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** The vorpal rat is explicitly described like the rabbit from ''Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail''. It even has the rabbit's deadly pouncing attack, and is especially effective against the clockword knights.
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** The vorpal rat is explicitly described like the rabbit from ''Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail''. It even has the rabbit's deadly pouncing attack, and is especially effective against the clockword clockwork knights.
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* HowlingToTheNight: [[AvertedTrope Averted]], as the wolves howl to call for ''more'' wolves, not to tell time or set the mood.
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* {{Stripperific}}: The first female summon has an armour of sorts, which of course includes very low neckline, ZettaiRyouiki and BareYourMidriff. Then you get another female summon, who just has a brown bikini and high-heeled boots. And the outfit on the flighty barmaid [=McRary=] is hilariously ridiculous, especially the shoes. It all fits the world, though.
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* {{Stripperific}}: The first female summon has an armour of sorts, which of course includes very low neckline, ZettaiRyouiki neckline and BareYourMidriff.ZettaiRyouiki. Then you get another female summon, who just has a brown bikini and high-heeled boots. And the outfit on the flighty barmaid [=McRary=] is hilariously ridiculous, especially the shoes. It all fits the world, though.
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* AssholeVictim: The Renard Brothers are major jerks who send the Bard on a wild goose chase to take money from people when ''they'' owe it, and show themselves to be {{Dirt Coward}}s when threatened by somebody capable of backing it up, so it's quite cathartic if you decide to summon the Knocker right in front of them, which gets a special cutscene where it provides some "payback" for their "quest".
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* AssholeVictim: The Renard Brothers are major jerks who send the Bard on a wild goose chase to take money from people when ''they'' owe it, and show themselves to be {{Dirt {{Dirty Coward}}s when threatened by somebody capable of backing it up, so it's quite cathartic if you decide to summon the Knocker right in front of them, which gets a special cutscene where it provides some "payback" for their "quest".
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Fnarf loves letting loose with preponderously peppered phrases. Following the Bard Felling the fiend, he hears himself [[GotMeDoingIt reluctantly responding]] in a similar syntax.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Fnarf loves letting loose with preponderously peppered phrases. Following the Bard Felling felling the fiend, he hears himself [[GotMeDoingIt reluctantly responding]] in a similar syntax.
