Misty parrying the EARTH ITSELF and raking in enough ExperiencePoints to become SUPER MISTY! Nope.
* LookBehindYou: "Look! Behind you! A KOBOLD!" Reg falls for it easily.
* ImagineSpot: Misty parrying the EARTH ITSELF and raking in enough ExperiencePoints to become SUPER MISTY! Nope.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: Misty's parents died in the Great Elf-Dwarf War, and signs of the war show up from time to time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: Misty's biological parents died in the Great Elf-Dwarf War, and signs of the war show up from time to time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: Signs of the great Elf-Dwarf War show up from time to time, the elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: Signs of Misty's parents died in the great Great Elf-Dwarf War War, and signs of the war show up from time to time, the time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg]].
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* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg]].Reg Pashmad]].
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* BadLiar: It isn't a good idea to use an order from the mayor as an excuse when talking to the mayor himself.
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* BadLiar: It isn't a good idea to use an order from the mayor as an excuse when talking to the mayor himself.himself.
* WindmillCrusader: Reg is absolutely convinced that kobolds are behind everything. EVERYTHING.
* WindmillCrusader: Reg is absolutely convinced that kobolds are behind everything. EVERYTHING.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: While the races get along all right, it's clear that they don't see eye-to-eye. The Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: While Signs of the races get along all right, it's clear that they don't see eye-to-eye. The great Elf-Dwarf War show up from time to time, the elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'.things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together.
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* ExactWords: Misty is forbidden from opening her door... but not from deconstructing a nearby wall and escaping through the adjacent room.
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* ExactWords: Misty is forbidden from opening her door... but not from deconstructing a nearby wall and escaping through the adjacent room.room.
* BadLiar: It isn't a good idea to use an order from the mayor as an excuse when talking to the mayor himself.
* BadLiar: It isn't a good idea to use an order from the mayor as an excuse when talking to the mayor himself.
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* GreenThumb: Flowerplucker the elvish druid.
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* GreenThumb: Flowerplucker the elvish druid.druid.
* ExactWords: Misty is forbidden from opening her door... but not from deconstructing a nearby wall and escaping through the adjacent room.
* ExactWords: Misty is forbidden from opening her door... but not from deconstructing a nearby wall and escaping through the adjacent room.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg]].
* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg]].
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* ElvesVsDwarves: While the races get along all right, it's clear that they don't see eye-to-eye. The Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last, and presumably the lowliest last of Armok's creations.
creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'.
* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader RecruitReg]].Reg]].
* GreenThumb: Flowerplucker the elvish druid.
* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit
* GreenThumb: Flowerplucker the elvish druid.
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* Tsundere: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]].
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* Tsundere: {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]].
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* Tsundere: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the elf.
* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and [[{{Cloudcuccolander}} Recruit Reg]].
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* Tsundere: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the elf.
[[InterspeciesRomance elf]].
* ElvesVsDwarves: While the races get along all right, it's clear that they don't see eye-to-eye. The Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last, and presumably the lowliest of Armok's creations.
* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and[[{{Cloudcuccolander}} [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg]].
* ElvesVsDwarves: While the races get along all right, it's clear that they don't see eye-to-eye. The Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last, and presumably the lowliest of Armok's creations.
* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and
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* Tsundere: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the elf.
* ThoseTwoGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Holt]] and [[CloudCuccolander Recruit Reg]].
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* ShelteredAristocrat: Misty, possibly. [[spoiler: she was raised by the Baron, after all.]]
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* ShelteredAristocrat: Misty, possibly. [[spoiler: she was raised by the Baron, Duke, after all.]]
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[[http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=136384.0 Can be found here]]
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A DwarfFortress tale in the style of MSPA, written by [=evictedSaint=], about a young dwarf girl who has recently come of age and is ready to pursue her life-long goal of becoming The Greatest Cheesemaker ''Ever.'' That is, if everyone in her home fort wasn't so against it. So, she must sneak away and set off with the next group of migrants to the mighty fortress of ShieldDawn. After all, there must be a place for a cheesemaker in such a grand hall, right?
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!!This story provides examples of:
* BigDamnHeroes: The elven party came just in time for poor Misty
* BlessedAreTheCheesemakers: Literally, considering Misty's interpretation of Cowsea
* ComingOfAgeStory
* NunsAreSpooky: Especially nuns of ''Armok.''
* ShelteredAristocrat: Misty, possibly. [[spoiler: she was raised by the Baron, after all.]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:Gods, your dad is such an ass.]]
* TheWorfEffect: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith, found out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
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!!This story provides examples of:
* BigDamnHeroes: The elven party came just in time for poor Misty
* BlessedAreTheCheesemakers: Literally, considering Misty's interpretation of Cowsea
* ComingOfAgeStory
* NunsAreSpooky: Especially nuns of ''Armok.''
* ShelteredAristocrat: Misty, possibly. [[spoiler: she was raised by the Baron, after all.]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:Gods, your dad is such an ass.]]
* TheWorfEffect: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith, found out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
